The Big Shot Starts by Grinding Achievements

First of all, let me talk about the key points. This book is currently in the recommendation period. I hope readers who like it can support it every day and help me get through the difficult initial stage of recommendation. Investment, recommendation votes, comments, and rewards are all love. Then explain some of the settings of the book: time setting, not the real timeline, the timeline is in the past, a few years ago, of course, it must be a parallel world; plot setting, because I plan to advance the plot according to the choices made by the characters, so the plot will sometimes be unreasonable, I will try to avoid it;... I will add more in the future. Finally, the group number is included in the book. If you want to join the group, you can look for it. Tip: KouKou. I discovered that this can be re-edited. If I had known earlier, I would not have commented further.

Starting from Chapter 217, I have been fighting against Changsheng, and I have been fighting against Changsheng until now. The content is getting worse and worse. Do you feel that once the results are achieved, it will be difficult to write later. What does this have to do with the title of the book? Wouldn't it be nice to change the name to How to Make a Potion of Immortality Off topic, big brother

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The full text is as follows ~ Exam ~ Slap in the face ~ Shocked Exam ~ Slap in the face ~ Shocked Exam ~ Slap in the face ~ Shocked Exam ~ Slap in the face ~ Shocked Exam ~ Slap in the face ~ Shocked End

Everything up to this point is fine. It doesn't matter if it's a little confusing. 62 Has to have an inexplicable plot. You wrote that you don't want to fall in love. And you still have to be ambiguous? Why do you have to write about women's pretentious plots?

It's too bland and not exciting. The protagonist is like an old monk who has seen through the world. Although there is nothing sinister about it, there is no desire to read on.

The character Cheng Xiaoguo is a bit annoying. Didn't the author write it based on the results?

I am Shennong, I have tried hundreds of poisons without dying, and I despise the poisons in the world. Now, Nong Guan's book has returned. Every time I think about the medicinal properties of this book, I feel very tight in my chest. I know Nong underestimates the greatness of the world, and this book can harm Nong's life. Fortunately, farmers can resist this poison for a while, so I wrote this book to tell all fellow Taoists: Let it go and let it go as soon as possible. Burning incense to comfort the farmers is enough.

The original idea was quite good, but the important female character Su Yin who was well described in the early stage left the show inexplicably, and an unflattering character Cheng Xiaoguo was added. I couldn't get the point that the author wanted to express, so I quit.

I don't mean to criticize you, but I've ordered all of your books. It's good, but not as good as Demon Learning System. But that book is over, and now I'm going to follow your book.