Notes on the Counterattack of the Immortal Son-In-Law

[Book Title] "Notes on the Counterattack of the Immortal Son-in-law" [Author] Flowers Bloom and Leaves Fall [Number of Words] 5w [Type] Eastern Fantasy 1. Introduction to the Book Title The title of the book has been criticized as "everything can be adopted as a son-in-law". Indeed, there are so many books starting with a son-in-law that bad money chases good money, and it is easy to stop moving forward because of the title of the book. This was also my initial thought, but later I discovered that writing about a son-in-law also depends on the writing style, and this book has some real flavor. The introduction is very straightforward, explaining the tragic situation of a man in the Chenyuan Valley who entered the Immortal Gate of the Immortal Marriage in order to live forever. The environment at the beginning to suppress it does have a sense of substitution caused by refreshing the concept, plus the spoiler text in the introduction? The Xianmen text copy is okay╮(￣▽￣)╭. She leads the men to rise up in a sect of vegetarian women with low status, and it is very delicious to eat soft rice by herself (?) From the introduction to this, it is a normal son-in-law story, nothing special. But when I read it, I realized that the author tried his best to interpret the true fragrance with his writing power. 2. The beginning 1. Upon first reading, the book's momentum is very successful. The beginning of the chapter is about the high-spirited protagonist, who has saved enough money in the secular world, and has a marriage contract with the fairy from the fairy sect, the little Loli from back then, thinking that he can enter the vegetarian sect and cultivate the way to immortality. I never thought that the Su Nu Sect would not be able to enter, and would still be staying in the Chenyuan Valley at the foot of the mountain with a bunch of men. Men are divided into four levels here. Being a furnace and being in the first two levels must be full of joy. It is simply a dog-licking world. The protagonist is at the end of the third level, and the ridicule from passers-by is the tool used by the fairy to cut off the fate of the world. The opening chapter uses contrast, from expectation to pouring cold water to creating a sense of crisis, which suddenly fills up the contradictions and hidden dangers. It creates a strong immersive atmosphere through the conflict and the protagonist's mental journey. Readers who like to watch the male protagonist counterattack and marry a fairy should not miss it. 2. Another feature at the beginning of this book is the chaotic group of images in the Valley of Dust. There are licking dogs who want something but don't get it, there are licking dogs who bully others, there are heartbroken licking dogs, there are also licking dogs who share the same hatred and the same enemy, and naturally there are licking dogs who are jealous. The scene of "relying on brothers outside" is vividly portrayed. There were very few fairies in the early stage, it was all a group of men confiding their love for their own fairies to other men. Wow, this is the first time in this world that men are suppressed like this. They are all lickers! There are many characters in it, but I actually think it's a big no-no at the beginning of the novel. However, the author's writing style is sophisticated and his portrayal is quite clear, which weakens the strangeness and discomfort. He generally knows that all men are brothers in the world. Although there are villains who commit crimes, the general tone is still a team of dog-lickers. It seems that in the new environment, although there is a crisis, the violence is not strong, and there is a hint of immortality and mundaneness. 3. The distance between immortals and humans is strengthened in the text. In most of the previous works on cultivating immortals, the main character in the first three chapters gets the system and immediately enters the cultivating immortality mode. It is not very skillful to pretend to be 13 and beat up children. But this book is not. Now it's 50,000 words. The protagonist hasn't even touched the fate of cultivating immortality. Instead, he uses his knowledge and foresight to guide the other buddies. Only when the gap between humans and immortals is magnified will you know how much effort men have to put in to get close to immortals (fu) and children (po). The gap between mortals and immortals is truly like a chasm. Let that reader understand that the protagonist has a long way to go before he successfully counterattacks. The general background and environment are intensifying this conflict, making this book seem less frivolous and depressing. We are also worried about why the protagonist has not practiced cultivation, but the protagonist has a very good character, his IQ is online throughout, and he is resourceful and resourceful, which are all bonus points. It will only make people want the author to code faster. 4. Partially written and entertaining content has not yet appeared. But it can basically be a sign that with the appearance of the heroine Tang Xianzi and the suppression of the villain, these basic methods are indispensable. 