Konoha Demon Monkey

It is recommended that if you want to write about Saiyans, it is best not to overestimate the strength of the protagonist. There is no problem for a normal Saiyan to overpower Naruto as an adult!

Saiyans should have very strong physiques

If the Saiyans are not invincible in Naruto, it would be boring.

The most important thing for Saiyans is to be able to hit the flesh with their punches. Naruto is so brittle, so they don't match up. Goku's machine gun in his childhood can't break the defense, so why don't you just cut vegetables casually?

Saiyans can basically defeat people on a planet when they reach adulthood. They can defeat people in a galaxy when they are middle-aged. In the later stages, they can even defeat the God of Destruction.

The beginning of this book is the end, there is too much poisonous chicken soup Saiyans are not like Saiyans, the flower growers do not want the rabbit spirit to dare to be the first in the world, and they promise no regrets...

You think too much, the protagonist does not embody the characteristics of a Saiyan now (except for the tail)

I saw two good pictures by chance

It's really boring if you don't crush it.

No, why are you so calm when your parents were killed? Why are your feelings so dull because of the memory of your previous life? You know, when you were born, the whole village didn't want to see your family, and your parents didn't give up on you. You can't be like this no matter what. It's like your death is irrelevant to you.

The first chapter is pure bullshit. . . And now that I have read too many Naruto novels, I guess not many people like to whitewash Sarutobi. It's disgusting to look at.

Naruto wasn't told by Mizuki that there was a demon fox inside him until he was a genin. . . . . .

Don't break up the cp, don't open a harem, and preferably don't have a female protagonist, this will be perfect.

It's not a system. Dragon Ball has explosive combat power. Most physics departments have many rules and conceptual abilities in the later stages of Naruto.

The reason I wasted my 10 starting points is to tell you that since you dare to use Saiyans to push the map in Naruto, you must not underestimate the strength of the protagonist. The combat power and destructive power of these two comics are not at the same level. Mouse Tail Juice

It all depends on whether the author can suppress the protagonist's strength. If anyone sees it in the future, you can contact me and I'll come back and take a look.

Does the author not know how to write about fighting? The main character is a Saiyan, to be honest. . .

Author: Can you, a Saiyan, transform?

I sent this post to some trolls, well, no, it should be "people who follow the settings" After reading a lot of comments, some people are talking about adult Saiyans exploding stars, but have you ever thought about plane suppression? Even Zairuo's plane is extremely powerful in its own territory, so don't take it easy to suppress a Saiyan. Furthermore, if this book is really written like this and has no meaning in reading, you might as well go next door and watch DNF Hinata dominates the ninja world at the age of twelve. The Saiyans who don't have the ability to fight against the oppression of the plane have nothing to do with it. You still want to follow the original settings in someone else's territory. How funny! So, the author shouldn't criticize him for making the Saiyans so weak, but should praise him. After all, the author is at least aware of plane suppression and will not make the plot too boring. The above is my personal opinion. I want to comment and like it.