Summoning Yoshikage Kira: Assassinating Iron Man from the Start

You have ideas, but your writing is lacking. And you, a behind-the-scenes figure, are actively stepping into the limelight, especially the section on the space carrier—it's incredibly awkward. You have the ideas, yet you take the lead yourself; it feels like using a cannon to kill a mosquito.

Behind-the-scenes drama, with the protagonist personally involved, leads to a dragging plot and an inability to perfectly control the summoned villains. If you don't have the writing skills, don't go for those flashy gimmicks; it's like they're just rubbing salt in the wound.

If you want to make your mark behind the scenes, you need to have excellent writing skills, or you need to use an alias. If your writing isn't good and you don't use an alias, 70% of the time you'll be revealing your flaws.

Behind-the-scenes writing: The protagonist should absolutely, positively not get involved personally. They can occasionally show off and sell information, but they absolutely cannot participate in major events themselves—that would be incredibly foolish.

I'm just an office worker passing by.

The biggest taboo in behind-the-scenes manipulation is personally getting involved; in reality, you can just let the summoned villains run rampant. They went too far, so they should have taken the time to deal with them. Instead, they had to create this nonsensical, illogical organization; it was incredibly awkward to watch.

Two-faced

I don't think the fact that you can't control your summoned creatures is a big deal; in fact, I think it's quite enjoyable. I remember the first novel I read that was about DNF and Warcraft elements. The protagonist projected a dungeon into someone who was deceiving the government to help him defeat certain bosses, and then he would get the rewards. I forgot the name of that novel; it must have been several years ago.

The writing style is poor, but it's okay for passing the time. The villains and summoned characters lack depth and nuance.

If the main character had less screen time, the book's ratings would be much better.