The Brocade Guard's Jade Token

If you haven't read it yet and want to know how this book is, the first 300 chapters are very good, but the later chapters are really bad; the plot, logic, and setting all decline.

Having traversed past and present lives, and witnessed both prosperity and desolation, I can still see your figure alone in the dim light.

This is yet another novel where the female lead is weaker than the male lead in every way. I'm really curious, is this a female-oriented novel? Why does it feel more like a male-lead novel than a female-lead novel? Do you like writing male leads so much? Can't you distinguish between subject and object when writing? Making the protagonist give way to the supporting characters? Is this how female-oriented novels are written?

This romance novel, disguised as a suspenseful detective story, features supporting characters revolving around the protagonist, who is obsessed with love. The supporting characters are flat and uninteresting; the suspense has become fantasy. It's suspense for suspense's sake and lacks any real appeal.

Isn't this a disaster? Or are you slandering the image of a criminal investigator?

It's so long and rambling... The female lead is like a personality version of a regular guy. The detective plot doesn't make sense, so they use fantasy elements to fill in the gaps. The text is disjointed and hard to read. What a mess of nonsense that wasted my precious nighttime... I'm really speechless.

The female lead is a hopelessly romantic person, so I dropped it.

The female lead doesn't seem like someone who has died once at all. She is seriously different from others, diligently pursuing the male lead, and firmly believing that she is the smartest and most popular person.

Is this what Dahei looks like, Erjin?

Congratulations to Erjin on the simultaneous updates of her new book on all platforms! 🌸 Keep it up, Erjin!