The Immortal Becomes Enlightened

The writing is good. The style of Weird Fairy has been wanting to read something similar since I read the fairy copy in Super Dawn. Unfortunately, many immortal novels with weird names are far worse than the copy of Super Dawn. Until I read this book, although it is not as good as Alchemy Notes and the copy of Super Dawn in all aspects, it is still very satisfying to me. I then suggest that the author refer to Alchemy Notes' descriptions of supporting scenes and the like. It is really good and it is all weird and should be used as a reference.

1. Update issues, try to update twice a day. The writing style of this book is set, so you won't drive around randomly, and there is an outline, so you don't have to worry about plot issues... Also, if I only have one chapter one day, it must be because I am stuck, so don't panic. 2. Principle of additional updates: a reward of 10,000 will be added once. 3. Friendly reminder: This book has passed the internal investment, which means that I can sign the contract after it reaches 6,000 words. Including the time of the express delivery contract, it will only take three or four days. Readers, please invest quickly. I am not trying to trick you into investing. When I change the status and you share the dividends, basically everyone will receive dozens of additional starting coins! Interjection: This book may be a little dark and cause some people psychological discomfort. If you can't stand it, don't force yourself... Really, leave in peace and stop having the author's mentality. The last book was criticized by some readers...

Okay, okay, it's been so many years since I've seen a plot with such ups and downs. In just seventy chapters, it shows an extremely grand and weird world view of cultivating immortals. The plot is so compact that I can't believe the usual author's criticism, especially the world of weird cultivators that is revealed bit by bit. It's like a divine book. One makes people want to know the story behind it. The last novel that felt like this was Zhetian and Not Minglun. As long as it is written down, it will be the next Gu Zhenren. There is a book of the dark sect (but the probability of becoming a god is not high after all, it is too difficult to be pure black). In short, the author should work hard.

This is suitable for old bookworms. Come on, author, give it a try first.

To be honest, the writing style of this book is still very good, but what makes me feel uncomfortable is that the protagonist in the article is too passive, and even abuses the master. It seems that the protagonist invites all kinds of abuse wherever he goes. Note that it is inviting sins and not Tai Chi Jade's misfortunes, but the author seems not to be able to tell the difference between the two. Even if the protagonist encounters various misfortunes, you can at least let the protagonist be more active, but now the protagonist always suffers passively. How should I put it? I have seen many book friends say that the protagonist has modern thinking. In fact, in my opinion, the protagonist in the author's work is a waste who relies on luck—— 1. Let's talk about the protagonist's mind first: obviously there are too many ghosts, but in order to highlight the early warning effect of Tai Chi Jade, the author forcibly wrote the protagonist into a weak-minded waste. The author may not realize this, but it is obvious. 2. Let's talk about the protagonist's IQ: It is obvious that in the author's writing, the protagonist is a person with an extremely mediocre IQ, but mixed with the author's own modern thinking. I have seen a summary of this book except for some rules - those who are stronger than the protagonist can play with the protagonist, and those who are weaker than the protagonist can still fool him around. Of course, some book friends may say that the information held by both parties is not equal, and some people say that it is more realistic to write this way. But in fact, I think it is unrealistic to have such a world of immortal cultivation. As the protagonist, you have to give him an advantage that is so awesome that everyone in Gaia. Is it possible that the protagonist should always rely on luck to become the strongest? The protagonist is obviously very weak, but you are giving him a mediocre IQ and being tricked by others. How can he get ahead? The third point is talent. Obviously the protagonist does not have any amazing talent. To sum up, the protagonist of this book is a waste with "three nothings". Another thing is that the author said that this novel is a dark novel, and there will be more darkness in the future. However, in order to write about darkness, the author forced to write all kinds of thrillers, and wrote the protagonist to be frightened and gasped when encountering horror. The most poisonous thing is that when encountering so many events, he can't express his emotions and anger. Whatever he encounters, his expression is written on his face, and there is too little description of the protagonist's growth. The protagonist is always passive wherever he is. It's like having such an incompetent protagonist in the Cthulhu style. The Cthulhu style is even more terrifying. I don't see the protagonist being so passive. The protagonist at least has a really high IQ. The plot of this book can be compact, but it cannot be passively drawn out. The above is what I want to express. I hope the author will read my comment. I am very grateful.

