The Rebellious Immortal Dynasty

The concept is good, but the first few chapters have some really off-putting flaws. Why did they have to give the protagonist a sister on Earth? He transmigrated to a cultivation world and wants to go back? He's not alone anymore, what's the point of going back? And even if he reaches a high level of cultivation, how many years will it be? Go back to be an ancestor? And an ancestor with no blood relation at that?

It's true, but one thing that's annoying is that many books that offer this kind of resource advantage also impose a lot of restrictions on the protagonist, suppressing their growth. What limit that no one can break? What necessary conditions are required for a breakthrough?

Fast my ass! More than twenty scrolls and he's only advanced two minor realms, and that's with a sufficient supply of spiritual energy. If you replaced him with a pig, he'd probably have advanced several realms by now.

Here's a suggestion for the author: the protagonist's surname should ideally be a common one, at least among the top 100 surnames in the Hundred Family Surnames. This is because most readers will identify with the character, and if the surname is too unusual or unfamiliar, readers won't feel a connection. Also, the protagonist's name should ideally not contain the character "" (xiao), as it makes the character seem immature.

It's 2020 already, and they're still using such outdated methods, pushing the limits of human endurance in every level...

What if you cultivate too quickly? Quickly sever your meridians.

The author of the previous book wrote it very well; many of the strategies and tactics showed that he had put a lot of thought into them. I really liked it. Here are a few things to keep in mind! The protagonist initially progressed through levels as easily as eating, but then it stopped working!

I advise you to stop writing about women. The women you've written cause all sorts of conflicts, including the rescue scene. Your last book disgusted me. A book without women is a perfect read; having women is just bizarre.

Why force the imperial court label on them? It would be more accurate to say that a super sect rules over countless other sects. Officials don't serve the people; they always serve themselves. We never see any so-called officials proposing or implementing policies that benefit the people. And then there's the time travel, which is fine, but they keep mentioning having a younger sister. How many years will it take you to get back to Earth? Go back and be an ancestor?

Great book! The previous book was also very well written, featuring a rather cheeky protagonist. Thumbs up! A truly excellent book!