Konoha Was Stunned

How to put it this way, it is indeed not a Naruto fanfic in the traditional sense. From a good point of view, the unconstrained plot ideas, eye-catching skill settings, and unexpected conspiracy theories are what I like about it. But from a bad perspective, if there is no certain patience and tolerance, many Naruto fans may not be able to accept this innovation, right? Highlights can also become poisonous points, and I have to say that the author is very bold in writing this. In addition, in terms of character image, I think Orochimaru's image is the most successful. The protagonist's own image seems to be not cool enough. I hope the author can strengthen it. In addition, in terms of writing power, it is weak in the early stage and can be seen to be strengthened in the later stage, but many details still need to be improved. As a new author, I will give you enough tolerance for the time being, and I also wish that your writing skills will improve quickly and you will become a god as soon as possible. Finally, in terms of five stars, the overall rating is four and a half stars.

It is deviant and imaginative. Those who like it will find it very popular, and those who dislike it will probably find it disgusting. From the beginning of reading this book to now, this is probably the overall description of this book. It can be seen that the author of this book put a lot of thought into it. From the beginning, the traditional Naruto text is called the "skin", and then like an onion, a world view grafted onto Naruto is peeled off layer by layer. From a weakling who was dominated by others, he has now learned to use his identity as a time traveler to leverage and start to fight back. This approach of first suppressing and then increasing, at least makes me happy. But at the same time, author, are you sure you are serious about proposing such a long plot line? The pursuit of refreshing fast food literature is abruptly written in a physical style that requires mental analysis. Although I have to admit that many of the ideas are simply unguessable, but you are challenging the patience and mental limits of reading light novels, and you are also challenging the psychological endurance of Naruto fans. I can only say that I love and hate it. On the one hand, I hope that the author can return to the main line and write a novel style of painting. On the other hand, I hope that the author can stick to himself and see more twists and ideas, so that people can explore a different Naruto. In summary, from a fan perspective, this is a relatively pure "anti-Hokage", pursuing the surprises of innovators and restraining the disasters of conservatives. I can't tell whether this book will be successful, but from a personal selfish perspective, I hope the author can complete it. Finally, I wish you success, "Qingliu".

A railgun without safety pants has no soul

How can I put it... I've almost finished reading it. The imagination is OK, but it feels like intrigue from beginning to end, and I don't feel the theme. Is it really good to write a two-dimensional fan fiction that is so dark and intrigue😅

In a light novel like Naruto, you persist in expressing humanity. What kind of social beatings have you experienced, the author? You feel sad inexplicably while reading it. True. Complex mentality. JPG

Duanzo won't capture you, brainwash you and put him under a spell. What do you want to do to calm you down?

Just keep it for now, but I have to remind the author. Superpowers rely on computing power. Theoretically speaking, superpowers are all science students, and the hairstyle of science students... You know

Six votes per day. When the number of votes is up, someone will come to test the poison 😏

It's getting harder and harder to figure out the direction of the plot, but I like it, hahahahaha 😏😏😏

It's very well written, I will always support you, come on!

I feel that the author is so humble and pitiful What exactly did he go through

The idea is very good. Looking forward to the plot 🤭

Come on! The idea is very novel! This is probably the best and most serious new author I have ever seen. I will always support you! Hope you can stick with it!

The plot is quite rigorous. As long as it doesn't fall apart if it's well written, it's another good fan novel.

It's quite interesting. As the four basic forces of the universe, the electromagnetic force has unlimited development limits!

Because there are too many replies, I can no longer reply to the first chapter. If you guys have any questions, please ask them in the following chapters...

For this fanfic, it's particularly good with intrigue and passionate fighting. Subscription to collection + recommended tickets + monthly tickets are available!

Not bad, keep trying. The protagonist acquires abilities a bit quickly and is prone to collapse in the mid-term, so be careful.

