I Used Evil Spirit to Refine the Great Elixir

For non-professional book reviews, the conclusion should be put first. You can expect high-quality products, but it is difficult to order. Since this is my review, let's talk about the advantages first. The first one, although the suspense is simple and does not have a majestic and majestic feeling, it is well laid out. It is really refreshing to read it in one breath and heartily. Second, the rhythm is very good, and there is almost no fat. It is mainly good in two aspects. One is the grasp of the big rhythm, neither long nor short, just right. The other is the arrangement of the small rhythm, which is in place. As I read it, I felt a sense of ups and downs. Third, for the application of reversal, this is the best, personal feeling. Whether it is the identity of Qing Xuzi in the big rhythm, or the fake Chi Mingsang in the small rhythm, the use of reversal is wonderful. In the first chapter, the atmosphere was created and blown away. Three advantages, which complement each other, give this book the potential to be a masterpiece. Let's talk about the shortcomings. The first one is purely a matter of writing ability. For example, entering a brothel and suddenly being controlled by the second brother's mind is a poisonous point for some readers. Also, the emotional changes are incoherent. Master Qingxuzi accepts a new disciple without even asking why the disciple is not doing well. This is really just a plastic master-disciple relationship. Moreover, even if it is a true plastic master-disciple relationship, it must be explained. Second, it's thirty chapters, and there is always a situation where the world cannot be opened. The book was originally based on evil, and it is full of fog. At this time, the world view has not been opened, and it always gives people a feeling of restraint. This is not a good reading experience. Also, the same goes for the realm system. If there are too many hidden things, it is better to only hide certain points. The depressing feeling + awkward characterization make the opening lose its luster. If it continues like this, Wanding will basically say goodbye. That's basically it. Mua~

My favorite book about this kind of book is Taoism, martial arts and so on. I'm tired of reading it. If I still write about martial arts now, if I don't have good writing skills, I have no brains. People are tired of aesthetics. Reading too much of the same thing will get boring. Nowadays, many authors are trying to innovate but they don't have the strength, so they fall away. However, there are still many writers with sufficient strength who just follow the old routines. Those routines can guess several endings after reading three chapters. What's the point of this? I'll beg those authors. Well, how can you write well if you don't understand the needs of the mass market? I have seen a book with good writing, but a bad name, and it was rejected by the public. There was also a book that wrote the protagonist as an ugly and greasy middle-aged man. People are inspired, and they will also grasp the needs of the public. You can just think about it. Who will want to read it? Many people can't help but be drawn into the world in the novel when they read it. You are wild and unreasonable, with illogical logic and typos everywhere. Not many people can continue to read it. What is the purpose of reading novels? To pass time and entertain. You can at least make people happy to read it. Go by yourself. Be patient and polish every sentence. It doesn't matter if you fail at the first one. Those who write well now have accumulated fans when they first started. The first time you write, you can't compare to others. To gain a full reputation, you must be self-aware and don't think about becoming a god with one book. You will get results if you write slowly and steadily. In a word, don't use routines.

Being educated by many readers, I have deeply realized the loopholes in the plot. Wait, it will be available to everyone in a week at most after the new book has passed the internal submission... It is still a supernatural theme, and the plot is made more rounded... Sorry, dear readers, we will start again with the new book.

The protagonist's old circuit is a bit different from ordinary people. I almost died in the illusion formation just now, but was saved by a Taoist priest. The Taoist priest invites the protagonist to join Tianling Temple. Ordinary people don't hug him right away, at least be polite. The protagonist's tone is the same as someone begging to join. And after this incident, the protagonist should have some idea. His Yanghuo is not invincible, so he will just kill the kid. But later in the ghost village, he still saw ghosts and used the knife, which was so reckless. Of course, the writing is quite good, I'm just sharing my personal feelings.

I have read your book, and there is nothing wrong with the writing. The whole story is about Lin Zhengying fighting Pleasant Goat. I also have a soft spot for commas, and I will always tease them to the end. As for the title and introduction of the book, if it were not for an archaeologist, it would be difficult to understand, and the supernatural novel would be written as Zizhi Tongjian.

Author, you only have more than 30 pieces in one novel, so you are about to write a new book. This is not like the eunuch who has changed his form and will not be updated.

It was a waste of time to stop writing this excellent book.

This weirdness is too childish and boring

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Why is there no level of cultivation in this novel by the author?

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If you are not in your position, you will not pursue your political goals. I suggest the author not to write like this. He writes too much about being barbaric and corrupting the popularity of passers-by.

Too little, just keep watching Don't be tickled to death by me

The new book is calm, it would be a pity to cut it off like this

It's rare to find a good book. I read Chapter 45 of Walking the Yin Road in one breath and started to get into the mood The disadvantage is that playing the uncle to seduce the protagonist is too cliche The two ghosts who trapped Wu Yinzi were too deliberate I wish the author to write better and better

Why do others always talk to the protagonist on the grounds that the village does not exist? Does this have anything to do with the protagonist?

Sigh... It seems like it's all in vain.

Author, I think this novel of yours is okay. The protagonist is relatively clear-headed and kills decisively and steadily. He is not the kind of brainless protagonist who is suddenly invincible, Ao Tianwen, or the kind of protagonist who feels aggrieved to death. During the course of the article, the Madonna and the philanderer are constantly being blamed by others. Keep up the good work, author. Oh, and the author, you can also make this into a game.