The First Sword Sect

Overall Rating: 76.5 Author: Flowers bloom and leaves fall without return Theme: Male Channel·Oriental Fantasy Number of words read: 5.7W/5.7 W Commentator: Nai Gan Yu Jun Jue 1. Introduction to the book title (13.5/20) Book title (6/10) The title of the book is not particularly brilliant, but it is more concise. Introduction (***/10) The introduction is very short, but very elegant. The advantage is that the momentum of traditional fantasy comes out, and it has a bit of invincible flow, which makes people want to explore. The disadvantage is: after all, I am not a master, and my coldness in the early stage may cause a certain loss of readers. 2. Writing style (15.5/20) The writing style is majestic and full of aura from the beginning. The description of the world of cultivating immortals also seems natural, with rich character descriptions, martial arts that focus on "power", which is relatively difficult to set up, and the reversal is a bit passionate, but this kind of emotional sustenance is a bit like hanging on. How to grasp the emotions that are created in order to become stronger depends on the individual's writing style. Of course, using one's mind to enter martial arts is relatively rare in fantasy. It is more common in classic fantasy in the past, and it is still quite competitive. 3. The beginning (16/20) Introduced with small events and introduced from the perspective of others, it does have a surprising and natural feeling compared to other conventional openings, and it also makes the protagonist Qin Tiange more subtle. In the face of the majestic atmosphere created at the beginning, the protagonist's momentum has begun to take shape, and his leadership style is just right to control this atmospheric world view, and he already feels invincible. It is a relatively classic and charming traditional fantasy. And the pace is very fast, skipping the novice village and training, starting from the current confrontation with the father who is the best swordsman in the world, and then tracing back to the origin of the golden finger. The plot is not too obstructive to read. 4. Plot setting (15/20) Follow the traditional fantasy of cultivating immortals, but rarely mention the level concept of force setting, which makes readers feel a little blurred, and they do not know the difference between foundation building and qi refining, golden elixir and foundation building. There are countless stories in the books of golden elixir disciples, it seems that the golden elixir is just getting started, some are too strong in the early stage, and the combat power is suspected to collapse. Secondly, there is the concept of demons and monsters. Demons include both demons and demons. Will the demons in the demon realm be confused with the demons in the demon cultivator? The same is true for the concepts of monsters and monsters. The golden finger is a brain obtained from another world, and thus knows the fact that the demonic realm is about to invade. Through the calculation and deduction of the brain, it can easily analyze the skills, calculate the best practice path, and create a small world where the time flow of the large and small Sumeru worlds is delayed by ten times or a hundred times, and the spiritual power is abundant ten times or a hundred times. The Invincible style has begun to take shape, and it is basically the disciples who show off their skills in front of outsiders. The protagonist, even if he possesses sword power, a powerful stunt that is not available in the golden elixir, still maintains the appearance that his skills have not improved in the past ten years in front of the world. The foreshadowing has been laid here, and it is slowly unraveling, and I have begun to enter the fantasy reading experience. The people of the Duanyue Sect have no idea about the current state and strength of the protagonist. Amid internal and external troubles, people's hearts are divided, and there are clowns who think too highly of themselves. Although it is still being laid out and laid out, it has been too long. Now, we are waiting for the contradiction to intensify and the protagonist to be slapped in the face at any time. Although I also know that the time and occasion are not yet ripe. Only when you can master the sword is it worthy for the protagonist to take action. But laying the groundwork for too long will squander expectations and patience, and you need to be careful. In addition, the story focuses on resisting the demonic realm, and early preparations are essential, so it has the flavor of a farming novel. The early stage of farming is comfortable, which is somewhat different from the rhythm of fantasy. It is necessary to grasp the pen and ink and energy allocated between "development" and "plot". Another point is the fighting, which I find very demanding. The grand atmosphere is also made up of world settings, and sometimes there is a lack of imagination. 5. Overall perception (16.5/20) It is one of the few traditional fantasy genres that is still competitive today. In terms of narrative skills and momentum, there is a kind of scornful self-confidence and leadership style, making the whole book look stable and reliable, and suitable for the current reading rhythm. Oriental fantasy is full of charm, and its writing and description are competitive among similar works. The whole book is very comfortable to read. If the setting and world structure were not clear enough, and small sects and other practice systems are still in the process of being brewed, it would have a more practical cognition and perception. The main plot should be the story of the protagonist leading the powerful Duanyue Sect and other small sects to resist the invasion of the demonic realm, gradually seeking the truth of the world, and becoming an immortal. As for the protagonist, the timing and rhythm of foreshadowing and release need to be controlled by yourself. After all, it is still a seedling, and the stand-alone period is normal. Stay calm, don't rush for success, and avoid procrastination. _(•̀ω•́ ∠)_Moved here in time to help put it on the shelves

The concept is very novel and the basic skills are also very good. The character of the protagonist and the development of the plot are also very interesting. At a glance, there are almost no flaws. It is a book with great potential. I hope the author can continue to write it.

Please don't confuse the two. There is a very bad trend in the starting point of insulting the Holy Mother. What is there to insult the Holy Mother? They are not ordinary people like us. Mediocre people can trample on them at will. On the contrary, they should be worthy of our respect. In such a society, they can still treat others with kindness. This is already very incredible. When you are in urgent need of help, or when your family is sick, those who donate money to help you can also be called holy mothers. Should they be reviled by us? Our mother's watch is what we should really rebuke. Really, I am not very old, but I will often help others, just within my ability, but at least I have helped. I think that when people live in this world, what can reflect their own value is to help others and benefit others Don't everyone long to be a hero? A hero is not a kind of Virgin Mary.

