Pirates: Never Work Overtime

The idea is good, but the writing is hard for old bookworms to read. Newcomers to the fandom can read it

Some people are always saying that Luffy must die and Ace must die, and then they are all pirates, shouldn't they die? I just want to ask, what pirate novels do you read? Pirates must die, the world government must die, the navy must die for helping the tyrants, the Celestial Dragons must die for their many evil deeds, and the revolutionary army must die for rebels. Then only a group of fishermen were left on the sea to live and work in peace and contentment, and they successfully changed their name - Fishing King! Some people always use the excuse that Luffy impelled the city and released many criminals. This matter is originally justified by the public and the mother-in-law. The navy destroyed O'Hara and helped the evildoer, so they must be righteous? Not to mention the Celestial Dragon World Government, there is also the Revolutionary Army. They freed slaves everywhere. Many kingdoms were in chaos because of this. Didn't it have an impact on this world? I don't know what's going on recently. Douluo Continent wants Tang San and Master to die, One Piece wants Luffy and Ace to die, Dou Po wants Xiao Yan to die, but A Chinese Ghost Story wants Xiao Qian to die? This is just like Pu Songling said, the human heart is not as good as the heart of an animal, and some people are worse than an animal?

I can't stand it any longer. Earlier I felt like a general. I had a fight with Brother Ming, and I also awakened the fruit power. My strength should have increased. In the end, I became a quasi-general again. My strength is uncertain, going up and down. The protagonist is still a great swordsman, and he doesn't show the domineering look of a great swordsman. Has the author seen One Piece? The great swordsman in One Piece can destroy the world with his slashes. Every great swordsman in One Piece can compete with the generals. But looking at the protagonist, the rank of the great swordsman is simply lowered. He has fruit awakening and a great sword. He is in the realm of Hao, has advanced two-color domineering, and has inherited the training memory and combat experience of a top master. However, he behaved like this and was killed by the dragon in two moves. He is simply a useless person. He was poisoned and someone abandoned him.

2.1 Meters tall and 75kg in weight. I'm afraid he's not a good guy with short ribs 😥😥😥😥

The first chapter is very poisonous, how could the King Shichibukai blatantly attack the navy. The entire Shichibukai establishment cannot be maintained like this. It is true that they are hostile in private, but it is impossible to do so openly. It's too much.

I feel like I'm off topic. Akainu is not as stubborn as the protagonist, and he offends people everywhere. I would still understand if the protagonist was as evil as a vendetta pirate, but why is the protagonist so at odds with the revolutionary army? And we even got together with the CP organization. Is this the dog of the Dragon Man?

What is this story about? The protagonist is obsessed with his strength and feels like he is a general, but ends up having a 50-50 draw with Brother Ming. That's it. After all, he feels good about himself, but he shows you a slap in the face. Then he fights an unknown lieutenant and vomits blood after being beaten? ? ? That's it? And there is a G5 branch in Donghai? ? ? Is there a lieutenant general? ? ? I remember that in the original book, only the Grand Line had branches starting with G and general-level officers stationed there, but there were none in the Four Seas. Is the author a fan of the Cloud Pirates? ? ? Just writing based on your feelings? ? ?

Brothers, stay up late and catch up, are you even more hungry?

Since it's going the naval route, don't be afraid of offending fans of the original work. No one related to the main protagonist group will be killed. Only Ace and Whitebeard died in the original plot. Even if the war on top doesn't kill the main characters and only kills passers-by, the empress doesn't dare to kill the provocative one, and the red-haired one doesn't dare to kill anywhere. Then be a Mao Haijun. It can be seen that the author has nothing of his own and can only follow the original plot. Slipping away

The dragon must die, Ace must die, and Luffy must die. Every time I read a pirate novel, especially the protagonist Luffy of the Navy, he is almost immortal. Just because he is the grandson of Lieutenant General Garp, he is merciful. The author asked here, will Luffy die?

How should I put it? I hate people who brag about Tenyaksha. In the previous chapter, you said that you have almost reached the level of a general. How many days will you fight Tenyaksha next? You mean General Tianyaksha level?

Goodbye, another fan who won't kill the protagonist but kneels down and licks the protagonist's group.

I feel more and more wet, I don't want to kill this one, I don't know the use of this navy, 886

I said I saw Qing Pheasant before, and said that my strength is about the same as that of a general. Now it's hard to beat Brother Ming. Isn't this funny? Brother Ming's strength is far worse than that of a general.

The biggest feature of this book is that the navy's strength is poorly written. A quasi-admiral tied with Ming Ge and was defeated by Dorag with two moves. Akainu also fought with the world's strongest Whitebeard for a long time. How can the navy suppress the sea with such strength? Even the strength written here cannot win.

Originally from different camps, the opponent has been trying to kill you, and has been letting off steam. They won't abandon Akainu in the end and go hug pig's feet and thighs. It's disgusting.

The beginning was a series of garbage plots that persuaded people to quit. The protagonist's perception was similar to that of Aokiji, but he was almost beaten to death by Brother Ming🐷🐷🐷

When I first read it, I felt like you were trying to fool yourself. It didn't match the title of the book. Shouldn't it be that I don't care whether the four emperors are coming or the dragon is coming? I just don't care when I get off work. Shouldn't I love whoever I love? You can easily work overtime from the beginning, so what's the use of this book title?

It's a bit interesting, a bit like Gou Dao General But I hope I can write my own characteristics I even said it would be better if I add some of my own ideas Come on

I haven't read the last 20 chapters, and I don't want to read any more.

After all, this novel is getting more and more unreadable.

To be honest, it looked okay at first, but recently I chose Shichibukai for a long time and nothing happened, which is outrageous! ! Poisonous

It was okay at first, but I haven't watched it since the first episode of Xiong Er

Mengjiang~ Is there a female protagonist in this book? (:[___]←Waiting for reply

Halfway through, the author has already let himself go.

It seems that the heart network radar has not learned, right?

Don't know what to say. Can't tell what's wrong with it.

In the world of One Piece, no one is a good person, okay? There is no good person in any world. So anyone can die. It's pretty easy to kill Ace's Luffy. Like the press conference, it was impossible to announce that Ace was the son of the Pirate King. Besides, Kapu Kapu's son is a revolutionary dragon, so the world government had to kill him out of honor. Is it possible that his son was spared? Then tell them who are the cadres of the revolutionary army. Wouldn't this kill a lot of people again? Where does all this heroism come from? What would you do if you were the protagonist? Maximize profits.