Transmigrating to Tokyo to Be a Couch Potato

What the hell! Luoluosuosuo, Luoluosuosuo, Luoluosuosuo, this is the first time I read a novel, and I feel very upset when I read it. You can't write a novel simply and clearly, just be happy, why are you doing this, Luoluosuosuo, Luoluosuosuo, Luoluosuosuo, so angry, just like being nagged by mom, grandma, aunt, and a lot of elders. I'm so angry that I really want to punch you in the face!

After reading the first few pictures, I felt that it was a bit long-winded and off-topic, which greatly affected the readers' ability to invest in the continuity of the plot.

Although this book is written in a Japanese setting, because the author himself has never been to Japan, there are many un-Japanese places, just to avoid harmony, so don't be surprised. The anime characters that appear are also daily-style comics, such as Crayon Shin-chan, Lucky Star, etc.

The writing style of this novel gives people a smooth reading feeling, but the plot is a bit too simple! I turned around and took a sip of water, picked up my phone again, and the thought of reading was gone...😅

This is another fanfic with a Japanese world view, and the protagonist's name is Chinese. Doesn't the author think it's a joke?

If it were other types of novels, it would be food, but it is fan fiction, well integrated, and has a complete outline of the setting, and the coherence is also very good, it belongs to fairy grass.

. . . . . . . If you don't know Japan well, I think you should just write about China! It feels nondescript.

The plot is too drawn out. . . I can't understand what I'm looking at.

The first chapter is a preface, the second chapter is an introduction, the third chapter is like a narration, there is no sense of immersion before the third chapter, and Chapter 6 starts to feel a little bit

It looked okay from the beginning, but I feel sick hearing this name all the time, so I still won't watch it.