Eagle Claw Iron Shirt from the Start

You told me that the Eagle Catch Skill has no attack means and needs to rely on boxing. Funny

There was a problem with the settings from the beginning. You might as well just do the same thing as a punch. This weirdo is so harmful, ordinary people don't know? A man who destroys a city and a country, hiding a hammer? ? ? ?

It's a mess, learn the Eagle Claw Kung Fu, fight monsters with fists instead of claws, the company and the association are not enemies, watch the Cutting King kill all the twenty-something talents before taking action, they gave you the breathing technique, but you gave it to others privately, why don't you write a copy of the Eagle Claw Iron Cloth Shirt in your mind and send it to the Association to give to his men? Distorted views

The writing is getting more and more boring, the plot is difficult to follow at a glance, progress is slow, and updates are inconsistent. I think you, the author, no longer have the ability to continue writing this book. Maybe you are not very good at grasping the rhythm of genius flow. My suggestion is to cut it off and start a new book. Not many people are watching anyway, so stop struggling.

After reading more than 10 chapters, let me tell you my feelings. The logic is really bad. For example, the protagonist just killed the wolf class, and those people actually wanted to keep the murder a secret? Although these are secrets and are known to the police station, are they used to kill people? Also called the Heroes Association? There is also a problem with the setting of confidentiality. It has been thousands of years. Can you protect the monsters that appear randomly? Also, you said at the beginning that Bronze is considered a middle-level cadre. Generally, large companies have intelligence departments. You, a newly promoted Bronze, were not reacted at all by others, so you joined other people's important departments.

There is a poisonous point in this book. The protagonist has lived two lifetimes, obtained the skills of his master, and passed them on without the permission of his master. It is not worth it for an ordinary friend to offend his own master. Don't tell me secrets that others will not know. Once you tell it, it is no longer a secret, although it is only given to the first level.

When I first started watching, the protagonist traveled through time, encountered monsters, activated the system, and saw ordinary people in the outer world and superhuman beings in the inner world. The protagonist traveled through 28 years, and the world seemed peaceful. After the protagonist activated the system, I thought his combat power was similar to that of Kame Sennin. After more than ten chapters, I discovered that Frieza was not finished yet. At first, I thought that monsters should be as rare as wild beasts. After more than ten chapters, I discovered that monsters are like poultry, and there are nests wherever there are people. I haven't read much yet, so let's take a break.

Poisonous. Save time, great merits, Ami Tofu

I'm really convinced by this setting. I haven't seen weird things in 28 years. After seeing them once, they are everywhere. They also said that the crisis of annihilation turns out to be caused by humans in captivity. And the combat power of destroying cities and countries turns out to be able to make a small hole of several meters with one punch. Don't The story goes back home in the book, even the real South Korea is enough to destroy him for a few years. You still have the nerve to write about something that can destroy the mainland. Do you want to say that the average person is a fool? I suggest the author read Dragon Ball and other books before writing. Isn't it embarrassing for you to write indiscriminately without any knowledge?

Your title is too silly to deserve this book.