Are You Going to Open up Wasteland Together Tomorrow?

Shh! Keep your voice down, look what I found (๑ʘ̅ д ʘ̅๑)!!!? A wild cauliflower, for God's sake, can feed everyone in our camp for a whole day. It is rich in a variety of vitamins needed by the human body. It is very timid. The slightest sound will scare it away. The way it escapes is so special that it is difficult to catch up with it. ( ๑´ڡ`๑) Oh, Brady, look, I caught it, it struggled so hard, it must be a great guy in the cauliflower world, it's time for us to think about how to eat it, we don't have to worry about food for ten days, how about charcoal grilled cauliflower? Cut off a part and skewer it with a stick and brush it with a little butter. Under the residual heat of the charcoal fire, it emits a rich aroma. It is best to add a little black pepper. Then a charcoal-grilled cauliflower is ready. It has the fragrance of cauliflower and the taste of beef. (っ˘ڡ˘ς) I can't wait.

The writing is very good, and the novelty is worthy of encouragement. It's really nice to find a book like this when there is a book shortage. I hope the author can stick to it! ! !

The plot and writing are okay, the relationship between the characters is a mess, and the heroine is inexplicable. She just stole things at the beginning. I didn't see that she felt guilty. She didn't know to return them for so long. She gave her glasses to someone a few days after we met, and she became the heroine. The society inside is considered a representative of power, and the ruins are a symbol of wealth. With a group of people who have only met each other for a few days, you form a society. You don't need to guess to conquer the ruins. The protagonist is the first one. The relics are regarded as the property of the society. Does the author think it is reasonable? In the content, the protagonist has outstanding abilities and should act alone. He should be written as a lord. The society has a clear hierarchy. There are always a few characters popping up. They are familiar with each other in the previous life. They take the lead in fighting monsters and giving things. It is okay to write a rebirth article. They knew each other in the previous life and repay the favor. This is more reasonable. In real companies and guilds in online games, all have owners. The ten owners of your society are all people who have known each other for a few days.

How can I put it, when I saw the heroine giving my eyes to it, I didn't want to watch it 😓😓😓. It feels a bit too hasty and unacceptable.

Overall, it's okay, but I have to say a few words. Some details are not handled properly. It's obviously a Western fantasy story. Don't use a name like Ma Yun. It's easy to think of Ma Yun and Ma Rong. There are also "Shen Shang" and the like. It's not that it can't be used. If the writing is not strong enough, it will make readers feel that it is a drama.

I still like it very much and will support it by ordering it all. In fact, there are quite a lot of things in this book that are eye-catching. Many people complained about the clichéd setting, the protracted plot, and the unclear characters. But the author actually integrates it very well. Nian, star shells, map land reclamation, interesting props, etc. Are already very novel among so many online articles that are seriously homogenized. We need more encouragement for authors so that they can do better. The author insists to this day that he is really generating electricity for love, and the royalties are not enough for electricity bills. Those readers who have given me advice are also asked to write a book for everyone to appreciate. I hope the author can persevere and I believe your books will get better and better.

There are very few well-written books nowadays. This book is recommended by old bookworms. Come on, author.

I wonder why my grades are so bad. I always write some words that are self-explanatory and dramatic. This is a fantasy novel. You want to make the protagonist more flesh and blood. It is right, but it is hard to portray it as a frivolous joke. I can't stand it anymore. Goodbye

A seemingly huge worldview that incorporates too many elements will inevitably cause the power system to easily collapse and cause constant bugs! I've only read a few chapters and it's time for capsules, telekinesis, and potion systems to be chaotic in the later stages!

I've read a few volumes, but I can't stand it. Let me say a few words The title of the book is not very similar to the content. It's not about opening up wasteland, but "I am a miracle doctor and a nobleman in another world". This book has a similar title. The book is too stitched, the heroine is too abrupt, and other characters also say that the gods are hidden. This is not slow, but torturing the readers. I see that you have an outline, but can you write what needs to be written first, bit by bit, instead of stuffing a bunch of journey props and all kinds of ambush pens at once, and then changing hands and running to become a businessman, you know that I will make you stupid.

A very nice book, very novel. The author's writing style is sophisticated and there is nothing poisonous about it. Wonderful imagination

The logic in writing a novel must be clear. Just forget about a dislocated joint and say that no one dares to treat it due to traditional restrictions. Isn't it too much to pretend to be hypoglycemic? This is an extraordinary world, and the white mice are not necessarily white. Finally, there is the girl who steals things. She looks very strange. Don't force it to be too stiff just to show off.

With the hope of opening up wasteland, I persisted until Chapter 8, but I couldn't stand it anymore. Some of the descriptions were too deliberate and unnatural, and it felt a bit far-fetched. The first eight chapters are tasteless except for hip-hop, which is interesting. Whether it's the extraordinary setting or the description of the characters, I don't really like it.

Perfect and engagingly written.

I don't know why so many people like to write about slow-burning, to cover up your lack of imagination😅. To put it nicely, it's called slow-burning, but to sound bad, it's just boring. The first Garden dungeon was originally quite explosive, but it was written in a fog and I didn't understand it clearly. It was gone again, and it turned out to be a Riddler. There are so many talented people in the circus, but the plot of just two people is like feeding the juice to the mice.

It's a bit like that, it can be like an anime, come on💪

This is not a slow start, it is simply suicide. I didn't even understand what the story was in the first volume. . . . The pace can be slow, but the protagonist must awaken early and become stronger.

There are too many messy settings, and the author's writing power seems to be uncontrollable.

It's quite interesting, but this book is the ultimate suture monster.

One of the rare books that is neither cruel nor prankish.

From the name, I thought this book was average, but after reading it, I found that this book is really good. Good luck, author💪🤭

Shangxiang, I wonder if the author is crazy

Have you been a eunuch for 4 years? Time goes really fast

In the beginning, they were best friends, and the writing style suddenly changed into Harry Potter... The key is to follow Harry Potter in everything. When I entered the lounge and had to answer the door's questions, I didn't want to continue reading. It was a hardcore imitation.

The early stage was very good, and it can be said to have the potential of fairy grass. It went downhill from the protagonist's awakening to the extraordinary (the activation conditions and effects of the ability were extremely unreasonable), and the academy chapter basically entered the hardcore "tribute" Harry Potter + cool novel route. It can only be said that it is a pity that a good subject matter was wasted.

Record, November 7, two months off

It's been seven months. You can't be a eunuch anymore, can you?

I like it so much... But updates have been stopped! ! !

The idea is good, but Fengjia's crazy jokes are too dramatic.

Today is another day where I want to send souvenirs to Caihua. {"NickName":"cauliflower","UserId":314524149} If you don't update it properly, how will you support your family and send your children to kindergarten? Hurry, update! ! ! "Hot Terrier Series. Dog Head Saves Life. JPG"