Pirates of the Reverse Blade Swordsman

It started well. Although it is a system flow, the system has a low sense of presence and the settings are simple. It does not make people feel that the system is the protagonist. When describing the fighting scenes, there is no sense of déjà vu like using skills in a game. In short, I want to continue reading this book, and I hope it doesn't end in disaster or end up in the palace.

To be honest, the author's writing style is still not good enough. The latest chapters want to make readers ignited, but your previous foreshadowing and Ai Lan's character description are not enough. You should write some daily plots before fighting Lao Sha to show that Ai Lan also likes to help others, and provide motivation for now wanting to help ordinary people defeat Lao Sha. After you beat the cadres, in the next chapter you suddenly say that you want to defeat Lao Sha for those ordinary people, which makes people feel abrupt. Is the protagonist like this kind of person? Ai Lan is not as familiar to everyone as Luffy. Luffy is such a hot-blooded idiot. He will risk his life for his friends. No one will question Luffy's hot-blooded behavior, and they will only follow it.

Many people are picking on me in the book. I do have a lot of mistakes, and I admit that. I have changed everything that can be changed. If I think it is correct, I will explain it in the comments. If the word limit is unclear, I will explain it here. You can also ask other questions in this building, and I will explain them one by one.

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You don't have to be the Pirate King, you don't have to have the heroine, you don't have to have the great swordsman, the Celestial Dragons can let them die more quickly, but Momonosuke must die! Better to die miserably! ! ! If you support me, give me a thumbs up and help me upvote it.

Is it this damn thing again, the breathing method? Is Demon Slayer World awesome? Believe it or not, a lieutenant general in the headquarters can overthrow demons! Don't think that Demon Slayer is too awesome. He can't even break through the Lieutenant General's defenses, let alone the most powerful one in the world is ghost.

After reading about 30 chapters, let me talk about some shortcomings of this novel. The first problem is the author's writing style. The novel is filled with too many Internet slang and some modern jokes. To be honest, these are of little use except for making people feel abrupt when reading. Then there are a lot of dialogues. It is understandable that there are many dialogues, but the problem is that the whole text only contains dialogue descriptions, and they all use some modern terms. This is why some people say that your writing is not passionate. Think about it, people on both sides are fighting fiercely. At this time, the protagonist says "Old Iron 666", how can this be passionate? I suggest adding more expression descriptions, action descriptions and environmental descriptions, using these to enhance the atmosphere and express the characters' emotions instead of pale dialogue. A good author can skillfully use a variety of techniques to express a thing from multiple angles. If the author really doesn't know how to write, I'll just tell you. Just let the protagonist speak less, and just copy Kenshin's lines if you want to say them. Furthermore, the characterization of the protagonist feels too frivolous. Kenshin is very funny every day, but he is very serious when he should be serious, but the protagonist is rarely serious. The reason why the character Kenshin is deeply rooted in the hearts of the people is simply due to the existence of a kind of contrast. A frightening swordsman who kills without batting an eye is actually so funny, can cook delicious food, and can take care of children. He is exactly the image of a warm Japanese man. Therefore, the author can learn from this in character creation and create some contradictory points to express contrast, making the characters more full and dramatic. Finally, on the ideological level, the protagonist obviously has as much experience as Kenshin. The author also said that the protagonist will grow up in the end, but it is unknown whether he will become the same as Kenshin in the end. However, from the current point of view, this protagonist is not only naive, but also very motivated. It can be seen from the protagonist's first confrontation with Aaron. He ran to kill Aaron, but in the end he couldn't beat Aaron and ran away. He was still so confident. If you run away, what will the villagers do? You vented your anger, but it hurt others. Let me tell you, your sword is not a sword to save people, but a sword to harm them.

Why is there no picture of handsome Zoro?

There are other good swords, but be sure not to add a Zanpakutō. The swordsmen in the pirate world are very pure. If the sword is too strong, it will not look good. At most, add some buffs. Don't be too strong.

So the protagonist of this novel should kill people or not. After all, the most powerful thing about Kenshin is not the reverse blade, but the oath not to kill. If the character trait of "not killing" is left out, it would be a waste of the subject matter.

Some people think that the breathing method has low combat power. I just want to say that being strong is a matter of one version, but being handsome is a matter of a lifetime.

Ai Lan... Let's go with this picture

Batōsai

Why do you have to follow Luffy's trajectory? You don't get on the ship, so you have to forcefully participate. It's very nerve-wracking.

The protagonist is a swordsman who wields a reverse blade. He has absolutely no responsibility for holding a sword for atonement like Kenshin. As a time traveler, it is normal to have a cynical attitude. It just makes people look like a rich second generation holding a peerless sword, and there is a sense of being wasted.

The protagonist does not follow the boat, but just goes through the plot in advance, and then forcibly logs off the line to wait for the protagonist team to come to the rescue. If you go through the original work again, you might as well come up and follow the boat directly. If you don't have the ability to develop the plot, just follow the traditional fan route, and don't make those fancy and messy ones that end up being nondescript.

To be honest, I have only read a dozen chapters. The plot of the book is good, although it's not too bright, but it's pretty good. It's a pity that I really don't like pirates using reverse blades. The world of Kenshin is because of the quasi-reality, and there are too many people killed. The reason why I use the reverse blade is because I don't want to kill anymore. This is a state. So Kenshin is my favorite anime. But in the world of pirates, there are only a few passionate people, and it is a world of killing. If you forcefully use the reverse blade, it will be like painting a tiger and not turning into a dog. If you use the flying sword style, it will be the most powerful killing sword. Moreover, the most important thing is that Kenshin is low martial arts and Pirates is magical. This combination is difficult to attract people who like both animes.

The protagonist who looks so mean at the beginning deserves this expression.

Read dozens of chapters! Summary: The main character is undercut to keep up with the plot! Introducing the time traveler at the beginning! Have watched One Piece! I don't know Bucky anymore! In order to reduce the strength and memory according to the plot! It makes me so uncomfortable!

It started well, but since the battle with Hawkeye, both the plot and the characters have been in decline.

Repost! Robin.

When I see women's clothing, I don't want to continue reading.

Why is it a eunuch?😆

When I saw this novel, I first thought of Rurouni Kenshin.

The protagonist is very miserable and has been struggling with life, and the residual health buff is hanging from the beginning to the end

The writing is pretty good, and it's considered high-end among pirate fans. But... How do I feel that nothing has changed for the protagonist in the end, whether it is making a fuss in Impel Down, Blackbeard, or the beginning and end of the War on Top, except for the addition of an extra Robin, which gives the protagonist group a reason to join the war, nothing else has changed. It is recommended to create some original plots, big things, otherwise it will basically follow the plot line of One Piece and give some plots of Luffy Group to Ai Lan. The wind fanned by the protagonist's butterfly wings is too small.

Why hasn't it been updated in so long?

Why are so many doujin protagonists beaten to death by female escorts and heroines?

Not pretending is strength but trying to pretend is stupid.

The protagonist is too bad, and he has been out at sea for so long that he can't even beat Alondou.