3. Writing Style 1. The author has written book reviews for his books since "The First Sword Sect". There is naturally no big problem with the ancient charm of the writing style. Even if there are some modern words, to be honest, it is a necessary compromise in order to be suitable for modern people to read, and it is harmless. It is also a type of Xianxia author with solid foundation and profound artistic conception. If the writing style makes people comfortable to read, it is a success. The fairy spirit and the earthly elegance are all vividly displayed. 2. The author works very hard to portray the taste of Jianghu. The so-called chivalry, selfishness and righteousness can occasionally make people feel something. Although it is just a book that brings joy, it also inserts some content that is enough to heighten emotions and is full of tension. The use of basic techniques such as foreshadowing, rendering, and foiling are all pure, deliberately taking care of the readers' reading senses, knowing where to fill up, where to speed up, tight but not stretched, and the overall look is still very comfortable. 4. Characters 1. Male Protagonist: Li Xuan The male protagonist is both wise and courageous, has high emotional intelligence, and is mature and steady in dealing with others. This kind of male protagonist does not have to be wary of jumping out of roles from time to time, and is attracted by the male protagonist's self-confidence. This is a more likable male protagonist image. Although he has not yet cultivated immortality, his talent, enlightenment, and treatment of others are spotless, which makes readers feel safe. 2. The heroine: Tang Xianzi has never appeared so far. There are many suitors within 50,000 words, and the profile description is used to the extreme. What an excellent fairy. Unfortunately, my heart has been secretly attached to the male protagonist since childhood. The male protagonist is destined to be a soft rice, but he just doesn't know whether it's sweet or not, and he doesn't care whether he's full or not. This is also a form that I like to hear and see. After all, it is too bitter in Chenyuan Valley. I have written a full 50,000 words, and Fairy Tang comes to sprinkle sugar. What's wrong? It took 50,000 words or more to raise readers' expectations for the fairy, which is a beautiful splash. 3. Supporting characters Because there are too many licking dogs, I won't introduce them one by one. Either they have wives, or they are men who have been abandoned by fairies, but living in Chenyuan Valley, everyone is very loyal. Their appearance allows the male protagonist to quickly integrate into the environment of Chenyuan Valley. Occasionally there are conflicts and conflicts, but there is not too much violence. It is peaceful. Reading it, I feel that maybe these are brothers in distress. 4. The villain does his duty and does not give a good look. There is no big death, and there is no big highlight or need. 5. Comprehensive After reading the 50,000 words, the tone of this book should be unhurried and unhurried. First, establish a firm foothold in the Valley of Destiny, and then sprinkle sugar with the fairies. Overall, there are too many supporting characters to remember, but fortunately, the male protagonist is able to handle things with ease and is neither humble nor overbearing, and is favored by readers. Coupled with the overall gentle style of cultivating immortals, there is a kind of elegance and fairy spirit, which makes this book very readable in terms of tone and plot. I am still waiting for Fairy Tang to come back in a month... I still have to watch a few big men fight each other for a month... I can only tell the author to hurry up.

[Personal comment, please delete if you don't like it] I was confused after reading the first chapter, what the hell is this? T_T, how come everything can be a son-in-law? To be honest, I don't think it's well written T_T, and it's obviously from ancient times, so why are there so many modern words T_T This is obviously unreasonable, right?

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The author's writing is very beautiful, come on! Come on! Come on!

The writing style is quite good, the writing is brisk and smooth, the plot is also very rhythmic, and it also leaves enough suspense and foreshadowing. It feels like everyone in it has a story. The setting of the article is also very novel, but the number of words is a little less now. I look forward to continuing to update, and men will stand up and counterattack as soon as possible. As a girl, I also like this kind of writing the most, it looks very cool. It's just that the female characters in it are a bit annoying. Looking forward to the follow-up.

I like this routine, men, rise up and let these stupid white girls who think they are noble surrender.

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Is it time to add some detail here?

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This son-in-law of yours - is he crooked?

These days, you can really do anything for a son-in-law😅😅😅

The writing is good~ I'll look forward to it~

The great writing style is getting better and better after being polished in two books. Maybe this book will become a masterpiece.

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