The Gourd's Journey Across Ten Thousand Worlds

I'm poisoned... What's the cause and effect of those six gourds? If you want to use them to scheme for personal gain, just use them directly. Draw a causal link here; that's too insidious. They're not even from the same primordial world anymore. How did they become entangled in this causal relationship? The causal relationship only exists because you gave them something.

I'm speechless. This is a hybrid mess. The mainstream primordial fantasy story usually involves Pangu creating the world, various great calamities, or the existence of the Three Sovereigns like Cangli. This version doesn't even mention sages, but you've gone so far as to suggest that Nuwa, who wasn't even Hongjun's disciple, should create humans to become sages.

It's getting more and more frustrating to read, I'm not reading anymore. They even have restrictions on comments, I just can't stand it anymore. I'll subscribe to a few chapters and say a few words later.

It's incredibly imaginative, a completely different kind of prehistoric world, but I don't have the patience to keep reading; it feels like it'll take a lot of brain cells.

I really like the author's setting of the Primordial World, but the author's writing of the Yangshen World is too drawn out. After all, in the author's setting, the Primordial World is the original world in this Chaos Sea (capable of influencing all worlds, it is the most fundamental and powerful world in this Chaos Sea), while the Yangshen World is just a Great Thousand World on the verge of…

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The latest installment of Yang Shen's "The Other Shore of the Great Luo" elevates the Other Shore to the level of the Great Luo, which I personally feel is a bit too high. The previous novel, "Perfect World," also had an Immortal Emperor at the Great Luo level, and now Yang Shen's "The Other Shore of the Great Luo" is also a Great Luo. I think it would be good if Yang Shen's "The Other Shore of the Great Luo" could be compared to the True Immortal in "Perfect World."

Author, please put some effort into this! You've boosted the fan book by over 5,000 times, but only added 3,000+ favorites... Anyone with eyes can see something's wrong. And the favorites should be roughly equal in number too. Boosting data without thinking... Are you insulting the intelligence of passersby or just fooling yourself?

Does the practice of sworn brotherhood exist in every era?

I'm truly impressed by the cause-and-effect logic in this book.