One Piece: Krieg’s Quest to Become the World’s Strongest

I finally found a subject I like, but I can't understand the things the author added! For someone like me who has only watched Naruto and Pirates, I have no love for anime!

Summoning Joan of Arc was a failure. Joan of Arc is the most annoying person with a Madonna type and a stubborn temper. Who listens to whom when there is disagreement? Should I call my subordinates or my father?

Violet Evergarden

It's okay, the writing is quite powerful. It is recommended not to have too many character cards. Design the occupations needed on the ship and carefully consider the candidates. In addition to combat units, it is best to have no more than three main characters in other functions. For example, doctors and chefs should have two or three leaders, and others can have assistants, abcd, and passers-by. Luffy's reduction of personnel is purely because they have no territory and only take risks, so they have limited resources to streamline. If the protagonist has a character card, it is bound to be impossible to simplify it too much. Just a personal opinion.

Goose, to be honest, this kind of soul traveling to become a relatively disgusting villain supporting role is not interesting to me. The character is there, and I have no desire to watch it.

When I think of Crick's appearance, I don't want to read it. It's not good to write about Crick.

It's a bit contrived. It was originally well written, but summoning characters in a blunt manner is really forcing them to retreat?

Pirate World is just Pirate World, don't make a messy setting, not to mention ruining the original work, it's so uncomfortable to watch.

It's so boring. Every summon is not a skill but it lasts for a long time. Forcibly integrating into the world comes with additional tasks. Are you writing an introduction? It's really uncomfortable to see how a scummy place like the East China Sea can be so watery.

For a system story, I personally feel that it can be removed by giving the protagonist an awesome physique and talent at the beginning, and letting the protagonist do the rest by himself.