The Great Song’s Martial Marquis

You're getting better and better! I hope more people will see this. Keep it up!

What? You're permanently banned just because I said your history knowledge is poor? Take a closer look at the actual circumstances of Cao Rui's deathbed in history. Don't you know whether Sima Yi was really as exaggerated as you say? It's ridiculous that the author personally controls the comments, not even allowing the truth to be spoken?

The author's writing is good, the plot development and character descriptions are also good, but it's too wordy and there's too much dialogue, which greatly affects the reading experience. Could you please reduce the amount of dialogue, write the important dialogues in more detail, and omit some dialogues?

I just read the first few chapters, and he's such a show-off.

I want to know what happened to those four taels of silver.