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I've invested in you. The protagonist will be written according to this character. It's good that some people will like it. Don't think about becoming famous all at once and making evil money first.

Don't look at it now, wait until the protagonist pretends to be a big dick and call me again. Otherwise, it is too uncomfortable now and the sense of substitution is too strong. Unfortunately, I don't have the tolerance. I always want the protagonist to show his strength directly.

Title: The First Sword Sect Type: Fantasy The title and introduction of this book are quite satisfactory and not very attractive, but the content is very good! The author's way of using the perspective of others to highlight the protagonist at the beginning of the chapter is very interesting. However, it seems that some readers don't accept this kind of thing. I think it's pretty good! The only shortcoming is that the preparation in the first two chapters is a bit slow, which may dissuade some readers. But in the third chapter, the main plot came out, and then it was time for the protagonist to perform! By the way, the golden finger is not very obvious, which is a negative review. But overall it's very good, good luck to the author!

With the hope of becoming a god, it's really crazy that this suddenly appeared on the shelves.

After watching it for so long, I felt that there was a big problem. I always felt that the characters were awkward in their dialogues. I often couldn't tell who was speaking in the first place, and it was very uncomfortable to watch. Moreover, the protagonist lacks a lot of psychological description. There are some things that I don't know what he wants to do or what he is thinking about. There is a lack of visible clues. I hope the author can continue to work hard and write better.

There are activities in the group. There are red envelopes in the group. There are... In the group...

I started to feel a bit dissatisfied with this book, I wanted to give up the book after only a few chapters. Unexpectedly, the more I watched, the more fascinated I became, and the more I watched, the more beautiful it became. When I saw the part where I entered the land to slay demons, I felt like a dragon among all the people. It was amazing. They all have stories, and I also have wine. I wish I was one of them. During the game, I always thought that the protagonist would show off and challenge everyone with one sword! The result was very unexpected, another subordinate came, I was very surprised! Very cool. I finished reading it in one go and regretted seeing it too early! One thing I don't quite understand is why the protagonist brings that witch with him. According to the routine of other novels, the protagonist wants to show off or get a witch maid or something. But I felt it was not that simple, so I didn't complain! The protagonist is a very unique person. It won't be that superficial. Just a witch!

I'm not good at writing novels, and I haven't signed a contract for 150,000 yuan. I can only come here to learn from experience.

The text of the work is concise yet beautiful. The work is very good and worth reading and collecting. The protagonist and supporting characters have distinct personalities and have their own character traits. Reading this book is like entering the world of the book. Facing the ups and downs with the protagonist, there is an immersive feeling. It is worth watching. Three words summarize "good", "excellent" and "good"

Here you go, I'll make an appointment for you. It's too young, you have to hold on. I'll take a look when it gets stronger.

I originally thought that it would be on the shelves with about 250,000 words, so that I could accumulate more fans. Now that it is on the shelves with 150,000 words, I feel that the operation is very confusing.

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Is there a missing chapter between chapters 198-199? . . Did I watch one less episode? ? ? In addition, I feel that the protagonist is killing people too casually now, and there is a lot of lack of human touch. The guard of the young city lord knew that he was defeated but still inexplicably attacked him. It gave a strange psychological description, and he had no idea why he wanted to attack him. Furthermore, sometimes I feel that the camera angle shifts too quickly. For a big competition, I could just write down the situation in a little detail. After a game, I don't know what the outcome will be. Then there are many places that should not be left blank. A bit of exciting fighting and a seemingly coherent plot will be more attractive, instead of just one or two sentences of description, and then a few people disappear. They look handsome, but they can't feel the charm. There is also the Zunfa Association's annihilation. I really didn't understand it. I entered the tiger's den alone and killed the needle. The high-level feeling about the protagonist is almost the same. After the family was wiped out, no one thought the protagonist was ruthless, and the innocent disciples were not spared. He should at least have a title similar to the devil. Moreover, for such a big matter, there were no higher-level cultivators (management) to deal with these matters. It just passed by indifferently. It was really a confusing operation. To be honest, I saw this book written by the author in the chapter review of The Lord of One Life. I feel that there are indeed many more eye-catching and outstanding aspects of this book than The Lord of One Life, so I have higher expectations for the author and hope to write better. The things I said above are not necessarily correct. I am just expressing my own feelings, mainly because I was confused after reading the latest chapters. I will say whatever comes to mind, haha. And lastly, I think the most important point is that when the last volume was finally finished, the main character's wish was to travel around the world. In this new volume, I expected the main character to wander around the world alone and enjoy grievances. As a result, he now starts to make alchemy and open a sect and train disciples. It feels very strange. I know that the author must have his own reasons for this arrangement, but it may not be the point that attracts me, or it may be that the plot is not there yet. I will watch it for a while, and I hope the author will continue to work hard!

There is a bug. You said that the inner world and the outside world are separated by thousands of years, so the language should always change, right? Then why can the protagonist understand outsiders? Our country can develop a dialect every few decades, but some people can't understand it. A bug

The part where the protagonist Shen Jianhu leads his men to dance with swords is so exciting. The recommendation vote has been cast. Please update it.

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Why did it end so suddenly? 😰😰 It was too abrupt.

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