I Want to Marry the Heroine!

The writing is very good, but I suggest you write more about the interaction with the female protagonist. Regarding the male protagonist writing novels, and the male protagonist's interaction with readers in the novel, it is better to simplify it as much as possible.

Later, I was working on the novel, but I persuaded me to quit. How about changing the heroine to Mantis? Goodbye👋

Did the author poke holes in the advertising nest...

[Overall good] [Personal opinion, don't criticize if you don't like it] After reading it all (up to Chapter 070), I have some thoughts: 1. I found this book through a big wave. What attracted me at first was the title of the book, but now that I see it, I feel that it is a little off track. The novel takes up a huge part. Although the overall feeling is really good, it is off topic after all, which makes me unable to eat dog food, which is very annoyingòᆺó. 2. There is still little description of the heroine Mengmeng. At present, we only know that she practices Taekwondo; she may be writing novels (maybe she is the book friend called "come to read novels"); I originally thought she was the granddaughter of Mr. Wen, but it turned out that she seemed to be just an admirer; and, is she very rich? ? ? . It's obviously a book that's a bit of a joke, so why is there so little description of the heroine? Of course, the daily life with the heroine is quite warm and seems very comfortable. 3. Regarding Yu Shishi, after Yu Shishi appeared for the first time, a supporting character with a name suddenly appeared + strange encounters. It can be said that she will definitely appear next to the protagonist in the future. Coupled with her relatively out-of-the-box personality, she is either a harem or a best friend. When Yu Shishi was assigned to the same class, what she did at the beginning made me almost put her in the best friend position (I defaulted to a single female protagonist), but then the description of the mall made me doubt whether it was a harem story, and what I said on QQ after I got home made me even more confused. A bold guess: Yu Shishi doesn't like the male protagonist. She always wants to develop a relationship with the male protagonist because her parents have cared less about her after their careers became prosperous and she had a strange encounter with the male protagonist. In the end, she plays the role of a best friend who wants to compete with the male protagonist for his dream. Overall, it's pretty good, keep it up! I hope that one day you can successfully receive goods like yourself in the novel!

Don't fix so much on what you wrote in the novel, you can just take it over.

Kuoyi

How beautiful it is

It's still watchable, I hope it won't be like "I Really Don't Want to Be Reborn" in the future

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

The writing is very nice, keep it up!

Seeing as you have written all the chapters in your novel, you might as well reduce the chapters in your novel.

Teacher Sun's writing is quite good, and the characterization is very good.

I thought it was going to be over, I was shocked

As expected... See you again if we are destined

The author is great... This novel should undoubtedly have a single female protagonist, right? Of course, I can accept that a book like that would have a female protagonist, but there are too few successful books like that. . If a student's daily novel like this needs to be written with two female protagonists, the male protagonist must have strong emotional intelligence and ability to do it. I think the range of abilities of the male protagonist in this book is limited to the single female protagonist, unless the second female protagonist is... Well... You know... Such a second female protagonist is good for Shuangwen, but it is not suitable for your book. . So I hope you don't keep up with each other. When the time comes, the second female lead will not write well but will break the book... As for now, I think it is still very good! Come on!