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This... What era are we living in? It's still one chapter of suffering, one chapter of showing off, one chapter of being slapped in the face. Round after round, without ever stopping. It feels even worse than *Breaking the Sky*, although its core concept is also this kind of thing, but it doesn't keep exploiting a few people. Which of the other characters in this book has any intelligence?

To be honest, the premise is good, but it shouldn't have gone too far by creating a bunch of villains just for the sake of showing off and slapping others in the face. It's mindless and lacks originality.

During the initial release period, I'll update two chapters per day, but after it's officially released, I expect to maintain a consistent update schedule of around 10,000 words per day. I hope you readers won't be impatient ("), thank you for joining!

Are you writing plots from ten-year-old online novels now because you think you have too many readers?

Can you please stop with the constant talk of characters being two levels higher than each other? I'm fed up. Is it that nowadays, a protagonist in a novel can't be a main character without being two levels higher than the other? It's understandable if someone of the same level can fight against someone at the peak, but how can a power system be created if people two levels stronger are…

All I can say is, the idea is fantastic. The back-and-forth of showing off and getting slapped down is relentless, it's the ultimate satisfying read, it feels like reading *Battle Through the Heavens*... And the content seems quite suitable for beginners, even those at the lowest tier. 😅

Since the protagonist is so powerful, why not mention his rank? It's inevitable that he'll be mocked for always being at such a low rank. Just slap them with the highest rank, Challenger, and they'll be silenced.

I feel the protagonist's screen time is a bit limited, the battles aren't well-written, and of the ten students the protagonist initially recruited, only two or three had significant roles before two more very talented students appeared. What about the others? It seems unnecessary to have so many students from the start; wouldn't it have been better to recruit them one by one?

First, the pace is a bit slow. Secondly, there are so many instances of characters being proven wrong, and the attempts to prove them wrong are forced. It feels like this novel is just about showing off for the sake of showing off. Third, He Xuan is really not likable at all. I've seen many lively and sharp-tongued female characters, but she is the one I hate the most.

A "feel-good" novel? You seem to have a misunderstanding of what a "feel-good" novel is. It's a classic case of first suppressing then elevating the protagonist. I could feel the suppression, but I really didn't feel the elevation. Then, after the elevation, it suppresses again. It feels like this book is just about how the protagonist gets mindlessly mocked. A hundred ways to mock a protagonist?