Primordial Chaos: I Want to Be the Human Emperor

It's rare to see a novel where the protagonist transmigrates into the human race and then strives for its development. I highly recommend it. I've only read a few chapters so far, up to the part about drinking milk. I feel there's a slight problem with the author's writing: the protagonist is a transmigrator who knows drinking animal milk is beneficial, yet he hesitates to drink it. His reason?

Please help me light up the little red heart on the character's icon. I'm so grateful!

I think that since the author wanted to write about a human emperor, the protagonist should at least have some heroic spirit, like the Qin Emperor and Emperor Wu of Han. I've only just seen where it's listed, so I don't know what will happen to the main character later on. Anyway, I haven't seen much of the heroic spirit that a leader of the human race should have in the main character so far.

The writing is starting to feel a bit petty. You're not writing a prehistoric tribal farming story; you're writing about the primordial era. It would be better if you wrote something grander and more expansive.

I felt the protagonist lacked a domineering aura in the early stages; the writing focused on intrigue rather than outright strategies. I hope the author will add more of that later on—the protagonist knowingly seizes your power and fortune, but you can only watch as I take it away with honorable open schemes and the courage to wage war against a saint.

Thank you all for your support! The Emperor has signed a contract! This wouldn't have been possible without your support. Thank you!

The idea is novel, but the writing is lacking. (1. The prehistoric world should be vast, but your writing makes it feel small. 2. There should be many races, some powerful and some weak! 3. The training methods for humans should be described in more detail, such as training the skin, flesh, blood, and so on! Breakthroughs and the lifespan and abilities at each stage should be included! 4. Intrigue is acceptable, but there should also be passion and heroism!)

Ugh, so embarrassing. It's really rare to see such a primitive writing style in the current development of the "primordial era" genre.

Well written, I enjoy reading it. Please don't stop updating! Don't abandon the story! Keep it up!

Keep it up, the concept is very fresh! Try to reduce the author's monologues and the protagonist's inner monologues in the dialogue. Making the main character's dialogue more concise would make it more vivid. I feel yesterday's chapter showed significant improvement.