Initial Career

It's so tedious, writing a bunch of things for hundreds of chapters, it's almost not fun. The protagonist is portrayed as a mystery, like a fool, who keeps saying that he has insufficient knowledge. After the first path, he knew that he lacked knowledge, but the protagonist did not find a way to learn at all; the career system is too messy, sky patterns, uniqueness, career chain... It was okay at the beginning, but it became more and more chaotic later, and the protagonist's career has almost no growth. Why don't you write some career growth of the protagonist? I know that the protagonist is a priest at the first level, and I know the name of the second level profession, but the protagonist doesn't know how to level up, and it feels like the protagonist's level is being forcibly suppressed.

If you pretend to be a god, you should look a bit like a god, right? Gods should not treat people who are pulled into the space like they treat ordinary friends, explaining and answering everything with good intentions. Some things are unnecessary, and gods should have the majesty of gods.

I couldn't stand the name Meng Liuli when I saw it. . . Is there anyone who feels the same 😅😅😅

I don't know if anyone has this feeling. The author puts too much emphasis on how strong the professionals in the Northern Continent are, saying that the Eastern Continent is very weak in the middle and late stages Emphasizing this point over and over again The subsequent buildings, well, the general cultivation of immortals was in ancient times, so it is not as normal as it is, but The author of Blessed Land Cave Heaven still emphasizes how magnificent the Northern Continent is Although I can accept it personally, I personally think that these will actually affect the author's own performance The reason is very simple. Most people are not easy to accept being stepped on when cultivating immortals. It does not mean that it cannot be a stepping stone.

Let's talk about some thoughts that are not a review. When I was writing the online article, I felt that every character had to be naughty and turned into a clown. I will take the most typical one after reading this. I can't understand the character of the Red Duke. While repeatedly emphasizing revenge, she kept writing about how her plan deceived the protagonist and how the friend in front of the protagonist behaved like this. Tragic, in the end, she didn't suffer at all. She was handsome all the way and could dance repeatedly. Then it was the protagonist who turned into a clown in contrast.

I thought I was the only one who found this book fascinating. I think this book actually has a monthly pass of 187, which is outrageous.

To be honest, the author's writing is good, but he always writes in a dazzling way, which is too boring. The more I watch, the more boring it becomes.

When I first started watching it, why did the plot look so familiar?

Two words: pull across 😅

After being targeted by a witch, you just ignored it the next day, didn't make any preparations, and just pretended it never happened?

The subject matter is really good. In fact, there is no need to imitate the mystery. Not everyone can control it and it can easily collapse. I'm an old bookworm, and I was very fascinated by it. Why did the protagonist encounter beings that I couldn't resist at the time? This led to no fun at all, and it was very frustrating to watch. I hope the author works hard and just follow the step-by-step description in the introduction. It won't be bad.

That cat was too dramatic, and the person who directly messed with it had no sense of reading. She also let her know that the protagonist was a time traveler. It would have been better if the dream space was not written. The system panel was the biggest cheat.

The introduction and content of the book are all wrong. It was promised that players will appear on a large scale in one year.

I feel that the author pays too much attention to the story and character creation, resulting in the protagonist not standing out enough, like an ant jumping around, which is a bit procrastinating.

This is my favorite type, 8 votes support, come on!

It's almost 400 chapters now. Isn't it still a year?

Are there too many early settings? The character of the protagonist is not very good either. I looked confused and confused. After reading the first ten chapters, there was no definite chapter and there was no goal or anything. It was so confusing. Please, please don't dig so many holes in the early stage, okay?

Will that Mira die? , I hope she dies

After reading it for so long, I still don't know what the author wants to express 😰

I don't want to see her anymore when I see a younger sister.

Where does the dream space come from? There are too many puzzles in the early stage. This is no longer digging a hole. It makes me very confused.

After seeing the end of Chapter 73, the overall feeling is that the daily descriptions are very good, but the battle scenes are relatively lacking at the moment. The reference to the dream description was too much, especially the introduction of one's own position in the dream, which was too high. Personally, you can refer to actual intermediaries, auctions, pawns, and other trading venues. In this way, various calculations are extended to reality, so the content feels very fulfilling. I feel like the dream setting is not well written. If you set it to be a dream, why aren't others in dreams? For example: enter in a dream, then search, find the meeting point, start introducing and getting to know each other, the protagonist appears, describes the role of the dream, and then starts to use information and items for transactions and real-life identity testing. There are all kinds of intrigues and intrigues about seeking benefits, with different opinions, but they seek common ground while reserving differences under the needs of such a platform. Does this make the story more exciting? Haha, just a random thought.

Yes, it's exactly what I thought. The author is still reluctant to let go of Red Earl Sang 😤. The dead are married before they are dead, so what about the pain of the living? Has Morven forgotten the pain of his sister and the others who are still alive? 😤 Tsk, he still dares to go against the Red Earl and "trade", just waiting to be cheated and slip away without any pants.

The writing is good but not mellow at all 😒😒😒😒

🤓 Already invested, come on

Adding "period" in the panel always feels very inconsistent

Although I haven't read it yet, this introduction is very close to my original thoughts ( It's just that my idea at the time was about Eastern Xianxia, which has a long life but slow development, and Western fantasy. Although the upper limit is not as high as Xianxia and its lifespan is not as long, it develops quickly and can quickly develop a group of high-end combat forces. The south has high technology, and the north relies on the stars Eastern World There is a road similar to a bridge in the most western part of the world, the most eastern part of the western world, the most northern part of the south, and the most southern part of the north, connecting an island in the center. There is an underground tomb in the center of the island, and there is a ghost beast guarding the tomb. The mouth of the ghost beast is actually a portal that can be teleported to the hometown of the person buried in the tomb (a place beyond the world). , Can break any upper limit until reaching the realm of infinite regret. The realm of regret is a realm that can grow infinitely. After that, you need to reach the world of the Hell Lord to obtain permission, and go to the four supreme beings to die. The four supreme beings are the creators of the world. Ranked third) The end of everything, the blind guest (the second, the first in output) is the closest to the truth, the Lord of Hell (the first overall, the boss, he created a hell when he had nothing to do). The four supreme beings can't be killed, even if you erase their existence, they will be resurrected, which is a tragedy for the protagonist Give the author a lot of support.

I just want to ask if there is a female protagonist, single female protagonist or multiple female protagonists?

What time is it updated today? When will the players appear again? 4 Months left?

This is the author's first book, which is pretty good.