A bold idea, using sealing technology to create high-density compressed electronic grenades. The energy density of high-density compressed electrons can be easily calculated using the electromagnetic force formula. Therefore, the technical threshold for this thing is very low, so as long as you have enough energy, you can create art of sufficient scale. It has also become possible to destroy the galaxy where the Otsutsuki clan's home planet is located.

A good book must first have a good author, and at the same time it must have good readers. Remember, both are indispensable! One

I haven't read it yet, but if Academy City's abilities reach level 5, their brains may be more powerful than supercomputers, capable of calculations hundreds of millions of times per second. Is the protagonist of this book that powerful? 😁 If there is no need for calculation formulas to be changed by Death Demon, then those who master the electromagnetic force are invincible. They can control the atomic energy to directly wipe you out, throw you a black hole at will, and drag the ninja planet to race through the universe. Electromagnetic force is so awesome

Prince of the Kingdom of Whirlpool? Your surname is Qianye? Cloud author?

After reading more than 20 chapters, I found that the author seems to be patient when facing readers' questions and has a good attitude. I would like to give the author a good review 🌹

Highlight! ! Front row tips! First of all, this is a pure dark flow, not the kind of dark flow where all means are used by me. It refers to a dark flow that is all about living, being desperately arranged, and can only passively work hard not to die. It will definitely not give fans of cool novels a good experience. Those who want to read cool novels should leave as soon as possible. After reading dozens of chapters, all I can feel is the poor guy who is gradually surrounded by darkness and can only lick his own wounds in the dark. Secondly, this anti-Hokage book has too many secondary settings. The most typical one is the conspiracy theory about the secret alliance between the third generation and the Uchiha. When this appeared at the time, it really made me feel a strong sense of haze. In addition, Orochimaru later conducted experiments on the protagonist, transforming a person who wanted to become a Dengeki user into a Zero-Tailed Jinchuuriki regardless of his personal wishes. At the same time, he also added many backdoors to the protagonist for him to control. I admit that this is a big snake pill, and it is relatively logical, but it is really suffocating. Rather than saying that this book made me read Naruto, it would be better to say that this book made me read ancient dark fantasy novels. I quite liked them at the time. After all, even if the protagonists at that time were transformed, they could change them into what they wanted, and they would quickly turn their disadvantages into their own secret advantages. But I persisted with this book for a few more chapters after the "Persuading the Terminator to Retreat" chapter. Unfortunately, it is obvious that the protagonist of this book may have to fight for a long time. In fact, the writing at the beginning is actually very smooth. The feeling of shadows and lights is actually quite interesting. You can see the light and hope, but at the end of it, you can only laugh at yourself and have no other choice. It is sad. There is a system, and I can guess that it may continue to work later. In the end, the protagonist overcomes all difficulties and successfully counterattacks, but. . . It is really rare for me to see a protagonist who is worse than Er Zhuzi. Er Zhuzi was just bitten. This protagonist has his life gate controlled and continues to be abused and monitored by people from all walks of life. He does not have a beautiful brother to help protect him, so he has to do almost everything by himself. I recognize the author's imagination, but I really don't want to continue reading with such despair. Light is needed in the darkness, but I only saw the sad lone walker and the blockers around him. Even the heroine's lines are messy and deliberate, unless it's Kushina, but this is a sister-sister relationship and really not suitable for a heroine. Naruto fans who like the dark genre but don't care about the secondary setting may like this book. It's darker than An Xiao's book, and it also has a wonderfully combined story that incorporates foreign systems. P. S. The writing style is okay and the story can be developed, but there are many poisonous points. Fortunately, the author still prefers the Black Uchiha. Several of the characters who have appeared so far are paranoid.

Actually, I wanted to draw the main character, but the pixels of this son of a bitch's mobile phone are not good, and I almost got mad at me. Qwq

The front part is pretty good, but Zero-tail can't understand it at first. . . . . .

I'm tired of quitting my subordinates. Things happen every second. Why should I quit?

Can't you use a knife to get the breath of a grenade?

It's above the standard and full of private life. I suggest... Changing the title of the book?

Why are you saving Terumi Mei? Is it because she is a woman?