Konoha Uchiha's Counterattack

Looking forward to the author's follow-up plots. From the existing plots, it can be seen that the author is really good. Based on the previous ones, he can also write another version of a different world, which explains why the Uchiha were exterminated, the self-affirmation of the Uchiha clan, the development path of the Uchiha clan, etc., And why they attacked the Kumo ninja (they have resources and are young enough. The main thing is that the boss fights the second one. After the second one hits, other ninja villages basically dare not speak.)

As long as the Uchiha clan can produce a pair of eternal kaleidoscopes, Konoha cannot defeat the Uchiha clan. The Uchiha clan feels that they have boiled frogs in warm water. The second generation policy has isolated Uchiha. There is no bond with foreigners, which is the most buggy thing about Hokage. There are also many fewer opportunities for the Uchiha clan to grow in battle. They are all closed in the clan, so there are fewer and fewer opportunities to open their eyes. Kaleidoscopes occasionally exist, but kaleidoscopes and eternal kaleidoscopes are two concepts, one earth and one sky. Opening eternity is Super Shadow

The IQ is online and the plot is reasonable! The book is good. Okay, I won't praise you, I like to ask questions! Is the author a newbie? Not able to segment? It looks so tiring. I feel like I don't want to read even though I haven't read the text content on one page. Too dense, with too few paragraphs, it feels like reading a dictionary. Cause visual fatigue. Novel is not a composition or a thesis. It must be simple and clear, and the meaning can be understood at a glance. There is no need for depth and philosophy. All the depth and philosophy of the novel are expressed through the plot and characters, not words. Therefore, the text must be simple, and the plot and characters must be complex and reasonable. If the paragraphs cannot be divided into authors, you can do this as follows: 1) Divide the description of the environment into one paragraph. If there are too many descriptions, divide it into sections according to different descriptions. For example, describe the sky in one section and the earth in one section. If the description of the environment is too little, only one or two sentences will not be better than paragraphs. 2) Character description is divided into one paragraph. The specifics are similar to the description of the environment, and the author has to control it himself. 3) Divide the key tone into one paragraph. Some words that reflect key emotions, such as "I don't want to be a human being anymore!!" "Asshole!!!" "No... Don't do it!" These low, angry, desperate modal particles, etc... 4) Move names are divided into paragraphs. No need to give an example for this, right? 5) The conversion scene is divided into a large section. For example, I was talking about the Uchiha Residence Theater before, and next I'm going to talk about the Hokage's Office Theater. To divide a large paragraph into a large paragraph, a blank paragraph must be added. In the past, dividing lines were added. The layering of paragraphs in novels is very important. Ability to connect context during fast reading to avoid slow reading and waste of time and effort. It can highlight the emotional description of characters and make them more vivid. Make the description of the environment more realistic, make the transition scenes less sudden, and make the description of the battle more immersive. The specific method of segmentation depends on the plot. This can only be determined by the author himself. I won't go into other issues mentioned in the comments. If possible, I will revise the previous chapters. It affects the reading experience too much and will discourage many people and affect the performance of the book. Having said so much, I hope it will be useful to the author.

Sarutobi Hiruzen: Fugaku, you don't have the protection of Konoha, and without the protection of Hokage, the entire ninja world will have no place for you, and you will be unable to move forward! Fugaku: A guy who looks down on others with dog eyes, this Konoha guy doesn't mind! Sarutobi Hiruzen: If you rebel, you are nothing more than a dog in Konoha. Since you dare to commit such a treason, you are not honest. You are simply looking for death!

There is a saying that the way out for one Uchiha is definitely not revolution. It seems to me that the power of the Uchiha clan cannot fight against the entire Konoha. After all, Uchiha is rich in white-eyed wolves. The number one white-eyed wolf is Obito, the number two white-eyed wolf Shisui, and the number three white-eyed wolf Itachi. But the white-eyed wolf is Uchi Bo's combat power is the key. If according to the setting of the anime, then Uchiha only has one pair of kaleidoscopes, namely Uchiha Fugaku's, which can serve the entire clan. In fact, I have always been unable to understand why Uchiha Shisui and Uchiha Itachi have to fight against the clan life and death? Fortunately, Uchiha Shisui wants to find a balance between the clan and Konoha. Uchiha Itachi is blindly facing Konoha, but he doesn't know that the Uchiha clan has trained him. This is probably the reason why he is called Uchiha Weasel. It's too expensive. I personally feel that Uchiha Bo's only way out is to leave Konoha Village and use Uchiha Fugaku's Mangekyo Sharingan to control small ninja villages such as Takigakure and Hoshigakure or countries such as Snow Country, etc., And slowly regain his strength. After returning to the strength of the Warring States Period, he can then take revenge on Konoha.

