Lord of the Heart Realm

After reading Chapter 20, n poisonous points appeared. How did the author do it? It almost feels like the poison system in Qiong Yao's drama. In just 20 chapters, the protagonist experienced pressure from classmates, teachers finding faults, classmates reporting, grades not counting, and coaches being inappropriate. This is a martial arts society. Aren't these people afraid that someone will beat them to death if they become awesome in the future?

After chasing it for so long, I have some thoughts that I want to share with you This book is undoubtedly a good book in 2020, with a novel setting and not outdated themes. The writing still needs improvement but it's already pretty good. The main and supporting characters have online IQs and distinct personalities. There was no peeing throughout the whole process, at least so far I haven't thought about skipping a chapter to read it. The content in the early stage is relatively rich. I don't know if the results have not met the author's expectations recently. I am preparing for the eunuch. The content of the last twenty chapters is extremely empty. I personally feel that the author is forcibly suppressing the speed of pig's feet cultivation. The developmental period is the essence of every novel. Many masterpieces are good-looking in the early stage but relatively slow in the later stage (such as Coiling Dragon Swallowed), so I won't give examples one by one. The author uses more than ten chapters to cover the one-year cultivation stage in one stroke in the first and middle stages. Compared with the golden growth period of strength, it is also the golden stage of the novel, which is a bit too perfunctory. Just rewrite the life-and-death crisis a few times. It is not necessary to have to fight to the death every time. It is too unrealistic. It feels like you have to fight to the death every time. Of course, this depends on the author's writing skills. Please also be careful about setting loopholes. Zhao Yun gets 10 agility in two acts, and one act of the following cards of the same level is enough, and the gold card only has 10 agility in the first act. The advantage of high-level cards lies only in comprehension and not in physical fitness. Such a golden finger may not be cool enough. To put it bluntly, it is too weak. In short, this book is still very good, for me personally! It can barely reach the level of Xiancao. Half a star After all, very few novels can reach the level of Xiancao. Finally, I wish the author will become better and better, his writing will become stronger, and the results of this book will get better and better! Come on＾0＾~

Let me state in advance that I am just a novice who wants to give some opinions. Anyone who has read this book knows that this book is very slow, but I think the pace is too fast. For nearly a year, the author only wrote about promotion and demon hunting, and the training and assistance in completing the hunter mission were also briefly mentioned. I have no impression of other supporting characters. What impressed me most was Wu Feng, who reminded me of the undocumented knight in One Punch. Although that part was a bit awkward, he saved the game at the speed of light and exited at the speed of light. The plot of the main supporting characters is not enough to highlight their characteristics. Li Miaomiao's evil side is only reflected in the acting, and it feels very funny from the perspective of the protagonist; So I personally think that the inner fluctuations of the supporting characters when fighting can be added, and the protagonist and the supporting characters team up to hunt monsters. You can also tell something based on their performance, such as Wu Feng's cowardice. After talking about the issue of character creation, let's talk about the issue of competition. First, the setting of this book is that there is no on-the-spot breakthrough and then a counterattack. Second, the level of the contestants is low, they don't even have a few secret skills, and even psychic equipment is prohibited, let alone any trump cards. What is the result of these two points? Once the paper strength of the players on both sides is revealed, whoever has a higher level and more powerful skills will win. The fighting phase is simply omitted, and at most the gank phase is added. I don't have much idea about this. Apart from adding the supporting characters' inner thoughts and the plot of the villain pretending to be a slap in the face, there seems to be nothing else to write about. Ps. The character of Lord of Nine Stars is quite well drawn. Finally, there is the issue of pacing. The update speed is a flaw. I can understand that this is a slow novel. The author wants to speed up the progress and reach the climax - Chunyingyuan. Otherwise, the word count will be updated. If I write about what happened this year, it may be summer in reality, and without the climax, readers may lose. Here I recommend the book Versatile Mage. You can play ranked games on campus, do hunter missions outside of school, find a few teammates to practice and find opportunities, and have a demon siege to outwit the Black Holy See as the climax. It's also a story about playing a game. From the time the national team began to travel around the world to challenge the national team, to the actual game of the world championship, four to five hundred chapters were still going on and the climax continued. Regarding the setting of the villain's forces, didn't the chapter updated a few days ago talk about ordinary people volunteering to sacrifice themselves in exchange for power? Is it any wonder that there is an organization that believes in demons? The style of a full-time mage is to be both a student and a hunter. I can tell that the main supporting characters are Zhou Yunfei, Li Miaomiao, and Li Xia. These supporting characters can be well portrayed. By high school, these people should not be passers-by... Right? They should be more than just passers-by in their middle school careers, right? Of course, if they are really soy sauce, then I say it in vain, and the author does not need to portray them. Overall, I think the setting of this book is very attractive to me. The plot has developed to this point, and I personally feel that it is at best a prologue, still explaining the world view. Compared to Chunyingyuan, I was looking forward to high school. The level of middle school students is too low and the structure is too small. If anything happens, it is not the turn of middle school students to intervene. The plot is bland and understandable. I said a lot of self-righteous and critical things, and I made some clumsy comments just to make this book better. I'm sorry if I've offended you. Also, the book is really good. Good luck to the author.

