My Yuyin Road

It's rare to see this style, so come on, author.

I just read less than 20 chapters. The way to save a country is to transform it yourself! Rather than saving a few people or preventing something, the premise of silently giving is to have someone who has the courage to stand at the front to lead everyone!

No bloodline, no system, the beginning of Rain Hidden Hell, the death plot of World War II, how to play this?

I saw some book friends saying that the plot in the past two days was not perfect. I would like to thank everyone for their friendly and helpful comments. You are welcome to point out the shortcomings boldly. I will pay attention to this aspect later. I have also read this and it is indeed a bit disappointing. The worst plot now is the encounter between the evil cult and the market. These two sections have not been very good to some book friends. A large part of the reason is that the plot is progressing too fast and cannot keep up, making it difficult to understand. I don't know if this is the case, but I personally feel so. It's my fault. If I write more carefully and express myself more clearly, I will avoid this kind of thing. What I want to express is not clearly stated, which makes it difficult for everyone to understand. This is my own fault. Don't poison the eyes of my book friends! ! !

The writing is mindless and refreshing, and this book has a tendency to be mindless. Various plot killings, except that the protagonist knows a little about the plot, there is not much difference from the natives. To put it bluntly, a businessman like Kado's father can prosper, and he can also make money for his companions by working as a bodyguard for famous people. So in general, the author may be in a state of self-impression. To put it bluntly, if the male protagonist has no intention of changing the plot and has no interest in the Kingdom of Rain, how can he have so many opportunities to fake his death and get away, and be so free to do things? Anyway, he also knew that if he didn't intervene, Naruto and Sasuke would mess with Kaguya. There is a contradiction in the internal logic of the character's behavior. Of course, apart from the forced creation of abuse, the author's writing style and ideas are still very strong, but they are just a little... Deliberate? When the point comes, no matter what, the character has to die. It can be either the character himself or the male protagonist. You have to die anyway, otherwise you can't abuse the male protagonist I wish you can write better and better, but I can't stand this style of writing. It makes me so depressed unnecessarily. I'm looking for sweet love stories.

It's 2020, do you have to be a literary youth? Do you have to have all your relatives and friends die? Isn't the protagonist of this thing a combined version of Afiga and Lin Jiaer? Is the author still moved by his own plot? Does the protagonist have the Sharingan to evolve? If you write this down, are you going to kill Sasuke and directly summon Madara to have a happy family in your fantasy?

I fucking vomited when I read it. If it was a novel, I would happily leave. But is your plot written by someone who stayed up late at night and ate Oli? The main character of SB hangs around Hanzo and is just showing off. I won't move until my friend dies. I get excited when my friend dies. Both of your good friends are dead. You know you killed Hanzo. Why did you go there? You know the plot but you are more aggrieved than the natives. Why are you writing fan fiction? Isn't this just a waste of people?

Why doesn't anyone say anything about my lineage, cheats, cheats, etc. That's how I can beat the late game without cheats. There is no such thing as bloodline theory or plug-in theory. What a shame! Looking at other books written by civilians, they are all scolding me. Is it because no one reads me, so they don't scold me? 😅😅😅

What exactly the protagonist is trying to do becomes more and more baffling the more I read. It's still unclear what the goal is. I mess around all day, and the author's patience is almost exhausted.

This score is enough to illustrate the problem of this novel. It keeps abusing the main character, and uses all sorts of tricks to abuse the novel just for the sake of abusing it. I haven't seen this kind of writing in a long time.

