Douluo Dalu: The God of War

The author of this book actually did not lick Tang San, he just chose this path to practice and was not very close to Tang San. Have you ever seen the protagonist help him for no reason from beginning to end? At the same time, he did not have any enemies with Wuhun Palace, and was neutral at most. And do you have any misunderstanding about the meaning of licking? Later on, he may fall out with Tang San. If you want to know some spoilers, please join the book club. It is true that I followed the group in the early stage, but I didn't look at the logic of following the group. And even if I followed the group, didn't the author write new ideas? If you really can't stand it, then leave quietly. You can make suggestions, but don't make a presence known. The book is not meant to satisfy your taste alone. (I just can't stand the posts posted by those people)

What the author said about Xuantian Kung being restricted by the Douluo World should be true. In the extra story of the Third Young Master of the Tang Family, it is said that Tang San became a master in less than 10 years after he obtained the Xuantian Treasure Record. He was not even 30 when he traveled through time. It should be that the training speed has been reduced, but the characteristic of endless life is still there. It can be seen from the competition with Meng Yiran. However, in addition to the speed of internal training, the other martial arts are really strong and can ensure that Tang San is invincible at the same level.

I think Devil Fruits are useless. They are not particularly powerful. If you eat them, you will have an extra weakness. Moreover, the appearance of Devil Fruits in Douluo World is outrageous and cannot be explained by force.

The protagonist makes his fortune by making candied haws on a stick 😅 Candied haws on a stick has little technical content, and Douluo Dalu has no patents, so it can be imitated casually.

It's so pitiful. It obviously feels good, but why does it feel like no one is watching it? I hope the author doesn't go to the palace.

I would like to make some suggestions: You can change the beginning and change Tang San who delivers food to Old Jack. Tang San, who studies the Tang Sect martial arts every day, probably won't have much time to deliver food to you. What's more, his family is really poor and impoverished. Maybe Tang San really has no choice but to succeed (just kidding). It's impossible for Tang San's father to bring you anything. I feel that the rice porridge he drinks is no different from the rice water he drinks. It may not even be as fragrant as the rice water. His family is like that. Why are you so embarrassed to write and bring you something to eat? , Of course, the protagonist's family is not the same as theirs, I'm a little over the top, and the details still need to be changed. (In fact, most readers don't like to read Douluo with their brains, but if we don't read it with our brains, it doesn't mean we have no brains.) You have to remember this sentence. Most authors have unsubscribed countless times just because they did not understand this sentence.

The name of Yaojiang is too funny And it's too popular

I feel like it has nothing to do with devil fruits. It just reflects the Tiger Soul Sword.

The protagonist makes a fuss at every turn and talks to himself about everything. Aren't you afraid that others or the world will know that you are the one who seizes the body?

What you wrote is not interesting at all, but it's a magic weapon. I saw that there was just one more brother and sister with Tang San and the others.