Nine Thousand Years Among Mortals

Absolutely a masterpiece! It's vivid, logical, and well-structured, with the main storyline unfolding slowly and occasionally delivering a small climax. The author's writing skills are strong, captivating the reader's imagination. I look forward to the rest of the story maintaining this quality.

It's not badly written, but the values ​​are warped. As soon as the protagonist becomes successful, he hints that the rich businessman's daughter should marry his second uncle. That's really vicious.

The beginning was too toxic. Even if it was a stranger who took you in for more than ten days, just to fetch water, you repay her by killing her? The aunt's family was poor themselves, yet they still let the protagonist stay for more than ten days. Does the protagonist think that any stranger should help him for free?

The descendants of powerful figures first undergo a soul-stealing process to acquire a low-grade spiritual root, cultivate it to a few levels of Qi Refining, and then possess a high-grade spiritual root. This perfectly ensures that the cultivation family always maintains control over the best aptitude, the best resources, and the best education. With a dragon charging in their face, how can they possibly lose?

The author's writing is excellent, and the plot doesn't drag. It successfully attracted me, someone who usually reads for free. I've already turned on auto-subscription. I'll give you all my votes—the biggest support for a student like me! 😭 (I'm a poor student, I have to eat). Keep it up! (ง •̀_•́)ง I hope you become a trendsetter and lead Qidian to produce a large number of high-quality novels like this.

Let's add something more to the author's writing. When writing about alchemy, don't just add whole herbs; it makes the writing very dry and boring. For example, some elixirs only require the roots, stems, leaves, flowers, or fruits of a single plant, as well as a drop of morning dew—the essence of heaven and earth condensed from a special plant.

I couldn't stand watching the part where the second aunt is killed. What kind of values ​​are these? The protagonist eats and lives there for free for ten days or half a month, and his second aunt gets upset just because she's upset? Besides, his second uncle is a live-in son-in-law. I'm dropping this story!

This book is short, not because the author couldn't continue writing, but because the readers can't finish reading it. Constant suppression and hardship will only cause readers to leave faster, especially since you are a newcomer with no existing readership.

Chapter 33: Death from Poisoning. Here's why: Although the protagonist's aunt didn't like him, she let him stay for about ten days after he went to seek refuge with her and didn't harm him. But the protagonist, after becoming the gang leader, turned around and killed his aunt. And as a transmigrator, what a joke! Does he have to kill everyone who doesn't fawn over the protagonist? I don't deserve to read this kind of novel. I'm leaving, never again!

The author and protagonist are already in the late Foundation Establishment stage, so they should probably brush up on their basic skills from the Qi Refining and Foundation Establishment stages, such as drawing and making talismans (materials, ink making, talisman brushes), basic alchemy skills (recognition of medicinal herbs, their mutual generation and restraint relationships, age, growth…