One Piece Shadow Lord

The progress of your theme is too slow. Since you have created such a powerful and unprecedented family power, the protagonist must have a strategy or strength worthy of him. You have also written an outside theme, so you need to make it clear about this outside the theme. Currently, it is an addition outside your theme. Failure to explain clearly leads to some confusion in the progress within the theme.

Very well written! But it would be better not to write too much about things other than pirates.

The updates are so slow, so I should write less about things other than One Piece.

What the hell is this update? Are you constipated?

Definitely don't be a cuckold, just go and have fun yourself. Abandon the pit.