When I Reclaim My Old Homeland

I couldn't continue reading after chapter 46. 1. Tan Hualang, ranked third in the imperial examination! Both the court and the rebel army regarded him as a worthless person. Because there was an assassin in the guest room where the third-ranked scholar was staying, he wasn't even given a chance to appeal; he was immediately sentenced to execution in three days.

Intentionally creating several extremely unpleasant characters and using these detestable characters to constantly annoy the protagonist in order to advance the plot will ultimately backfire.

One minute the protagonist is a strategist, the next they're incredibly powerful, then a Qi cultivator, then a Confucian scholar, then a swordsman, and then suddenly a fellow disciple appears as an adversary. One minute it's dynastic power struggles, the next sect conflicts, then it's all about the martial arts world. What is the protagonist even doing?

What are you trying to say about this book? At first, I thought I was on the path to domination, a talent fit for a king, but somehow I ended up joining a sect. It wasn't just a temporary rest stop; they actually joined, and there was even a plot involving internal sect struggles. The problem is that your main plot foreshadows the struggle for supremacy.

There are too many brotherhood systems. I see that you have sword cultivation, talisman cultivation, and Confucian supernatural powers. To be honest, brother, you've written a bit too greedily. There are too many and too messy systems.

Hey~ Yue'er is available now! Master, get her sorted out. See you at the hotel tonight! 😏😏😏

Since I started reading the novels recommended in the daily reading list, I haven't found a single one that has survived. I suspect most people haven't either. Why are these recommended? Because they all have unique features and captivating beginnings. Why are they abandoned? Because the biggest difference between these novels and those popular ones is: logical inconsistencies.

If the author's writing skills aren't up to par, it's best not to force intrigue or schemes. At least include some logic; otherwise, it's just plain embarrassing to read, as it's written by a complete novice.

Is the author a woman? Could someone other than a woman write this kind of melodramatic, romance novel-style plot? 🙂

This is a bit awkwardly written. If you wanted to portray a master strategist and a king-like talent, why join the Qingyun Sect, a supposedly weak and hidden sect? They don't even have the resources to change the landscape of the Ten Thousand Mountains. It's like the Guigu Sect in Qin's Moon, known for its swordsmanship rather than strategy, conquering the powerful Qin and weaker states.