Disciple, Don’t Blame Your Master for Being Ruthless! Heh Heh Heh
徒儿休怪师父心狠手辣桀桀桀
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 718k Words
- Genre
- Xianxia
- Subgenre
- Fantasy Cultivation
- Updated
- 5y ago
- English
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293Chapters
1.5kRecommendations
6.4kFans
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Looking forward to the apprentice jockey, Miezu
Will this work?
I actually think Yan Lei is more like a girl? Or maybe she has a boy's heart. Shipping a queen x loyal dog is pretty cool, but whether she's male or female doesn't affect the reading experience. The book leans towards lighthearted humor, so just enjoy it and have fun!
Not bad. Personally, however, I didn't quite feel immersed in the story. The dialogue and character interactions, in particular, didn't feel very realistic. Is it because the language is more like that of a comic book? One idea. Perhaps we can push it a bit more to the extreme. The structure of the relationships between the characters, as it stands, isn't absurd enough.
This is the true master!
The protagonist's gender is currently unclear; the introduction describes her as fair-skinned and beautiful. Will it later turn her into a woman and be taken into her apprentice's harem?! If that's the case, I suggest you move the book to a female-oriented platform...
I read two chapters. I won't say anything more. At least it's not that simplistic. I don't even know who the main character is. If it's that Yan Lei guy or his disciple, goodbye. I've seen worse writing than yours. Those characters have much better character development. I could read dozens of chapters with those. With your character development, two chapters are already boring. The writing is alright, it creates vivid imagery.
Oh, this is supposed to be BL (Boys' Love)?
I can't stand it. The protagonist has neither a cheat code nor any talent, and yet the author tramples on his dignity every day. The immersion experience is terrible. The whole story is about being humiliated. The supporting characters have too much screen time, and the protagonist barely gets any chapters. When he does appear, he's constantly being humiliated. So where's the excitement?
Author, come and listen to me.
The book is good; the story flows smoothly, and the writing is excellent. I won't say anything more. Let's get to the point. The biggest problem with this story is the protagonist. From the beginning, we know that Yan Lei is definitely the protagonist, right? But frankly, Yan Lei doesn't have much screen time, and she's always unlucky from the moment she appears, or on a path of misfortune.