Slashing the Moon

Online Game Trilogy: Piracy Myth, Dominate the World, Unparalleled, God in the Hearts of Online Game Readers.

The novels written by Lost Leaf can be roughly divided into two parts: the plot in the game and the plot in reality. I personally think that he is better at writing game plots, and his writing of real-life plots is relatively simple, because the online game trilogy he became famous in before probably also includes the Dragon Slayer. There are overwhelmingly more dramatic plots than real plots, so everyone thinks they are very interesting. Later, he planned to transform from the realm of refining gods to fighting gods. He wanted to combine games and reality to create a "real world like a game." However, his ability was limited and he failed. Personally, I think it may be because of him. Even if there are some elements of cultivation in the game plots in previous novels, if they are compared to a real fantasy world, there will be many logical loopholes in them. But after all, this is just a game. Settings that are unreasonable in reality are reasonable in the game, and the game cannot be the same. Reality is the same, so everyone can accept some shortcomings. However, the novels he wrote are like "writing the real world as a game." This gives me a sense of fragmentation. Even if you tell me in the setting that this is a real world, in my opinion, it feels like it is just a game, and the sense of immersion is very low. In his previous famous works, in addition to the protagonist, there are many, many players. The plot is not driven by the protagonist alone. They also have a lot of roles in the game, which is a bit like a group drama. The climax of the plot is mainly in the large-scale dungeons in the game, territorial competition, guild wars, and world competitions. In games, national wars, etc., It mainly describes the cooperation or competition between players, which gives people a sense of collaboration and strategizing. However, the novels written by the author after his transformation are very boring. It feels that except for the protagonist, they are all NPCs and there is no player. It is a one-man show of the protagonist. To sum up, the author wanted to write real fantasy novels, but because he had too little experience in writing real-world plots, he could only draw on his previous experience in writing game-world plots. As a result, the novel he wrote was nondescript. It was set in the real world, but it looked like a game. It made people unable to enter the drama and there was no way to substitute it. But if you treat it as a game Look, because the author's previous writing style was biased toward group dramas, when he concentrated the main plot on the protagonist alone, we would find that the plot was very boring, not exciting, and had no climax. To put it simply, it was boring to watch, and there was no desire to continue watching. It meant that it was not pleasing to both sides, and because of this, the popularity was not as good as before. Later, he returned to write two online game novels, but it can be clearly seen that he was weakening the proportion of the game world plot in the novel and strengthening the proportion of the real world plot. My personal guess is that the popularity of the two novels he transitioned to was too low, and it was no longer enough, so he could only come back to write online games. However, he was not willing to rest on his laurels, and still wanted to innovate, so he continued. I continue to hone my writing skills in the real world and want to develop in an all-round way, but it seems to be more difficult now. I read a few newly written novels, and I feel that they don't have the same flavor as before. I just read the first few hundred chapters, and I really can't stand it anymore. Of course, I am not blaming the author. As a reader, I am still very happy to see that he can continue to make progress. I wish the author here to write better and better.

The master of game writing has fallen like this. The Yue Heng trilogy is so beautiful.

My favorite online game novels back then were Lost Leaves, Gravity of Mars, and Thieves in the World

Real or fake? Lost Ye himself? Why are there so few people?

I'm not telling you why your writing has gotten worse over time. I have liked your books before and now that I have recommended you to my friends, I am really disappointed with your current writing level.

Lost Leaf, Yue Heng Trilogy, Slaying the Dragon

The protagonist is a dog licker and wants to start a harem😷You must have some brains, you don't think that we male readers are just like this?

What the hell, what are these settings? After being fucked by the heroine, you go to lick the heroine? I was cut off because my data was too strong and there was no compensation? Just admit it? There are too many flaws. Was it written by me?

Good guy, Zangetsu can go to the starting point and see it.