The author is really unable to give a name. Readers can leave the name of the trap here... Or you can think of the trick type of the trap and add...

Your book is too sinister. Can you give the protagonist a chance to breathe? If you want to create a scary atmosphere, that's not how you do it, right? It gives people a very disgusting feeling, as if everything happens to him, and he becomes stupid after using a routine too much. If the protagonist is the world view, can anyone still live in this world? There are all kinds of things, all kinds of ghosts, and the human heart is so sinister. Sooner or later, you have to block it. You can let the protagonist settle down for a few years or a few months, can't you? Can't the plot develop with the protagonist finding things on his own? From beginning to end, I have been writing passively. Do you have any awareness? I wanted to create a scary and depressing atmosphere, but now, it's starting to change. Things are always coming to you wherever you go. How many years ago was this routine? It's not that I can't read this kind of book, but as you write as if the whole world is dark, I care about your book getting 404 sooner or later. Please write more good people! In addition, what the protagonist wants now is knowledge to expand his worldview, instead of the messy kind where he just fights and kills all day long. He should read early, read quietly, and improve his worldview a little bit, isn't that good? It feels like a childish person, but he still displays a very clever calculating behavior, a sense of isolation! If you don't know how to write, take a look at Klein, the Lord of Mysteries. The protagonist you wrote has a little bit of his image, but he is like a fool without knowledge! ! ! Everything is passive and never takes the initiative. The whole text is on the road of fighting. There is no sense of transition in life and not enough knowledge. The whole text is just depressing and weird. It is one thing to be banned sooner or later. Your monotonous style is already limited.

I hope there will be two or three female protagonists to make the protagonist feel a little concerned and not too dark. Moreover, in this chaotic world, the best way for men to relieve stress is through women.

How can you write a book that is so popular as soon as you start writing it? You don't even have the most basic persistence to write a book.

It's really a pity that I wrote it too early and didn't catch up with the weird fairy flow. I caught up after persisting for a while, alas.

I could have become a god, but it has declined.

Wait until chapter 100 to read again. I was deceived emotionally by the previous book.

It's 2022 and I'm still waiting for updates

😅This book is very well written, I have to open a new book, and the new book will also be eunuch 😅😅

The author writes just enough words every day to put it on the shelves. I have never seen such a shameless person.

Who will read your book without a complete book?

Just reading the introduction, I want to know if people in this world grow by a handful every year? Not all of them are dead yet? !

The author writes well. The Survival Manual in a Weird World has more than 200 pre-orders. I have been working hard to update it, and now it has almost 4,000 pre-orders. You must persist in writing books. Don't think about starting a new book because the first order is not good, otherwise no one will keep chasing your novel.

I can see that the author is now considering which book to write. After all, a new book has been published and there are many voices asking for an old book, so a bit of vacillation is inevitable. Now the problem is obvious, that is, it has been swinging for too long. This book is a little more updated, and that book is a little more updated, and there will be a break in updates for a day or two. This will definitely cause a large loss of readers. So the author has to make a decision, whether to continue with the new book or to update the old book. It is not advisable to bet on both sides. And a big shortcoming of the author is that he cares too much about readers' comments. You need to know that everything has both positive and negative evaluations, let alone a subjective novel? But the author only sees negative comments and ignores more positive comments. I hope you can face comments more positively instead of being swayed by readers. Remember, you are the author.

Is it interesting to start a new book when your grades are bad? It's strange that the results are not bad in the past few days. Bye-Bye

This book has tens of thousands of orders. It's a pity that the author couldn't hold on.

I'm really convinced. You can start a group and get some people in. You can start a new book. No one knows about it, and there's nothing you can do to support it.

It's such a pity. If you stick to it, it will be a masterpiece.

After so long, I still feel a bit pity

Two years😎🤓😭

Good boy, you sneaked into the palace quietly, right?

Go ahead and make some incense. Every time you click on Qidian, you will still click on this book

Why did it stop updating? Please recommend something similar, I want to see it 😁

Go to the grave

Go to the grave