There Is a Paradise at the Beginning

There is actually not much difference between the protagonist and the casual cultivator. All the opportunities he gets to develop his family and be of great use are hidden. It would be more reasonable to write it as a casual cultivator.

There is no difference between the protagonist and the casual cultivator. He has never thought about his parents and family. Why do you need to write about family? Just treat him as a casual cultivator.

The part where I sent the major to practice the exercises was too poisonous and disgusting.

The author, please speed up the pace. I can hardly stand it anymore. I am messing around in the family every day. I don't mean to complain. I just hope that the author can speed up the pace a little. These days, it is really making me sleepy.

The halo of the protagonist is too much. It is enough for the protagonist to have a space. The opportunity of Chapter 7 of the third picture is gone. The protagonist has to rely on himself. Don't let others see it. Everything has been arranged for the protagonist. It is the same for anyone who takes the protagonist position. The protagonist should not cause trouble wherever he goes, and should not become a plague god.

If the protagonist has a golden finger, he cannot have a female protagonist. There can be many women. The protagonist can't tell others about Goldfinger, otherwise wouldn't others tell their relatives? If the protagonist traveled through time before he was born or was reborn decades ago, he could have parental affection. If you were to travel back in time and your original body was very big, you wouldn't have the family affection of this world. The reason is that on the other hand, if you have a child, how would you feel when you know that your child has been taken away?

I feel that it is redundant for the author to write about a family. It would be better to just start the game as a single person!

It's too poisonous to create a Nascent Soul monster too early! Such a heaven-defying secret can become an immortal if you get it. There are many ways to avoid the backlash of your skills. 😤😤😤For example, let's do a dream entrainment technique, let the protagonist tell the secret himself, and do a borrowed knife to kill someone~ etc.

A subject is almost ruined by you

Huh? In the Age of Dharma Ending, the protagonist's qualifications are low 🙂 and he can't even survive. His cultivation has increased and he can't even compare with the ordinary qualifications of a small family. He can't be saved.

Wow, the book review section is so busy. I felt like I was being persuaded to leave before I even started watching.

It's so cliche. The protagonist's skill is actually the Eight-nine Mysterious Skills of the Wu Clan.

There is indeed a reason for the poor grades

Overall, the hang-up is a bit big. So far, the space magic weapon, the divine king tripod, and the demon refining pot are three treasures that can be used in the Nascent Soul stage. There are also magic weapons in the golden elixir stage, including three foundation-building pills and the foundation-building pill formula. This progress is too fast, and it will be difficult to write later. There is no need to worry about refining elixirs, and there is talent in refining weapons. Eighty-Nine Mysterious Exercises for body training. What's missing is the mediocre skills. The upper limit within the family is too low. You should enter a large sect as soon as possible, such as the North Gate of Tsinghua University. The starting point is high! Now everything should be focused on improving your strength. If you are still making money and refining weapons, there is no point! The risk is still high. There is much freedom after building the foundation. Personal thoughts. If anyone has any different opinions, feel free to mention it, it can be considered as providing some ideas to the author! I can still read the book, but there are really not many books I can read now.

I would like to make a suggestion and strongly urge the author to design a portable planting space for the protagonist! ! With space for planting, this book will definitely become a hit! ! It will have the potential to become a god! I like your book very much! ! Be sure to use more space when writing about the protagonist! ! This book wouldn't be good without space! ! If I had the space, this book would be wonderful! ! ! ! !

I can't watch it anymore. The protagonist is a genius with a high level of spiritual intelligence. He broke through the seventh level of Qi training at the age of 14 without taking any elixirs. There is also a cave heaven blessed land that can accelerate the growth of elixirs. Then he wants to take elixirs and finds out that the cave heaven can remove erysipelas. There is also a Jiuli pot that can refine the original liquid of life. He can also hide himself by practicing the Eight-nine Mysterious Techniques. There will be more disconnects later.

Now I'm really fed up with the flow of mortals. I don't understand basic logic. It's just a pain in the ass.

You want to write a quick article, but you also slow down the upgrade speed of Goldfinger. It's really frustrating. I hope you can change it. Don't think about novices' ideas and old white writing methods. It's really frustrating.

I'm so disappointed. It's inhumane to give up like this!

Here's a new book recommendation from Eunuch

Author, please open a new map as soon as possible and write more energetically. It's boring to read like this! Come on

Isn't this okay? It's not as bad as you said

This book is good, although it has some flaws, it is worth reading. At least it doesn't start right from the start until the end. After all, life is more real. It is recommended that the author add some imagination. After all, he has traveled through time and it is hard to get through without some ideas. The author is a bit poor at mobilizing emotions and his writing style is a bit bland. Keep up the good work

There is no sense of family at all, and there are no written techniques.

Don't make any noise. The author is preparing to build the foundation in Chapter 800.

He relies entirely on treasures to support him. He only practices and doesn't learn any attack spells. He also likes to run around.

He practices qi, elixirs and farming at the same time. He is really an expert!