The Dream Homebody Village System

After reading Chapter 12, I really have no desire to continue reading. I found the following problems with this book: 1. The protagonist's life experience is a mystery. The first chapter says that he is an orphan born and raised in Manyuan Village and grew up eating the food of hundreds of families. The following text suddenly becomes interesting. His surname is Ouyang, his first name is Chen, and his given name is Li Qing. Because he is an orphan from nowhere, he has no house or land, and his education level is unclear. However, he returned to the village because he wanted to repay the village. The village also specially set up a drink to celebrate, which shows that his education level is not low, at least he is a college student with an undergraduate degree. The new soul with the system comes from the Zhejiang Province of the earth (it seems unnecessary to say this, I don't know if it will be used later, anyway, this is how the book is written.) 2. This golden finger system rewards skills that are too buggy. A carpentry skill allows the protagonist to be alone for 15 days to complete a two-story wooden house with a mortise and tenon structure. Even if it is explained that it is a dilapidated house with leakage, it is too buggy. Not talking about technical aspects, I think it is unrealistic to just process wood. What's more, do all the work need to be done by one person, and at the same time, you have to use your carpentry skills to do some manual work to earn living expenses? Pure nonsense. 3. The positioning of this book does not match the introduction. The introduction and the title of the book focus on staying in the village, that is, staying in the village, and the first chapter states that the protagonist has to return to the village before returning. However, as soon as I read the twelfth chapter, I was already rewarded by the system every 10 days, giving a full set of song creation skills, and a natural voice. This series of operations does not reflect the intention of doing anything to the village at all. 4. Although he is a village orphan who eats the food of hundreds of families in the village and is a native of the village, he is so unfamiliar to the villagers that he is like a foreigner from the city who came to the village and bought a house to settle down. 5. The writing is too blunt, and it doesn't make much sense to forcefully use the program group Longing to expose the protagonist. The protagonist has not shown any value that needs to be exposed. 6. Since I wrote about the program group I longed for, the perspective of the writing has not been clear. It is mainly the perspective of live broadcast. However, how can a variety show use live broadcast 24 hours a day to gain popularity, and it is not a live broadcast to quickly build Huoshenshan Hospital. 7. Real-life celebrities who are copied from an imaginary universe are too immature and blunt in their descriptions of how they behave. If you understand, you will know that it is a problem with the writing style. If you are harsh and slanderous, you can say that you are deliberately criticizing the celebrities by borrowing the book to criticize them. 8. The last point is that the author's personal dissatisfaction is too obvious. Even if he really doesn't like some fresh meat traffic stars, there is no need to bluntly write them into the article to discredit them. At the same time, fresh meat traffic has already disgraced them, but at the same time, he has also dissed several stars in the program group. So, after I read Chapter 12, I decisively gave up on this book and posted a book review to remind the author and new readers to consider whether to read this book.

Chen Qing, Li Qing? Ouyang Chenqing? There are only three chapters, and three names have been changed. Are you copying the book or not paying attention?

It's well written, but the part where you criticize a certain chicken is too naive. After all, no one in the entertainment industry is such an idiot. I hope the author will continue to work hard 😁

Zifeng, the heroine must be Zifeng, can I still write a whole season of yearning and add a celebrity detective?

Wow, is this quality of Sanjiang this issue? Why are there so many poisonous weeds?

Wouldn't it be better for the protagonist to travel through time longer? In less than half a month, I had a fine house made entirely of wood and furniture, all made by myself. If you directly conjure it up, you can still watch it. After all, there is a system. But if you make it yourself in less than half a month, it will be disgusting. There is a company next to my house that specializes in making furniture from wood. It takes 5 or 6 days for 5 people to make a set of furniture (bed, chair, table, bedside table). So

To be honest, don't you feel embarrassed after reading the first few chapters

It's just mindless and stupid. People are messing with you. What time has it been? And you're still making fun of me. Poisonous

The poison test is completed: 1. The name of the protagonist changes. 2. The character description is too superficial. 3. The system skill arrangement is too deliberate. At first glance, it seems that I am rushing towards entertainment. The first skill given by the Zhaijia system is actually the music skill. I am also drunk. 4. You are a black man, but you are illogical and have no basic laws at all. How mentally retarded do you have to be to do what you describe? 5. The writing rhythm is not good.

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