Jinghai No. 1 Is ruined, ranking first is definitely not guaranteed. In the future, the more awesome the protagonist becomes, the more embarrassed Jinghai will be, and will definitely be ridiculed by other schools. It would be even worse if the protagonist held a grudge. After all, Jinghai didn't even give the protagonist a chance to prove his innocence, and the protagonist's character is also very competitive, so the possibility of hitting Jinghai later is quite high.

I just want to ask, everyone seems to say that the protagonist is making rapid progress. Why doesn't the protagonist seem to have the strength to catch up with anyone now? It was acceptable in the early stage. . . It's a bit annoying to keep doing this from now on. What resources do other people use to speed up their cultivation? Why does it feel like the protagonist simply passes the potential value and there is no other way?

Well done! He will get tired of watching if he keeps winning. Anyway, he is not the main force now. Only in the future, by making rapid progress, can Jiang Dacheng and his classmates show their unlimited potential and ability. Losing now will make him full of longing for the future!

This loan plot is really poisonous and cannot be watched. On the one hand, it emphasizes the contribution of the sealed warriors, the government's attention, the high mortality rate of the warriors, and the tendency of the warriors to lose control of their will. As a result, a company used unknown amounts of equipment to forcibly lend money to most people. The mortality rate, which was already as high as 20%, dropped to another level, and there were traps for people to owe money. Shouldn't the government provide the equipment for you, a newbie in the future of mankind? Can I rent or borrow a brand new one? Is talent or money more important? It also allows a company to slow down the growth rate of newbies and increase the mortality rate. I don't see the use of the government from beginning to end. Shouldn't the heavy weapon of the Seal Warrior be controlled by the state? The protagonist's company equipment was unused and he took medicine, and he still owes 4 gold coins. The article says that sparring costs 1 silver coin per hour, with a maximum of 2 hours a day. So if you work every day and your sparring partner is not injured (possibly fighting a sealed warrior), it will drag you down for at least half a year, let alone others? How many sealed warriors does this company offend every year? There are always people who have become prosperous over the years. Will they retaliate for being oppressed? After being retaliated by so many sealed warriors, can this company continue to operate?

I personally speculate that many of the current "poisonous points" are actually some background settings, which are the default unspoken rules among people in this world. The main character is too "country" to understand. For example, the protagonist's failure to be admitted may be because the protagonist has ignored how important "mental examination" is to prestigious schools. After all, the sudden improvement of the protagonist is real, and the explanation is really insufficient. If someone can guarantee that his sudden improvement is no problem (he is taught by a master or something), he should be admitted. But the above is purely personal speculation, after all, I only wrote this much. However, one thing to say is that Zhang Yuliang's plot design is really bad, and it is mindlessly targeted at the protagonist. This person gave me the feeling that he was targeting the protagonist because of a trivial matter (not even offensive). It can be said to be very bad. If he has a suspicious personality, he is not described as a suspicious person, and no one is suspicious of anyone. The trivial incident of the first encounter also showed that this person had a bad character. Is it really targeted without any reason? It is not advisable to be a villain who targets the protagonist without any brains. I hope that the reasons for Zhang Yuliang's "brainlessness" will be clearly explained in the subsequent plot. Whether it's "Second Generation X", demon possession, etc., At least there is a reasonable explanation. "Second Generation X" is quite cliché, I hope it's not. However, I personally think this plot is bad, and the premise does not have a particularly good plot twist. This person will end up ruining his future at least, so he won't be affected by this cowardice. But! There's not much that can be done to save the plot. It's too deliberate, and it inexplicably arranges a brainless villain to target the protagonist. The reason is similar to looking at you (speechless). It's not a conflict of interest, emotional dispute, or getting drunk. And because of this person, the protagonist's career has undergone a major change.

Why are you using swordsmanship again? We are not discriminating, just because we see too many people using swords And not to mention anything else, but he said that he can only use swordsmanship to seek death on the battlefield. People surrounded him with spears, and he was instantly killed with one stab. On the battlefield, one inch is long and one inch is short. Well, forget it, pretend I didn't say it, after all, the protagonist's cheating is too serious.

The setting of this demon is poisonous. It depends on who gets upset and reports it. How can a genius come forward? This kind of world can still exist.