Please, the author, take a look! Give me a little personal opinion In the comics and anime of the Uchiha clan, Uchiha Fugaku should have had a kaleidoscope in front of his eyes for a long time. Izanashi and Izanami are both seen in the manga and anime, but in the plot, he is the only one of Fugaku's generation who has opened it. Coupled with the pressure of the second and third generations, the Uchiha clan's arrogance, and Having been suppressed on the edge of the village for a long time, maybe I thought of a coup at this time... The setting of the Eternal Mangekyō Sharingan. The original book never said that brothers must be transplanted to change eyes. I forgot how many chapters of the comic it is, so I will type it up I don't know if you can see the picture, but I just said The Eternal Mangekyō Sharingan. The younger brother's eyes gained permanent light because they had a new host... And not only that, the eyes also changed. A unique pupil technique was born from those eyes. However, this pupil technique can only be used within the clan. And not everyone can use this method to gain new power. This is a fact built on the many sacrifices that followed.. That is another secret of these eyes. Personal statement: After Madara (possibly) the Uchiha clan has been studying this eternal eye (simplification, typing on the phone is tiring). It is also possible that Madara started to study (because he loves his brother, DD is gone, and he will definitely figure out what it is after the war is over). Personally, I think this explains the lack of kaleidoscopes in the clan after that (even if most of them are fighting among themselves, there are still a handful of them. Have the second generation also experimented with it? It is impossible to experiment with three magatama and not develop kaleidoscopes). Transplantation or fusion (I personally prefer the latter), Indra Chakra? (Unsure). After success, you will get unique pupil power without stability. Within the clan? (Within the Uchiha clan?, Close relatives for several generations?? Within the clan??) The reincarnation eye didn't pay much attention... Oops. A generation of all-encompassing power, Madara was about to die and developed the Reincarnation Eye (has the concentration of all-encompassing power reached a certain level? Yin-Yang escape?) Anyway, Madara had never used the Wood Release before his death (didn't get it? Got it? He was too old to be intubated with an oxygen tube and couldn't use it?). Anyway, as soon as he was resurrected, he said he would try that power first (Wooden Release. Arrival of the tree world? Or something similar to the first generation Wood Release). So the kaleidoscope within the clan basically disappeared by Fugaku generation(?). I forgot what I wanted to say later... It was 12.14 At night, and I felt a little sleepy because of my age. I will tell you what I thought of later... This is just a personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it. I hope the author can communicate more with readers. Personally, I like to watch the author write his own world of Naruto, instead of following the so-called original plot. For novel readers like me, it is better to read the original work. Moreover, the reviews from readers are really not good, and the author is also troubled. Only when you write something of your own can you really make a lot of money (hehe :) ) It's just that I feel a bit reluctant to give up after seeing such good writing and plot. Come on, author! Write your own world! Veterans double-click the 666 iron pot to stew themselves! Zzzz, I'm so sleepy.

The writing of the previous battle is so bad, the chakra is blown by the strong wind, and the ninjutsu is not used according to each one, and it is drunk according to the set.

I basically haven't read it since the war started. I don't know how many chapters a battle takes, but it should be no less than 60 chapters! There is nothing that attracts me at all. I don't want to watch it anymore. I feel like I am reviewing anime.

Reading the reviews of this book, they all praise how well it is written. There are almost no negative reviews, which feels a bit abnormal. It's not that I don't like others. It's just that a book usually has true fans and negative fans. Even the great writers at the starting point have a lot of negative fans. Normally, a good book is controversial. It is not normal to receive one-sided positive or negative reviews. Even the four major classics have a large number of people criticizing them.

Why can't I see it? There seems to be no sense of substitution, strong, flaming, yang... It's hard to tell them apart when talking about them together...!