The plot has become more and more toxic recently! I really don't understand why the pig's feet are kneeling down and licking Hanzo now! I dare not fart even if I have someone holding my head down and drinking wine! I was a small chuunin before, but I didn't have enough ability. Now I am the second strongest rain ninja, so I still keep kneeling and licking him. Even if he defected, would Hanzo hunt him down? No, Hanzo doesn't dare. Danzo doesn't care about him, so why should he be a dog? There is another poisonous point. What is the purpose of the pig's feet kneeling down and licking Hanzo? Is it to take care of the Great Buddha? However, there was no contact between the two parties for several years, and the only thing they did was to conceal some information. But if there is no exchange of what is needed, what is the point? Before, I was able to cause trouble even if I didn't have the strength. Now that I'm strong, I don't want to cause trouble, but I don't even have the courage to contact my companions? So what's the purpose of doing this now? Is it to endure humiliation and live secretly? So now Hanzo is clearly the most powerful one under his command, so why can't he live a more human-like life and even defect? ​​Does Hanzo have the ability to chase him? No! Will Danzo hunt him down? People ignore you. The only one who might care about him in the future is Uncle Snake. But there are still about ten years before Uncle Snake defectes, so what are you afraid of? , Whether it is better to live in seclusion after defecting, or to join Akatsuki to cause trouble together, it is better than being a dog now, right? And since the protagonist can kneel down and lick Hanzo, you can also kneel down and lick Six Paths. Going to the waterfall to kneel and lick the Six Paths to gain strength is not much better than licking Hanzo? If that doesn't work, you can go live in seclusion nearby. . .

What happened in the latest one? Why did the protagonist drive Ye Cang away? The method is so old-fashioned. Did I skip the chapter?

It is said that there is a deep inland sea in Yuyin Village🤓

I have been persuaded to give up after pursuing it for so long. The character of Naoto created by the author has already collapsed in my heart. Can't I write a good book?

The author previously wrote about the weaklings very well, and the careful survival is fascinating to watch. But later, the protagonist pushed out each of his companions and claimed to form an organization. With the current mentality of the protagonist, he will not believe that his partners will only take advantage of people. In the end, the protagonist is the next Hanzo

I actually gave you two monthly passes last month. I regret it.

I really don't understand what the point of the protagonist being a spy, being forbearing, and feeling so aggrieved in the Hidden Rain Village is. In the end, nothing has changed, which is boring.

This protagonist is a waste because he has no goals and a strong will. He drifts with the trend of the times and is manipulated like a dog. After many years of arduous spy career, his IQ is still not online when he speaks and does things. He is the kind of waste who will die with a shuriken even if he is given a pair of reincarnation eyes. Just like Chenxiang, whose life has always been full of hatred, his growth is all driven by the sacrifices of the people around him. Even that is not as good as that. At least the protagonist knows more about the key plot than others.

The current recommendations from the starting point are all rubbish, and the top reading lists are based on the same old routines. It makes me vomit after reading them.

To be honest, I really feel aggrieved. The biggest feature of your book is that it is not about Konoha but about the Land of Rain. This is a highlight, the lack of bloodline is also a highlight, and the lack of system is also very good, but the protagonist in the book is too miserable. How do you want us to continue reading? ? ? If you feel frustrated, you can write 10 or so chapters, but if you feel frustrated to the point where you feel like the protagonist in the whole book is someone who can be bullied by anyone, that's still a joke. We readers read Qidian novels to feel better, not to feel frustrated. If there is no strength, if there is a background, then add wisdom points and brains to the protagonist, so as to improve the strength?

I am the best fan author I have ever seen. This novel is also the best fan novel I have ever seen. I am so moved. In this era when package-line novels are rampant, I am so lucky to have encountered such a profound novel. Such an author is really lucky to me.

Danzo's lowest level, the curse seal controls people, Yakushi Kabuto, and then Scorpion's intermediate level, the brain manipulation technique, directly controls the brain. Even if others can't check it, Orochimaru is the most advanced one. Don't use any curse seal to control others. But let others willingly die for him

Update, how did you finish the book? Are you a eunuch? I have to say that this book is so healing!

It's fake, I thought it was the real Hokage at first... After reading a few chapters, I don't understand it, even if there is no bloodline, no system, etc., But as a time traveler, I am incompetent in the early stage, so I survive in a humble way... I don't have the basic understanding that different ways do not work together... I keep licking... Other licking dogs still have purposeful licking, and the author just licks for the sake of licking... The characters written by an author are often reflections of themselves...

The rain ninja at the beginning is actually not Konan

No, there are a lot of scoldings in the comments. I know this is not to your liking, but don't scold so much. You are already starved of books, otherwise you would read a book with so few recommendation votes. Please show some kindness. I think it's pretty good. At least I've ordered them all.

I rewarded 1314, if gkd, I will update two more chapters today, I will give you two more 1314

Aren't there ordinary people like Hokage?

Why does the protagonist go to Beautiful Country?

It's a pity that he is a eunuch, but it is understandable. After all, the author also has to eat.