My Ability to Draw Cards

There is no harm in it. After all, the author is a new author, and the writing style is so immature and so straightforward that I feel a little embarrassed to complain about it. Except for the writing style, which definitely needs to be improved, there are only two big problems for now. Writing a long paragraph, I found that I couldn't avoid criticizing the author if I explained it in detail. . . I thought about it and deleted it. Let me briefly describe what it is. As for the reason, I have to guess and I will have to criticize people. . First, the core of your plot is your animation ability, and the core of your setting is the male protagonist's mentality and pretense. What are you writing now? Secondly, don't write about emotional scenes indiscriminately. If you don't have enough writing skills to write emotional scenes, you can vividly express dog-licking and green tea-bitch. Are you serious about that supporting actress? Thirdly, don't pay too much attention to the comments and accusations of readers, including me, and think about whether the logic is correct and whether the content is interesting. For example, your plot video showing Azi is a good operation. The flaw is that it is not written well, not the ability to expose other people's complaints. Your core setting is to expose your ability to gain fashion points. Azi is just a low-star over-stuck (you won't have to upgrade hard, right?). You can say that this is problematic without even thinking about it carefully (I seriously doubt that you have not carefully thought about the limitations of your subject matter). In reality, a JOJO who is too embarrassed to dare to be fashionable in the second degree in the video shouts famous lines or swings his hands and legs to lift the power of the moon prism to transform! This will be very, very, very interesting. If the plot logic of the video is well thought out and the content is completed in detail, this thing will definitely become one of the biggest highlights of this book. Forget it, I accidentally wrote too much, it's just a pity for this subject matter. . . It's just my random comment, it has no reference or value. Above.

The more I watched, the less I could stand it, and I slipped away.

Could it be that the author is also gay? .

Are you going to use the card that transforms into a beautiful girl? I have been reluctant to replace it.

If you say you want to time travel, just do it. Although I don't really like this kind of time travel directly into other people's bodies. The face is not your face, the body is not your body, and your descendants are not your descendants. Except for your soul, everything else is not yours. You directly said that you were reborn. When you were 17 or 18 years old, you just ignored it and watched it. Why don't you like to write this kind of thing? And that's not the most disgusting thing. The most disgusting thing is that you took over someone else's body and flirted with their girl. This is a bit too much. She is someone's childhood sweetheart. Good guy, just get a package and arrange her to be the heroine. That's awesome!

The card is so useless, it will be gone if you touch it.

It's okay to take a video just after being attacked to expose your current main ability. You have to rely on this to collect energy and pretend to be cool. It also comes with a detailed explanation. . I looked fine all the time and suddenly a bloody throat-sealing pill was stuffed into my mouth, killing me instantly

The author basically works overtime every day. It's 11 o'clock when I finish typing when I get home. There are many typos. I will read them myself, but if there are any omissions, please point them out. Thank you everyone.

After reading the introduction, I immediately thought of Mahou Soju (Magical Girl) (Illya, Nanoha, Madoka, Raising Plan~) Magic Girl Magic Girl Kemp Method Twin Ponytail Transformer (There is also a single ponytail~ Of course, there are transformations with other attributes, but I haven't seen it yet)

I look like 😵

Will there be Saint Seiya cards?

Find a novel with the same name, characters and abilities.