Everything Has Quality

Did I miss it? Or is there something wrong with the author? The previous text does not match the following. Starting from about twenty chapters, it became messy and disorganized. It felt like copying and pasting to create paragraphs.

The subject matter is good, but your writing feels average and fails to highlight your strengths.

It's quite sad. The Japanese RPGs I read earlier had the protagonist either lose his memory or have all his friends die. In the end, he defeated the big boss, but it felt meaningless. There was usually no good ending in the end. Nowadays, this kind of books are not very popular, especially in male videos.

Why do you feel like the protagonist's character collapsed after ten chapters? From a time traveler to the person whose body was taken away by the time traveler?? ? Mentality, thinking, logic, everything has changed =_=

Are you sure this is a novel? Why does it feel like a script from a Japanese comic? The plot line and even the jumps are the same as those in the anime. Is the author writing a novel imitating anime? You can watch anime with your eyes, so it doesn't matter how you jump. Isn't it strange that you wrote a novel in this way? Life in another world cooperates with the time-traveling protagonist and a harem team.

I feel like the more you write, the more boring you become. Knight-kun has come out, when will Oni-chan come out? ? ? Aren't they all called Lord Knight? ? ?

In today's novels, it's fine if the parents are dead. Could it be that he is an only child, either a younger sister or an older sister, fuck?

It's well written, and I have the desire to continue reading. I want to continue reading only after I understand what it's about. (I don't want to deal with those who want to come here to complain. After all, the writing is really messy)

What's going on? Why did it change so suddenly starting from Chapter 24? It's simply a sudden change in style, and some of the prefaces don't match the postscripts. I couldn't understand where the terrain was. I said that the things I encountered seemed familiar and the roads were also familiar. But I haven't seen it before

It goes off topic after chapter 24, which is inexplicable! ╮（╯＿╰）╭

It gave me a headache. Why do I keep skipping the plot? Many points are lost in one sentence, and then they are fast-forwarded. It's so simple.

Isn't it stupid not to choose what suits you, but to insist on choosing what doesn't suit you?

After reading the latest chapter in one go, I read the book reviews. Many people said that they could not understand this book and the chapters were incoherent. In fact, this book is not bad in terms of truth. The subject matter and plot are not bad, but the text is a bit stiff and seems to have a cold feeling. There are many places where the feelings are not described, and the emotions are lack of foreshadowing and rendering. How should I put it, it is more like narrating a heavy fact, but I can't help but want to see it to the end. Come on. . . .

Since the world is set to be so terrifying. Why do you write Akaneri as so innocent! ! Don't write like an idiot! Use your brain.

It wasn't until I saw the name Shinbu that I discovered the background of the princess connection used by the author, so it's understandable that my memory is so confusing (I don't know if I understand it correctly, please don't blame me if I'm wrong...) Although it's a bit sadistic, but fortunately it's not mindless. It has a tragic feeling. To be honest, I actually feel a subtle sense of relief? ! Emmm......

M. . B has plug-ins and doesn't need to be used. You have to suppress them. Then the enemies you encounter are bosses and the like. After that, they are tortured to death. Do you think this is a bitch?

What I don't like the most is this kind of novel where you always encounter a boss before leaving the novice village. If you lose, the protagonist will die. If you win... A rookie can defeat the boss, what else is there to see?

I booked everything and found out that you might be a eunuch. I was stupid.

The gentle and loving sister was blinded in vain, and her feelings were inexplicable. She fell in love with a passerby in just one chapter.

I just clicked on it, and there are seven characters, four of which are female. Is this a stallion novel? Let the big guys who have seen it tell me, if so, I'll run away first!

But if you, the author, want to give up, just give up.

This novel is very interesting. From the first chapter to the present, there are very few things that can keep me addicted. It's the end of the month, and my recommendations and monthly passes have been given.

I still have my monthly pass and will continue tomorrow. This novel is good, I hope. . . . . .

The book is quite interesting, but I am a bit unsure about it, which makes me afraid to read it. Subscription.

The writing is okay, but the details are not good. The plot jumps too fast and feels incoherent. However, it is better than most authors. However, it is not well-known, so few people read it. I need to get a recommendation position.

I was baffled by this book 😅

It scared me to death. I thought it was the author of colonial clothing.

There are too many female supporting characters and I didn't dare to go in. I want to ask if there are many bloody scenes.

There are still 20 chapters unordered, and the fan rating is ranked 17th. 😏😏😏

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~