I Really Just Want to Live Longer

Here we come. First of all, it is usually not easy for newcomers to read their new books, unless you are really lucky and hit the jackpot. This makes it difficult for many newcomers to persevere and think that no one reads it because they are not good at writing. In fact, sometimes you write well, but no one sees it at all. Then let's talk about this novel. I've only read part of it. It's about the system of time travel and what kind of spiritual practice there is. In fact, many people are writing about similar themes, but they all have their own creative ideas. The author has added longevity and a sense of urgency at any time. This is good and quite creative. After looking at the writing, it's okay, but there are still some shortcomings. The description of some scenes is not good enough, and the character needs to be strengthened. There are also some explanations, such as why marriage must be cancelled. This is just an example. In addition, please divide the paragraphs into smaller paragraphs to make them look more comfortable. Come on⊙▽⊙

The first day, publishing the book! Looking forward to seeing you all!