Traveling in Pirates

Since you have written a fanfic and don't dare to change the original work, then why not write it? ! ! The writing is not passionate and has no depth of thought. The only big advantage is that the identity of a traveler suits my taste after all. The rest is really rubbish. The other most annoying thing is that Warring States can clearly attack Blackbeard with the navy, but he lets them go. Even if Blackbeard cannot be killed, all his men are prisoners of the undersea prison. How could Warring States let them go under normal circumstances. After all, Blackbeard didn't have the Shock Fruit at this time, and there were still three generals in the navy, so they weren't afraid of Blackbeard at all. Blackbeard is already his sworn enemy, but he didn't take the opportunity to destroy him. Wouldn't it be over when he grows up later? After all, even if he doesn't have the Shock Fruit, he can still choose other awesome fruits! ! ! During the war, just one Dark Fruit was enough to defeat the protagonist, and later the protagonist was no match for Blackbeard, who had three fruits. So, I don't understand this author a bit, there is no change in the original work at all, so it's better to read the original work 😅😅😅

The originality is wonderful! There is some water in the middle and late stages! The author's pinnacle work! In the end - is this world so good? Abandon all strength and be free and easy! Back to ordinary! Is it that good? {"NickName":"A city is just waiting for you","UserId":319109173}

I'm not good at describing it. It doesn't have the flavor of One Piece, and the character descriptions and plot descriptions are also very crude. If I hadn't been familiar with comics, I would have almost no idea what you were talking about with your one-stroke description.

You don't have a heroine anymore. What does Momonosuke's death have to do with you?

I have repeatedly emphasized that I am simply taking a risk and becoming a tourist, and then I talk about the world view of the pirate world and how it is on earth. Now a third of the chapter has passed. Can't I write more about my practical experience in the pirate world? You can just write about the scenery of the pirate world.

Showing inexplicable murderous intent towards Luffy? He even wanted to kill Luffy! Uh... That's really weird to be honest! Did he get in the protagonist's way, or did he make the protagonist angry? No! This hostility towards Luffy comes out of nowhere! It's not that you can't kill Luffy, but you have to have a reason! That idiot just smiled like that on the execution platform, and then the protagonist showed murderous intent towards him! ! ! ! ! If you really wanted to kill, you would have killed Luffy at Baradi Restaurant earlier. You arrived at Rogge Town and suddenly came here like this...! Why! ! ! Tired. ,! ! ! ! ! ! !

If you have any ideas, you can tell us here, weapons, devil fruits. The supporting characters' names, abilities, and plot suggestions are all fine. You can also mention typos here or point them out in the description of this chapter. I will correct them if I see them. Thanks for the support.

Suddenly a bit toxic. The murderous intention towards Luffy was so unexpected. Since he is a time traveler, he should know Luffy's character. In this case, the murderous intention will be very sudden.

I've seen Chapter 52. I'm already a great swordsman. To kill a pirate worth 70 million or even 100 million, I still need to use a big move. Even if I just want to figure out his swordsmanship at the beginning, it will take seconds later. If you can't kill it in seconds, your combat power will feel so low.

I haven't finished the free chapter yet. It is better to follow the boat than to follow the boat. The person watching feels sleepy. There is a lot of verbosity in Luo Liba. Is it interesting to tell the plot of the anime? I want to kill Luffy, but I don't dare to kill him because I am concerned about the power behind him. So Zoro, Sanji, and other crew members have no background, so they can't be killed? The dragon destroyed your ship, you can't destroy Luffy's ship. You licked your face and continued to follow the boat, calling it revenge, but in the end, you got a beating and then reconciled? It works.

To be honest, without the guidance of a teacher and no foundation at all, it is useless for you to practice hard for 20 years. After all, people have spent hundreds of years to develop skills from generation to generation. If you start from scratch for more than ten years, you can have the skills that have been honed for hundreds of years. Once you practice It takes 10 years on the ground, but someone who has a teacher can catch up with you in one year. Thorondo is awesome and created the 3-sword style. He also became a great swordsman through the guidance of famous teachers and Eagle Eyes. Without a system and a golden finger, you really can't catch up with the son of the Pirate King.

Even if Blackbeard can't be prevented from getting the Shock Fruit, he still has to cut off one of his arms. What do I think?

This plot is too far-fetched. I found out that Yasuo is stronger than Dover, so I quickly set up a lover for Jack, and asked the protagonist to give her real name to contact him. I forcibly established an enemy so that the protagonist could not fight Dover. I successfully saved a big hot spot for later, so that I can improve my word count in the future. Excellent. Can you return my two monthly passes last month?

After ten years of training on an isolated island, with a few months of instruction, you can compete with the world's best swordsman? It would be reasonable if it were a Gravity Island or a Behemoth Island, but in the end you are just an ordinary island? How difficult is it to work behind closed doors? If there is pressure in survival, there will be more room for improvement in kendo. In the end, the beasts will no longer have any pressure at all, okay? Can you become a great swordsman by killing ordinary beasts? How unreasonable is the protagonist's swordsmanship talent? How many swordsmanship geniuses learn from childhood and receive guidance from experts. How many years does it take to cut iron, how many years to slash, and how many years to become a great swordsman? If you arranged a system, it would be more reasonable. And you are so strong at the beginning, how do you write about growth later? Want to break through the sky? And one more thing, you can't step forward and slash E all the way through the wind wall, you can't blow the wind, and you can't get pain from Lyaka, are you still a Yasuo? It's really off topic. I thought that the protagonist would also try to understand the swordsmanship of the wind or something, but inexplicably, he became ridiculously strong.

I've signed a contract. I'll reward you a little and support you.

I was so ashamed when I saw it. A man yelled, Why should Eagle Eyes pay attention to you if you don't have any aura? I can't understand what's behind (￣∀￣)

To be honest, I don't have a sense of involvement, so let's leave it at that, but I still want to say, come on, author (ง •̀_•́)ง

The great swordsman can completely cut out the attribute sword energy by himself, and there is no need to look for the wind attribute devil fruit.

Did I miss it? With no system, no secrets, and no one to teach you, how can you improve your sword practice? He also said he wanted to go back, so why did he change his name? The beginning is too confusing, right? Did I really miss it?

The protagonist doesn't have a golden finger and is practicing alone on an isolated island. He can actually awaken his sight color and weapon color and become a swordsman? Do you really think that just 10 years of hacking will be enough?

To be honest, I didn't give up on this book until I read more than 140 chapters. There are so many poisonous points. A traveler. Food lover. Swordsman. There is no heroine, and Momonosuke has nothing to do with you. I've been single for two lifetimes and haven't even touched a beautiful woman for forty years. What's the use of this iron rod? 😤😤😤😤

The description of this battle scene is really good, and there is so much nonsense and psychological description in the battle process. The beginning of fighting the golden lion is full of nonsense for most of the chapter, and it keeps beeping during the fight.

I think there is nothing wrong with Momonosuke. The big guys 🙂 are wrong only that Momonosuke is not me.

Let me ask you a question, if you kill all the men and women in Luffy's group, how many people will be chasing you?

It feels quite like Swordsman's Heart

It's so confusing back there! Pay back the water! It's a bit evil to have to start the round with the protagonist in the end!

Anyway, if you see Momonosuke must die, add it to the bookshelf and read it.

Starting from Auntie, I feel like I've seen it somewhere before.

Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

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