This Immortal Is Here

It may seem dark, but the author's protagonist is actually a person with feelings all along. Many people say that your writing is too dark, but in my opinion it is not dark enough. Every protagonist is full of emotions and cannot be truly ruthless. For women, for brothers, and for the sect, I have sacrificed my life. That is to say, although they act ruthlessly, each of the author's protagonists is actually a kind-hearted person. As a lover, naturally you cannot do ruthless things. So when I saw him fighting for his surname, I felt relieved. However, I cannot accept this kind of lover after all. I prefer the cold and ruthless Lao Yin B. Everything is based on interests, and no one can give up. I originally came from other websites and thought the author's books were good, so I wanted to come and subscribe and give rewards or something to support it. After briefly reading these three books, I finally had to give up. They were not my cup of tea. Then let it go. In fact, Murong Yunyan in the previous book was almost perfect. She is much stronger than the protagonist, truly dignified and well-organized, and willing to pay any price for the interests she pursues. The perfect heroic character. But her ending was so disappointing to me. Because she was also moved emotionally. She actually did it to compensate for framing the protagonist and to protect the protagonist. This is really a breakdown in character. Even if it is written as the final protagonist, kill her for revenge. I can still feel better. Such a cruel, sinister, and unscrupulous heroine. In the end, he actually died because of the love in his heart. If it can be seen that the purpose of keeping the protagonist alive was to cultivate and utilize him, and it is particularly grand. Then the ending becomes the little daughter who sacrifices herself for love. It really feels like eating a fly. The only character that was close to perfect was ruined like this. How I hope the two people plot against each other in the end. Come to a decisive battle, no matter who lives or dies, it will be a real pleasure. Well, maybe the author has always written about the themes of love and forgiveness. Just like this new novel, it is not as dark as the previous novels from the beginning. But you are destined to be unable to satisfy those. People who like positive novels. So why not go a step further in the dark style and make the protagonist truly ruthless? In every novel, there must be a few little girls who are reluctant to kill. To show what a loving person the protagonist is. However, in the end it is very likely that you will not be able to rely on either side. Those who like positive writing think you are too dark, and those who like dark writing think you are not ink enough. Okay, I'm finally done venting.

Greedy for treasures, deliberately unlocking the devil's seal, it's awesome

It took me four days to finish it, and it looks great naturally. The dark style has a very authentic evil protagonist. It can be said that the best thing about this book is the characterization of the protagonist. The protagonist can be regarded as a true evil demon style. The good lady has no contact with the real demon at all. He is just a demon with only a little bit of humanity. The author's writing is good and the novel is quite thoughtful, and he has repeatedly promised that if the eunuch likes a dark style, just jump right in. If you want to try it, try not to be emotionally involved, especially the female character Lin Niang. It is easy to be persuaded to give up whether you like it or not. The overall feeling in the early stage is relatively cheerful, but in the middle and till now, there is a relatively weak sense of bitterness and irony. At that time, I thought it was a different author, so I still had to be mentally prepared to accept the change in style. There is also a suggestion that the author change the title of the book to "The Demon Is Here" or "The Demon Is Here". It really doesn't match the feeling of a fairy, and it might be more attractive. It's better for everyone to join in and support the genuine version.

This novel is very well written, relatively dark, the protagonist is ruthless, and the Virgin has nothing to do with it. There are some benefits at the end, and he even has a girl, hehehe! Anyway, it's really cool. This kind of writing from the perspective of monsters perfectly explains the way monsters survive. Big boost for the author!

The author of this book has changed his style! The joy was mixed with cruelty. Bai Hongwei's grandmother was made into a leather lantern by her own hands. Yue Linlang died even more miserably. She was turned into a pile of meat and was swallowed by a toad. Although he didn't want to, he still ate it. I quite like the story on Mermaid Island, with a little warmth, but Fairy Linglong eventually parted ways. I don't know if there will be a chance to renew our relationship in the future. In short, I like this book so far. Good luck, author!

I really like Yue Linniang and hope she can be resurrected in the future😭😭

This book is very nice. There are just a few people. I'm going to hack it and spread the word.

I just like the front part. After Yue died, I felt that many things started to change. The most obvious one was in Longcheng.

I guess the heroine has been written to death in the beginning, which will affect everyone's interest in watching it.

Less weird and bad taste Please!