I Became a Glitch in the World

I spent a dollar specifically to rant about this, and after reading up to chapter 37, I'm getting angrier and angrier. The plot is terrible, with forced main storylines that are incredibly awkward and painful to read. Why do they have to make such a lovable little girl character suffer? Why not torture the protagonist?

I'm just a nobody, I don't know anything about building a thread, but I'll do my best to guarantee at least three updates a day, and try to add more, aiming to achieve the goal of 10,000 words a day. So, I'll add one more chapter for every 100 posts (emm, this must be a pretty high requirement). Addendum: Wow, you guys can't spam! 😢 My bad for not being clear.

Honestly, if this book were a harem story, I probably could have read it all the way through, but I'm not so sure now. While engaging in ambiguous relationships and providing various hints, the game also establishes the protagonist's eccentric character. To be honest, I don't really like the protagonist's character design.

The novel is good to read. It's a bit toxic in the beginning, but only a little. It's not toxic enough to kill me, and I can still read it. The later plot was also quite good; the poison was gone, and some of the plot holes from the beginning were filled in. It had all the fun and swagger, and the world-building was quite extensive. It was a very enjoyable read. Ծ^Ծ When will you mention the bonus chapter for donations? It's so short and weak, not enough to keep you reading.

I've read up to chapter 52 so far. To be honest, those three chapters were really addictive; I haven't recovered yet. Now I'm just waiting to read chapter 69. If it's not the finishing touch that other readers are saying, I'll give up. I suggest the author delete those three chapters directly, without making any changes before or after.

Damn it, I have to tip you before I can criticize you?! Can't you at least write the protagonist like a human being? The beginning was alright, you could even enjoy it as a mindless, enjoyable read, but then you force-feed it a dose of toxicity that basically killed the book. After that, the protagonist becomes mentally ill, and incurable at that—isn't that disgusting?

I've read over sixty chapters so far without skipping any. What bothers me most right now isn't those three chapters, but the ambiguous relationship with that sister-in-law. He keeps saying no while being ambiguous with her. What's the point of writing it like this? If you don't want her, just state your position. If you do want her, just accept her directly. What's the point of offending both sides like this?

I subscribed specifically to curse this idiot! Reading this book made me sick! His values ​​are seriously flawed!

Why cut it? It's not that the writing went wrong. It was a test push followed by a direct dive. I'm no longer a novice author, and I understand that if I keep struggling, the chances of turning things around are extremely low. I can't keep going, so I have to cut it off and rewrite it. Until this book.

The beginning was fine, since the author said the sister-in-law, niece, and parents were all fake. Okay, fine, it's a harem story, and I don't dislike harem tropes. But the dungeon plot was really poorly designed. To put it bluntly, it was designed like this: a monk tries to sacrifice a little girl, gets beaten up by the protagonist with invincibility, and then, before dying, his memory seal…