The author's writing is not very good. Where are the Uchiha people? Can that few people stop Kirigakure's army? You must know that in World War II and World War II, Uchiha was on the front line with Kirigakure Village Throughout the entire World War II and Three Wars, it can be said that there were only two or three people in Kirigakure Village on the main battlefield, and all the Uchiha fought on the front line According to the number of people in Ninja Village in World War II and World War II, Kirigakure Village had fewer people due to the Blood Mist Policy, and it was impossible to be better than other Ninja Villages Too little Based on the data from the Fourth World War to extrapolate the data from the Second World War and the Third War, the data from the Second World War and the Third War will be less. After all, one is burning the boat, the other is just fighting for resources The data from the Fourth War is nearly 90,000 people, which is divided into 16,000 to 17,000 people per village And the Second World War and the Three War are not small battles, so It is said that there will be about 10,000 troops The blood mist policy of Kirigakure Village will also be smaller than that of other ninja villages, but it is not afraid of death, so it has an army of at least eight or nine thousand people The original Uchiha book says that an Uchiha with open eyes can be three elite ninjas of the same level. In this way, the total number of Uchiha with open eyes is at least two More than a thousand to about three thousand people Hinata needs to spread his clan members across the entire front to be used as sentient ninjas, so the number of people here will not be less than two thousand This is the number of wealthy families, and the Yuan Fei family, a small family that could only survive in the Warring States Period by joining the three clans of the Pig, Deer and Die, has three thousand ninjas. It is extremely unreasonable, unless Yuan Fei is rich in wealth.

After reading more than a dozen chapters, I felt very embarrassed. I didn't realize that the readers said it was very good. I can only say that this level is average, but the recommendation votes and unanimous praise are very fascinating.

The most disgusting thing among the Hokage is Itachi, a 25-year-old with a white-eyed wolf. Those who brag about Itachi already have incorrect views. He is the villain portrayed by Kishimoto, and a bunch of people are still clueless about it, but it is undeniable that Kishimoto's portrayal of Itachi is very successful.

The writing is very immersive. The name One Piece is in front of it, and it's not this guest appearance at the end, it's just that guest appearance. Damn it, are you writing a novel or just being a bitch?

The front is very much like a primary school student's composition. I just write about what I did today, ah, I am eating, and the cultivation process that should be highlighted is brushed aside. The running account is more comfortable to read than this, and the protagonist has no sense of existence at all. In other novels, the protagonist is very prominent and has clear layers, allowing readers to know that this is the protagonist as soon as they read it. However, in the three-person team, the protagonist is not prominent and is like a passerby. I am really afraid of changing the protagonist as I write. If so many good reviews are not paid for, the author had better revise the front. The characters that should be highlighted should be highlighted, and the supporting characters should not be overshadowed by the protagonist's role. The details should be written in detail, such as how the strength improves, and the details should be written in detail, such as daily meals. Finally, there is a fight scene that really makes one look confused. Is the Sharingan so easy to open? Can it be opened after a fight? So why did the idiot still need Itachi to stimulate him with Tsukuyomi? With so many good reviews, I hope I didn't buy it with money, and don't live up to the expectations of so many people. It's best for the author to sort out and revise the front. After all, if the front is not good, the back is useless.

I like all novels about Konoha. Do you have any recommendations from hxd?

The writing of the war is a bit slow, but in my personal opinion, the author should proceed at his own pace.

It's hard to read, and there's no sense of immersion. Naruto is a mature work and has a corresponding writing style. It's definitely not good to write Naruto's dialogue in a modern urban writing style, unless you plan to write a mindless and funny story from the beginning. I look forward to the author's progress.

I found that one of the characteristics of this book is that there are many typos, hahaha 😁😁😁

You can't call yourself the protagonist. It's too uncomfortable to watch.

I want to ask why the protagonist is not very popular but still has cards 🤔

By the way, how does the author plan to solve the problem of female protagonists? There is nothing left in the four-phase seal here, and there is no hope of even the reincarnation of the filthy earth.

I couldn't stand it after reading a few chapters. Everything is a conspiracy theory. The original book didn't say that you can make it up. Everything you wrote must be changed into a conspiracy.

It looks wonderful, but the author should not abuse the heroine too much. We true fans will be very sad and feel sorry for the heroine.

There is something wrong with the text layout, it looks awkward.

I've seen it before, and I thought it looked a bit familiar. It's a piece of shit💩

No update today? The author quickly wrote the fourth generation to death

It's tiring to wait until it gets better, it's so troublesome, collect it first, and then kill it when you're done.

Why don't you write a copy of a comprehensive comic, or go to Marvel or something like that?

The author must be a greasy uncle