No One Knows the Game Better Than Me, My Ancestor

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The protagonist has no self-awareness at all, and his behavior is relatively unmeasured. This is the Zhou family, and we can completely ignore his life and death. In my opinion, his state is that of being dependent on others, and he has no self-awareness at all.

The idea is good, but the writing still needs practice. You may not be able to become an ancestor after 125 years. Because some relatives marry later and have children later.

1. I am not a Shennong 2. This book is well written 3. The writing style is immature 4. Very few people read it 5. The subject matter is extremely novel 6. All the authors of the comments seem to be reading it 7. It is a book to relieve boredom 8. I have read it all. I take back what I said before. This book is a good book. If the author works harder, it would be a fairy grass Finally, after reading the first 30 chapters, except for the main character, there is no poisonous point. Don't worry and read it.

Let's be honest, no matter how awesome the real online game is, if the players don't have fun, and if there is no better planning and guidance, they will be spoiled in the end. The protagonist's pull makes me unable to feel his awesomeness.

After reading dozens of chapters, I feel that the subject matter is okay, but the writing of the main and branch plots is a bit messy. The funniest thing is that around chapter 39, there is a plot about pretending to be a slap in the face. Or is the protagonist a guide? This kind of fourth natural disaster novel is better to be written as a behind-the-scenes flow. The protagonist is harvesting leeks from the players behind the scenes, and then the fourth natural disaster destroys, loots and burns in another world. It is hilarious and hilarious. You write it like this, which is a bit discouraging 😥. Is the protagonist trying to make money? Or overthrow another world? At least write it clearly. There are too many plots in the other world, which makes the first few chapters boring for many people. There are also poisonous points that are slapped in the face, and this kind of sandbox novel is the most taboo poisonous point. For example, in the chapter about the Truth Sect, it explains why the protagonist does not trust the sect. You can write that the protagonist is Gou Sheng, who is very cautious, but you also write the whole incident, write that the protagonist is caught and tortured in various ways, and then destroys the sect. With this kind of writing, are you sure you are not poisoning the readers? Also, the mythical beast is very well written. It can be considered an explanation when explaining it as a civilization of seekers, because the most taboo thing about writing about science and technology is the sudden appearance of gods. If you want to write it like this, it's fine, but you have to explain what gods are in your novel. For example, explain that gods are beings with a higher dimension than humans. This is just a metaphor and is for reference only. I am just a reader. You can read this comment or not.

The doomsday star ring is like this.

So far, the shit written in reality is quite good in the game, exceeding expectations, and I don't know how much higher than other daily poison guides.

Divine War Spirit and Medieval War Spirit are exactly the same as Warhammer 40k and Medieval Warhammer (I haven't played it, but I still want waaaaaagh!)

This book is very creative. It feels like watching hard science fiction. I'm talking about the setting, etc., And the writing style is still that of a web novel. This vertical parallel world will hunt other parallel worlds. The setting of the dark side was the first time I saw it, and I was very surprised. Naihe prefers a more relaxed article, just passing by for free.

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

Updated every ten days, updated every ten days

Four NB companies on one earth, zombies, omnics, massacre, different worlds, virtual games, time travel... Author, do you think you are very humorous? Can you control it?

Please tell me what is the civilized message for seekers? No impression at all

The plot is not bad, but the writing and language are very disturbing. Too many exclamation points.

The introduction can be regarded as singing, but I don't know anything else.

Don't you know the author of this activity?

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I read the guide every day, but the update speed is a bit too slow!