When I Reclaim My Old Homeland

After reading Chapter 46, I can't stand it anymore: 1. Tanhualang, third place in the imperial examination! Both the court and the rebels regarded him as trash. Because there was an assassin in the guest room where Tan Hwa Lang lived, and he was not even given a chance to appeal. He immediately ordered Tan Hwa Lang to be executed three days later. The emperor has never thought about what the teacher who can teach Tanhua Lang would think about this matter, what Tanhua's fellow students would think about it, what Tanhua's previous classmates would think about it, what his teacher's relatives and friends would think about it, and what the entire imperial bureaucracy would think about it. Do you really think that the emperor can do whatever he wants? As for the rebels, they treated the third place in the imperial examination almost like a mentally retarded child, and the leader turned out to be a real princess. 2. When Tan Mansion is a guest, men and women wander around in the yard. Let's not talk about the basic vigilance of the servants. It can always be done by sending someone to guide them. 3. Qingyun Sect, I really don't understand why the protagonist wants to go to Qingyun Sect and become an elder inexplicably. The so-called reason is so far-fetched. Not only does the supporting character lose his wits, but the protagonist also becomes stupid and sweet.

Deliberately creating several rather unpleasant characters, and using such disgusting characters to disgust the protagonist to advance the plot will sooner or later fail.

One moment, the protagonist is written as a counselor, one moment the combat power index is super high, one moment it is a Qi practitioner, one moment it is a Confucianism cultivator, one moment it is a swordsmanship cultivator, and then suddenly a fellow sect brother appears as a rival, one moment a dynasty fights for hegemony, one moment a sect fights, and one moment it becomes a world, what on earth is the protagonist going to do, just look for him as a counselor. Let's conquer the world with a country. If you are a god or have the upper limit of combat power, just level up and fight monsters honestly. The princess and the senior brothers will kill you. At worst, they will flip the table. That princess is still from the previous dynasty. What are you afraid of? What about this dynasty? It is the Princess Fu Guo who always looks for the scene. All the officials in this dynasty are dead? How did you catch it in the first place?

What do you want to write about in this book? At first I thought I was going to fight for hegemony and that I would be a talented person, but in the end I joined the sect in a daze. It's not just a break, but it's really joining, and there's also a plot of infighting within the sect. The main plot of your plot is Zhulu Tianxia. Is this preparing to develop the Qingyun Sect into a court? Or will you lead the sect and find someone to help you after a few hundred chapters? Also, if your writing skills are not good enough, don't write about strategizing. It's very dramatic.

There are too many brother systems. I see that now you have sword cultivation, talisman cultivation and Confucian supernatural powers. To be honest, brother, what you wrote is a bit greedy. There are too many and it is too complicated.

Hey~ Sister Yue'er is on the shelves. The boss has arranged it. See you at the hotel tonight~ 😏😏😏

Since I read the daily introduction novels, I haven't found one that can survive. I guess that most of you can't survive it. Why do you recommend the daily introduction? Because these novels all have unique characteristics and attractive beginnings. Why are you abandoned by everyone? Because the biggest difference between these novels and those popular novels is that logical contradictions will always make you fall out of the atmosphere of the novel, which is fatal. Although the novels of great masters also have these problems, there are fewer of them! When writing a novel, you must write smoother and smoother as you write. You cannot leave too many bumps and bruises, making it unbearable.

If the author's writing skills are not the best, don't forcefully write about strategies and the like. There should be a little bit of logic. They are all bosses who look like novices at first glance. It's embarrassing.

Is the author a woman? Isn't it possible for a woman to write such a Qiong Yao-style plot? 🙂

This is a bit embarrassing to write. Since you want to write about the strategist and the talented Wang Zuo, why did you join the Qingyun Sect, which is considered a weak hidden sect? They don't even have the capital to change the pattern of Shiwandashan. Just like the Guigu faction in the bright moon of the Qin Dynasty defeated the powerful Qin State and defeated the weak country that was famous for its swordsmanship instead of its strategy. Didn't the Qingyun Sect see that there was a place that could swallow a hundred thousand mountains? Do you want the protagonist to develop slowly? Also, your own golden finger is to trigger things in order to get rewards. However, you yourself are like a salted fish floating in the wind. You don't feel indifferent, but stupid. . I don't have the capital to settle down, so I don't want to become stronger or hide it. Mr. Qi serves that woman and threatens one or two. In the mountains of 100,000 people, you will be surrounded and suppressed. Can you escape?