Rebuilding Ashina in Hokage

I saw the latest chapter. The fusion of the Naruto system and the Wolf system, the writing style and rationality are above the normal level. There are two reasons for poor performance: 1. The entry point of the writing. If the author does a competitive product survey on Qidian Naruto, he will find that mainstream Naruto fans all start in the Ninja School. The reason is that the Ninja School stage is relatively peaceful, and the protagonist can slowly explore his golden finger power system. The exploration of the power system is the core element of Naruto fan fiction. What readers are looking forward to is the gradual upgrade. The protagonist of this book seems to be a Jonin at the beginning... It's not that it can't be written, it can only be said that the commercial aspect fell behind from the beginning. 2. The Wolf's power system is introduced too little. Unspoken Wolf, even the more famous games such as Dark Souls, Fallout, Laogun, Minecraft, etc., Are not well-known among the mainstream groups of Qidian... Naruto is one of the three major migrant manga. The mainstream audience is not a senior acg otaku, but the vast majority are people who rarely watch Japanese anime (let alone play games). It is very counterintuitive, but it is a fact. So the author assumes that all readers have played Wolf, so there is too little description of Wolf's power system, which leads to reading barriers for some readers. When I looked at Goldfinger, I couldn't figure it out. What is Wei's name? I don't know, I gave up. There is no room for reasoning. If you could go back in time, I suggest the author write about the beginning of Ninja School, which would be easier to write. Then it is assumed that the protagonist has never played Wolf, and more words are used to introduce cheats to the protagonist (reader), which can effectively improve the performance... Of course, people cannot go back to the past. What can I do if I have already written it? The above two points are not bad points. I suggest the author write well according to the original idea. Don't worry too much about the manuscript fee for this book (recommendation resources may be limited in the future). First make sure to complete the book, build a full readership, etc., Accumulate a wave of reader popularity, and the next book will be improved. Eunuchs hurt one's character, and changing one's account to clear one's popularity are not good choices.

Obito will never be cleansed, I won't deny it. But there is no need to persecute Obito during the Ninja Team period 🤔 The future cannot change the present. At this time, he is still a kind boy. I can understand the protagonist not saving him, and I don't think it's wrong. (Personal opinion, don't spray if you don't like it😌😌😌)

Why do you still want to become a ninja with such a powerful inheritance? You must know that most people in the ninja world are civilians and do not have the qualifications to become ninjas You have already cheated and you still want to go to Konoha. You know most of the plots there. What else are you going to do? You can't write your own story in the background of the Naruto world and have to follow the main line Naruto Riten, starts from Konoha, starts from ninja, starts from blood succession limit, starts from genius, but he will never start from a wandering civilian with no plug-ins and no ninja qualifications.

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The protagonist can channel everything about Sekiro, but can he channel Sekiro modifiers? ? ? After all, I am Ashina Castle who has 100 times the HP, 10 times the damage, and unlimited props to crush me.

I feel that with Sekiro's power system, the only way to become Hokage is to get beaten. And to build Ashina Castle, shouldn't the protagonist's last name be Ashina? After all, Ashina is not the ground, but a city named after the Ashina family. It feels strange that the protagonist is not named Ashina, but he wants to establish Ashina.

Support a wave of support hehe, it looks very good. I went straight into the trap today and played iron for two hours in the afternoon. I was very happy.

The main reason for the poor performance is that in the beginning of Konoha, there are cheats and I still have to stay in Konoha to hang out. I basically have nothing to see, and I have to hide my eyes even if I want to grab Kamui.

Please change it, there was a mistake at the beginning. The Crow Clone was developed by Itachi and Shisui. When did it become the Uchiha Secret Technique?

Let's talk about something interesting, there is no one in the world who has nothing in common