What Should I Do About My Junior Sister Always Flirting With Me?

Su Baiyin

I just finished my investment, come here to share my thoughts on this novel There are many harem novels, but there are not many novels that can write harem novels. This novel is one of the best ones (of course, I am not sure now whether it is a harem) First of all, the most wonderful thing about this book is the characterization of the characters, the cute Gu Xiaobei, the cunning Ye Ziling, the interesting Da Huang, and the honest He Mingdao (emm Although he doesn't appear much), his character is full and distinctive, full of life, and the interaction between the characters is also very natural, which can be said to be quite good The plot can also be seen to be very careful and has a lot of foreshadowing, such as the protagonist's life experience, the relationship between the senior sister and Gu Xiaobei, and why the senior sister is so good to the protagonist Ah (a blind guess is related to the protagonist's life experience), the origin of the senior sister and so on, and I am very much looking forward to the meeting between the protagonist and No. 28 In terms of writing style, I read it very smoothly, very relaxed, and very funny Let me give you a few more suggestions The most important thing I want to suggest is the author's introduction! The title of the book is okay, but the introduction is really not good. I clicked on this book twice, and then missed it because of the introduction. This introduction is written. . . It gives me the feeling that a sect disciple and a female seductress have a grudge and grudge in the city. An urban genre novel with a single heroine and a Qiong Yao style wrapped in a cultivation jacket. . . Not only does it fail to reflect the content and characteristics of the novel, but it also misleads readers! ! ! It is recommended to change the introduction, preferably to show the relationship between several characters, with a bit of comedy. And don't mention the spiritual energy recovery, how can this book have the characteristics of spiritual energy recovery (dead fish eyes) Secondly, I hope to add a few more tagged characters, such as Da Huang, He Mingdao, Lin Yuan, no matter whether there are pictures or not, at least put their names on it first Finally, I hope the author will work hard and work hard. I am very optimistic about this novel. Well, if the author sees that I am so serious and dedicated in writing reviews in the middle of the night, it would be better if he could add a few more chapters.

Plant a picture today and reap countless harvests tomorrow

Su Baiyin

Isn't everyone raising them? No way, no way!

Suddenly this feels better

In my opinion, this book scores around 7 points. The writing is good, the protagonist's IQ is online, and the heroine is well portrayed. But in the first and second volumes, I felt that the male protagonist was careless towards the female protagonist, and most of their relationship was given to the female protagonist for free. The male protagonist felt at ease, so... He was quite a scumbag (but the male protagonist was set up to be a scumbag, so that's okay) Mainly because the supporting character asked the heroine to confess to the heroine through the protagonist. The paragraph was not written well, and the male protagonist's inner unhappiness was not directly written (more for the reader to ponder, for example, the protagonist also went there), which made me unhappy. I feel that the protagonist has a crush on the heroine (almost 150 chapters in), and it's more like being favored and feeling a little bit unhappy. The feelings are mutual, but I didn't feel it in that chapter, and it seems to be taking advantage later (only before that chapter, I feel that the author's writing is not strong enough, and giving love is like taking advantage). Later, I said that being unhappy with the supporting character can be redeemed a little bit, and it is not too late to make amends. After getting to know my sister, the emotional description gradually became better, probably because I have gained experience, and it is not bad. What really persuaded me was the third volume. I skipped reading it. Probably the author wanted to write that not only 27 likes 28, but also Lu Shinian likes Lin Zhian, but I think it is no different from the drug. He wears a vest to pick up the heroine, and he is proud of his love... It would be better if both of them don't know their identities. Isn't this more interesting... Or someone else? I was speechless at the beginning, but it was okay... I think 2728 why does pure emotion have to become so complicated? There are many ways to sublimate feelings, but the author chose the one I disliked the least, which made me feel impurities. Add the two and subtract 1 point. I was looking forward to it at first, but now I just feel uncomfortable and unhappy. However, there was no contact such as kissing during the flipping. If you don't mind, you can continue watching. The rest of it should be quite sweet. Withdrawn.

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Complete, precise, understand?

After reading over a hundred chapters, I fully subscribed. When reading the first few dozen chapters of this book, you can still see a lot of loopholes in thinking, and some of the characters are slightly embarrassing, but in the later chapters, the characters are also much more fleshed out. Lin Zhian, who is straight on the outside and clear at heart, Ye Ziling, who is cunning and smart, cute Gu Xiaobei, sultry He Mingdao, naive Dahuang and the senior sister who looks like a royal sister. They are all very good, and I always feel warm when I see them get along. I also like Ye Ziling very much ❤️. I give my best support to the author. I hope the author can continue to improve. Book friends who come later must insist on reading the book. I beg the author to improve it a lot