Raft Survival at the End of the World

The protagonist is too stupid. He knows that the raft is not safe and has not thought about how to use his abilities to modify it. He is completely counting on Goldfinger to drop a pie for him.

The passive character of Pig's Knuckle is very unpleasant. Sometimes it is really annoying. There is no plan or goal at all.

The prototype is probably a doomsday raft survival game! I remember 🤫🤫 I saw an anchor playing it on Youku Video before. The name of the game seemed to be Liu Lang. It was quite fun. Unfortunately, you had to spend money to play the game, so you couldn't play it for free.

The protagonist is quite stupid. He used a small blade to fight in close quarters, and I was speechless. Then I remembered to use a bow, and returned the iron bow, and practiced it every day. No matter how good you are at practicing, how many arrows can you shoot? I just want to say, when someone is on the 20th or 30th, how many arrows can you shoot? Zhuge Liannu , isn't it fragrant? Just make it out of wood with a string, and it can fire continuously. The crossbow arrow is just a stick. Isn't it easy to make it? We can build a wooden roof, but why can't we build walls? I can't stand it any longer, so I stopped watching it and gave up.

I still like my apocalyptic writing to be a bit darker. After reading a few chapters of this book, it didn't reflect the feeling of the apocalypse at all. It seemed like they were all on vacation.

It would be more interesting to write about the raft survival game than to write like this. It doesn't feel good at all. I am either helping or on the way to help. This is a survival article. Write about the excitement and danger of survival. Otherwise, it is better to write about the systematization of data around the world.

Helplessly, three women appeared who had a good relationship with the protagonist. You wrote the first two out of contact, and the last one was written off directly! ... You might as well just use the Heavenly Sword, I'm afraid 404 won't look like it either! It's all written about eating

The protagonist is also true, your ability is just like Tang Monk Rou, don't you know? If you don't form a gang as soon as possible, will you still stop taking action when others have more people? When you write like this, you become the main character, a bastard, and the enemies fall to their knees after being shocked. What else is there to see? Even if you have good weapons and few people, it will be useless later. You have to know that the raft is made of wood even though it is strong.

The protagonist's character set by the author is too weak, which is really uncomfortable to watch. The protagonist's character is not required to be too extreme, decisive, or anything like that, but after all, this is a web novel and an apocalyptic novel, so it would be better if the protagonist's character is set to be strong and decisive. . .

Is it the author's ability to control writing? At first, it was because there were too many people to control the arrangement storm, and then the team was reorganized? Let me give you a suggestion. First of all, it is indispensable for an orphan who is struggling at the bottom of society to live to grow up and have a strong spirit. Then, since he has the ability to form a team, just like recruiting doctors at the beginning, then why not recruit the geography teacher who can confirm the direction, why not recruit the family of three? If it is really about long-term development and survival, and you don't want to join others, you can only form your own team and recruit people with various strengths and weaknesses. Once you have the population, you can form a escort team. This protagonist seems too innocent, or the author is too innocent. At first, two women and one man were not robbed. It was really lucky. Later, he was still wandering around, and he played hard when he met the black dragon. Then he found that the plot was about to jump, so he found Mr. Liu. Remember, if a person with such a character appears in that kind of environment, there are many ways to control him. He will arrest you and do whatever you are asked to do. Use emotion to induce him, use reason to induce him, and use force to lure him. As long as the power is not balanced, they will be forced to cooperate. After cooperation, as long as they communicate more and cultivate feelings, they can be used to my advantage.