Pirates of Flash

After reading the novel, I only have one suggestion. Author, please change the golden finger of the protagonist to the ability of Quicksilver in Avengers. Author, you really failed to write the speed force. The ability that defies nature turned out to be a low-level ability. I suggest the author review it carefully and watch the beauty of The Flash. TV series, based on the ability shown in the American TV series, it is not a problem to defeat the pirates. Author, what did you write the Speed Force as? How long did it take for Barry to travel through time and space in the American TV series? You have been here for several years. Author, you should change it to Goldfinger. He was originally attracted by the Speed Force. Alas, he came in a hurry and returned disappointed.

The protagonist should not practice boxing, but practice swordsmanship. The vibrating sword master cuts all over the sky. The vibrating sword is as strong as you are. Think about 30 seconds to cut Kaido into a skeleton with some flesh. The color of the weapon is not indestructible. The same point 100 times, 10,000 times, 100,000 times. Whoever goes up will kneel down.

I read too many books, so when I look at the table of contents, I start to make up what I wrote in my head. After reading the table of contents, I don't want to read the latest two chapters.

Isn't the Speed ​​Force a casual abuse among pirates? Not to mention other things, after the speed reached the grown-up Barry, he took a knife and ran around the earth. In less than three seconds, the entire pirate world was chopped to pieces.

Here's a suggestion: When writing a Japanese comic book, it's best to follow the Japanese comic style when it comes to interpersonal dialogue and interactions, otherwise it will be awkward. After all, most of the readers are Japanese comic lovers.

Is your introduction funny? With your 10-meter white beard, you can only take five or six steps back.

The Speed ​​Force is such an awesome skill, but it feels like it is wasted in the hands of the protagonist. The destructive power of a steel bullet accelerating to 3-5 times the speed of sound is very terrifying. As long as you have a decent physical fitness, no one can hold a knife at the speed of the Speed ​​Force.

And according to the characteristics of the Speed ​​Force, when the protagonist arrives in the Pirate World and possesses the Speed ​​Force, the Speed ​​Force in the DC world will include the Pirate World and the parallel world.

Is the protagonist's speed of running 200 kilometers an hour definitely due to the speed force? I'm afraid an ordinary navy can't run at this speed, right? Could it be that everyone in One Piece is debuffed, and is it serious that the protagonist can kick someone in the head more than a thousand times and still not die? Even if the opponent is an animal type, is the author serious about this joke-like attack power? I'm not nitpicking, the setting of this book is just like one written by kindergarten children. The fifteen-meter pencil and other things are really surprisingly harmonious in this book! I'm really convinced!

Are you serious about this introduction... Whitebeard is over six meters long, right? You kicked Whitebeard away more than ten meters, which seems to be the distance Whitebeard can run in two steps.

Whitebeard is 6.66 Meters tall. Taking a step back more than ten meters is no different from an ordinary person taking two steps, let alone in the world of pirates? And this introduction can already dissuade most readers, right?

I haven't seen the Speed ​​Force after reading it for a long time. What on earth are you writing about?

The introduction is really awesome, he kicked Whitebeard more than ten meters away 😏

How can something as awesome as the Speed ​​Force come and go? At the beginning, the protagonist can catch bullets with his hands. When he was dealing with the Porcupine Pirates, did he watch him shoot and kill people? And then he was angry at his own incompetence? What about the Speed ​​Force? There are too many bugs, plot for the sake of plot. ?😥😥😥

It would be best to change the chapter titles in this table of contents, as they have nothing to do with the Speed ​​Force at first glance. I want to dance but I don't know how to dance

It's a bit tricky. First of all, the protagonist has the Speed ​​Force, so his speed is basically faster than the people in One Piece. As long as you get a chain of sea tower stones, people with fruit abilities can't handle it. 😴

The protagonist's Speed ​​Force Golden Finger might as well be replaced by Quicksilver's speed. Even if it doesn't work, the superhuman speed fruit will do. It's embarrassing to see the Speed ​​Force reduced to slag by the author.

Suddenly I realized that Garp's hometown is Windmill Town! Where did this small fishing village come from?

You were persuaded to quit at the beginning, why do you insist on getting married to the protagonist group?

Punch and dry hair, increase the speed, and the enemy will not react before you rub his heart. It is not easy for anyone, even if he is armed with colored iron blocks, etc., He will just GG before he can react.

I think it's great, author, come on