I Started as Hokage and Became the Lord of Demons

Things in Naruto are combined with each other. Monster name + material + ability

After reading the latest chapter, I have a suggestion (100) 1. When writing, replace "his body" with Lei Shantai's body. Where the scene is a bit strong, you can use names to deepen the reader's immersion 2. It is recommended that the characters should be described with their appearance and clothing, so that the names can be frequently used to deepen the three-dimensional impression of the readers 3. I have decided that this sentence is too redundant, and I can also change him to the hand seal Kamihira Asahi's hand seals (you have already written it, typo) 4. Nanao can describe it in detail or all the battle scenes can be detailed, such as the severity of the injuries, the number of dense wounds or the approximate length of the wounds, how you feel when the cold wind blows, and Nanao's chakra tail. What did the wind blade attack? Did the tail cut off? Or something like that? What about the confrontation between tailed beast chakra and ninjutsu? None were written. 5. It is best to have the kind of fight that readers cannot guess, tactics, such as matryoshka dolls. When the reader thinks that 2 is going to defeat 1, it is reversed. However, there is no trap that is actually 1. When the reader thinks that the enemy has stepped into 1's trap, it is reversed. In fact, 2 discovered 1's trick and used it to trick him. When the reader thought he was going to fail or die, character 1 actually did not let down his guard and kept alert. He used ninjutsu + detonating talisman + wire array and waited for 2 to kill him if he didn't fall into the trap. (Basic characterization details plus 1-2 chapters of character psychological activity scenes are almost enough) Writing this kind of scene is to express your thoughts after it happens. It is to let readers guess, instead of telling them the answer and then you write it out. Wouldn't it be boring? The lofty ideals or goals can be "thought out" by the protagonist. For example, I want the whole world to be filled with monsters and ghosts, and I want to change the world. 6. Too lazy to fight,,, In general, there is room for improvement in the depiction of battle scenes, and it would be better to guide readers enmmm to think from their perspective. If you are a reader, do you like to finish the chapter at the beginning of the chapter and then rush through the chapter? Or is it full of useful information? Warm reminder - the main character's goals are far-reaching and near-term, please don't take salted fish, this is the ! Ninja World!

I don't know why many interesting books nowadays are not very popular, except for a few. I remember one of them, "I Have a Knowledge Beast", which is obviously smart and intelligent online.

I came here after seeing the guy who divided the tailed beast into a hundred parts.

It's quite good, a rare book. At least it saved me from book shortage for a few hours(๑•̀ㅂ•́)و✧

The explanation of the cause of death of the flying thunder god and the second generation is not quite right. It is said in the anime that the second generation's range of perception is as wide as half of the ninja world. It is unlikely that they died because of the author's explanation😂. I am more inclined to die from the Six Paths Ninja Tool.

There shouldn't be a need for a heroine, right?

I'm speechless. Senju Hashirama is by my side, and we're still related. However, I still think about the senjutsu chakra and sage mode in the three holy places. Can't I ask Senju Hashirama for advice? To abandon the near and seek the far away is to be drunk.

Will the author still update? If you are a eunuch, say something!

I have been sick for the past two days, my head is dizzy, and my writing efficiency is too low. I will recover after a few days.

I like the non-heroine╰(*´`*)╯The author would like to work hard to update╰(*´`*)╯

The author needs to take a good rest. There are already three books I have been following just because I have been diagnosed with an illness due to long-term violence. The author's books are the only books I like now.

Will the author consider going to a world where spells are used to fight back? I feel that the male protagonist's abilities are very suitable for this world, especially it reminds me of Xia You's Night Parade of One Hundred Demons

It was wrong from the beginning. People who like to watch Mugen think your Naruto is too long, and people who like Naruto feel that you are Mugen in the beginning and will be Mugen in the future. As a result, both sides are unhappy.

I feel like the author forgot about the weapon-colored domineering thing.

A very good book, but it was lost due to the author's lack of diligence.

Crowdfunding, crowdfunding, looking forward to ing(◦˙▽˙◦) Forbidden spell name + forbidden spell effect + side effects