Fortunately the Main Plot Is at Hogwarts

The world view is quite interesting, but the protagonist's character setting is not likable enough. The most important thing is that this is a harem novel. It feels like the protagonist's brain is full of white turbid liquid. When it comes to female characters, the readability begins to decline. If you are concerned about the harem, I do not recommend this book.

The setting is good, but the author's writing skills are not strong enough. He tried to write everything but nothing came out. He was hammering here and there, making it look messy.

The author's writing is very novel and interesting, and the writing style is excellent. I hope you can stick to it. In addition, of course I hope there will be a single heroine, Hermione, and I hope the emotional line can be written a little sweeter. I have no choice but to be greedy for Emma's body

To be honest, I thought the dungeon in the early stage was enough. Then a Cyclops came out, which was acceptable, but then he ran to Alice right away. It was too much, it was too much. The protagonist is only about ten years old, are you ready to let him save the world?

I just finished reading the wedge, and I feel like the author wants to use the wedge to mention the plot and spoil the story. Personally, I don't feel that it has played a role in improving the quality. As for spoilers... I feel that writing this wedge has restricted the author's freedom in subsequent content. To be honest, novels with wedges are quite rare in recent years...

This book is basically the same as the author's previous book. The author's protagonist is also different. He brings a naughty child at the beginning which is not helpful, and he forcibly commits suicide to advance the plot. Don't you understand the relaxed and relaxed writing? Always use nt behavior to promote the plot

At first, I thought that Dali would be the poisonous point of this book, especially the one-click triple connection, which really pissed me off. But after the author's shaping, I can only say that the plot is surprisingly good. Now I actually have higher expectations for Dada. To be honest, who should we be if we are thrown into that four-person group? A time traveler who is also a cheat? A savior with a destiny? Or Ms. Watson who combines beauty and wisdom? Which one of us should most likely be without talent and as stupid as a pig? So, the one I have the strongest sense of immersion in and the character development I am most looking forward to is Dali. I sincerely hope that he will achieve something and grow up.

Author, your writing is very good, and the story setting is also very interesting. I don't mind the protagonist's rebirth system, so I think the author still has a lot of room for improvement. Maybe the next book will be loved by many people. I sincerely hope that the author can persevere. But! I really can't stand this book, and I really want to complain about it! 1. Regarding Dali, if I remember correctly, Rowling did not mention Dali in the end, because bullying is really difficult to write about, and it is very unsuitable to appear in fairy tales. Anyone who has been bullied will never forgive him. The author needs to whitewash Dali and ask Harry to forgive him. I think the greatest kindness Harry gave Dali was a painless death. Please think about it for a moment. He lived in a cupboard since he was a child and was beaten by Dali every day. His glasses were broken and he had to eat and wear leftovers. When Harry appeared, he was skinny and skinny. How could Harry, who lived such a difficult life, forgive Dali. 2. Regarding the novice period, why do people complain that the novice period is too long? Because it doesn't look good! Because the protagonist ran to a high-level map and became crazy! Because I took Dali with me and wanted to save him! We also need to whitewash Dali! He even brought his teammates with him! Knowing that Dumbledore could read minds, he took Harry to Wonderland? A world with demigods running around? If there really is Wonderland, Karma Taj, Marvel and some other mess, then the world must be different from the original Harry World. 3. Regarding the protagonist, what is the character of the protagonist? What is the protagonist's goal? Why does the protagonist think this is a game in the first two chapters but thinks it is real in the second two chapters? Why do you lick a girl so hard when you see her? Is Malfoy going to be whitewashed as the protagonist's good friend again? Why? Didn't the protagonist play more than ten games? After playing more than a dozen games, it's still like this? I have played The Witcher 3 for three weeks and know all the plot branches and the locations of key items. 4. Regarding the fourth natural disaster, I think the article always emphasizes this, so our understanding of the fourth natural disaster may be different. The fourth natural disaster is a player who relies on his immortality to do whatever he wants. What does it mean to do whatever he wants? Referring to P Club players, (my daughter's daughter is still my daughter, killing planets and making canned meat) everything is for my happiness. If I am happy, I can put food in shit to keep it fresh. If I am happy, I can massacre the city. I can do everything that makes me happy. 5. About some mess. The role of managing interpersonal relationships in the extraordinary world is far less than improving one's own strength, because if there are more people, there is no need to learn magic (or cultivate immortality).

What about the promised main plot at Hogwarts? ? What about your main plot?

The creativity is okay, but I feel like the main character is sick, nt

Marriage fraud? Infidelity in marriage? Don't you dare let your wife know? This is even more disgusting than having an open harem.

After reading more than sixty chapters, I have read more than one HP fanfic. To be honest, I started reading it with very high expectations. Then what I saw was all kinds of pretentiousness, all kinds of pretense, b, pretending not to understand, all kinds of talking to oneself, all kinds of inexplicable inner dramas of the protagonist, show superiority, do you know what it feels like to me? I am a non-mainstream person. I am immersed in my own world and feel good about myself. I want to write a systematic article with depth, but I don't have the writing power. It's not good to describe it in a straightforward way. I have to write so much that I can't control it. It makes readers disgusted and no one else. I rarely write long reviews. This book really disgusted me, so I just slipped away.

The main plot is in Hogwarts, but the author just doesn't want to write the main plot 🤔

Well, what kind of psychology can I keep reading this book?

The results of this book are very poor, and the results of the previous book were also very poor. The manuscript fee is not much, but it has been updated, rain or shine, and it is unstoppable. If the author were an ordinary person, he would have been a eunuch by the time he wrote this book. Such a fee would not be able to support himself, and it would be too little to earn pocket money. There is a huge difference between the time and energy spent in the last book and the profit of the two thousand chapters. But the author doesn't seem to be a rich person, otherwise he would have been rewarded by flying banners all over the site. How can a rich person tolerate silently coding but not having many readers? So I speculate that the author may be...

It feels like the protagonist is sick, so he keeps trying to die crazily, and then forcibly advances the plot...

This book is frustrating to read, the main character looks like a fool

Protagonist: I am very strong, my fourth natural disaster! I will tolerate the provocation from the sidekick, I will tolerate it, and I will still tolerate it.

Is it a little off topic? The title is that the main plot is in Hogwarts, but the proportion of the branch content described now is too high. It feels like the author has opened a new book since arriving in the New World, and some of the priorities are not distinguished.

I haven't read the 130+ chapters and I'm still on the side story. Your book only has 300 chapters, so it's okay to write about half of it.

I couldn't stand watching anymore. I had no idea about the harem in the first place, but later on I didn't understand the various plots. The author's explanations weren't very clear either. I felt dizzy after watching it 😐

The most novel thing about this book is the fairy tale magic setting, what about the others?