Konoha's Way to Death

The writing is okay, but I feel that the attitude of the adults in the village is a little too much. I feel that all the adults and children in Konoha revolve around a five-year-old child. There is never a shortage of geniuses in Konoha, and geniuses who have not grown up are just genin. You really think the whole world revolves around you.

The writing is quite good. Watching the children fighting and playing around, I also enjoyed watching it. I don't know why, but it suddenly occurred to me that pig's feet were transformed into children by adults. I felt very awkward instantly.

I haven't read the book yet, but the male and female protagonists in your character column are original, so what kind of fan fiction do you write? Can't you just create something original?

I feel like the whole of Konoha is surrounding the protagonist, as if he is gone, what will happen to him. Well

It feels like the whole village is revolving around the protagonist, and he takes himself too seriously. Also, a time traveler actually likes a little girl who is only a few years old?

Do you dare to start by writing about a one-year-old training, a two-year-old shark, and a three-year-old getting married to unify the ninja world, and a group of older children are in love and fighting each other? There is a limit to bullshit.

This substitute technique is as powerful as the power of the heavenly hand 🙂

No wonder there are so few people watching, there is no fun at all, top combat skills can't be learned in front of me, a bunch of mediocre people, what kind of novel is this? YY's wonderful stories, whether heroic, tragic, powerful, LSP, etc., Can always satisfy people's inability to achieve one of them in reality; But most people will never like to feel aggrieved, mediocre, or ordinary. In real life, everyone is ordinary enough, so what do you want in graphic novels?

It's really nb that Liang Cheng can update 6,000 yuan a day like this. I collected it just because of the reputation of the author.

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I haven't read it yet, but the title of the book... I think you are connoting a certain Tang Shenwang

I haven't read it yet, let me complain first, what kind of god are you, Eri Uchiha, you have shocked me for a whole year

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I don't know why, maybe it's because the fan has read too much When I saw the way to death, I thought of Tang 3

Maybe I've read too much about the Dragon Clan. When I see the name Eri, I always think of that little red-haired monster So it's hard for me to get involved in this book and read it carefully Only by forcing myself to ignore the heroine's name can I read this book properly.

If you like Li Huiyi, then write about Dragon Clan.

The heroine's name reminds me of little monster

My youth has no regrets

I haven't read the book yet, so let me make a complaint first. When writing about Naruto, do I need to name someone XX? Who is a normal person to be called person X?

I have no interest at all when I see dead fish eyes.

The author is a big fan of Orochimaru, right? That's alright. I don't have any objections to Orochimaru, but don't you think it's disgusting if you blow him up to the sky and stand shoulder to shoulder with the gods? ? ? ? ?

First, the most important point of Orochimaru's so-called taboo is that he has attacked people in the village. Orochimaru will not care about this. Although it is not mentioned in the original work, Orochimaru is a cold-blooded person. Second, Orochimaru's ninjutsu is disgusting. Although many people respect him, his ninjutsu is disgusting and cannot be loved by too many people. Third, Orochimaru's personality charm is not as high as you think. Many times he has a disgusting face. You can't help but remember his hysterical face when he used the corpse seal in the third generation. And many times he is not that smart, for example, he wants to turn into a gust of wind to drive the stupid and brainless windmill of Sasuke.

The author's writing is good. I would like to recommend the book he wrote. Friends who are book-hungry can take a look. Just click on the avatar. It is non-toxic.

Is there any Naruto novel that has a more mature beginning?

I saw it and saved it

Very well written, good luck to the author💪

The story is good, but the writing is poor. I hope you can finish it well and improve.

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