Devouring the Stars

Seriously, if you haven't read this book, don't get into it, it will ruin your idea of ​​the Star Transformation and the Swallowing Starry Sky. The author knows this when creating, but when you write a fanfic, you must strictly follow the settings of the original world, and the writing will be messy. Now I have seen more than 300 chapters, and a bunch of setting bugs are listed for everyone to take a look One: The realm of Swallowed Starry Sky is divided into apprentice, planet, star, universe, domain lord, world lord, immortal (military lord, feudal lord, feudal king), Venerable, the Lord of the Universe, the Strongest One in the Universe (True God) Stars change realm: acquired innate, golden elixir, Yuanying, Dongxu, Kongming, transcending tribulation, Mahayana, heavenly immortal, golden immortal, mysterious immortal, god and man (upper middle lower), lower (middle upper) God, God King, Heavenly Lord The realm of star transformation: nebula, meteor, star core, planet, tribulation, star, dark star, black hole, origin, universe, universe Among them, the highest cultivation achievement in star transformation It is to master the laws of time and space and become a deity (in the finale, Lin Meng asked Qin Yu to hand over the Thunder Origin Pearl to a child who can independently cultivate to the deity), the god king is to fully master the laws of space and comprehend part of the laws of time, and the god is to comprehend the laws of space. Based on this calculation, the gods are immortal compared to swallowing, the king of gods corresponds to the venerable, and the celestial being corresponds to the lord of the universe. The article says that the eighth-level Xuanxian Emperor Niyang is immortal. This is the first point. Second: When Luo Feng was practicing the Chaos Monument in Swallowed Starry Sky, King Zhenyan recommended Luo Feng to study the nature of the law. He should first study the nature of space step by step while understanding the law of space. Although it is difficult at the beginning, it will be easier later (several novels are also based on this setting). The author said this when Cao Bing entered the vortex of law: study part of the law first, and then study the essence after being recognized by the original law. This is the second drawback. Third: Swallowing Starry Sky's setting for clones is that when the inner world below immortality still exists, clones can be given and bred according to the original law. When breaking through to the true god, the clones must be unified. The author's setting is that the star transformation method and the gene's original energy reaction have created a time and space mark. Can the past body be found and set as a clone? This setting is outrageous. Why not just create a unified world of the past, present and future? There is one more body in each realm, and the true god has nine clones. This is the third slot. Fourth: The soul seal secret method created by Hu Yanbo in Swallowing Starry Sky can only control nine soul slaves. If one of them dies, there will be one less quota. The protagonist randomly uses several of them in the Xueluo world. Is it so casual? Fifth: Three blood crystals double the combat power and double the law perception. Then the secret text of the law at the bottom of the pit of the statue of the beast god and the ruins of the ancient god is the law of fusion of gold and space. The protagonist cultivates the law of time and space. It is no problem to get the blood crystals. It is no problem for Luo Feng to fuse four of them casually (the original work is to fuse the third one with difficulty after passing through the evil vortex), but why are you taking advantage of Luo Feng's statue of the beast god? I really don't understand. You can write a book so casually. I guess the people who can stick to it till the end are true fans of these two books. I want to see how the subsequent plots match up

When I saw Chapter 10, I saw that the protagonist actually wrote down the plot timeline of Swallowing the Starry Sky, and then locked it in the safe. I was shocked when I saw this. What kind of cool operation is this? Is the protagonist afraid that others will not know that he is a time traveler? Not to mention the small probability of accidental loss and theft, let's just say that all the Masters of the Universe in Devouring can go back in time. This means that as long as the protagonist enters the eyes of those Masters of the Universe in the future, it is inevitable to be studied and investigated. It also means that when the protagonist writes the plot of Devouring, he will definitely fall into the eyes of many people. Is the protagonist suffering from brain damage or something? Neither a fool nor a dog can do such a stupid thing, right? He even put it in a safe, which really makes people's jaws drop. He has gone so far as to hide his lies and deceive others. The IQ of this protagonist is really disgusting and makes people want to vomit!

I really don't understand why the protagonist thinks that he, a star-level native, can defeat the inheritors of those big forces by using his own secret techniques. In the original work, Luo Feng used the Escape Sky Shuttle at this time, using the secret method of the Fallen Ink Star lineage. When he was close to the genius battle, he began to study the Evolution Divine Weapon. After fighting with the savages, he found that the movement method was flawed, and he also learned the space movement method that is widely spread in the universe. The Golden-Horned Behemoth and the Demon Slayer Clan's avatar also learned these things, plus the inherited secret method of the Golden-Horned Behemoth. At that time, the beast god's projection and statue were just the foreshadowing. From then on, Luo Feng used the secret method of the Shen Shen Weapon to fight in the outer battlefield, and then he started to create his own secret method. Rong Jun created his own sword technique, and all the immortals watching the battle thought he was a waste of time. Even after joining the Virtual Universe Company, many people were not optimistic about him. They couldn't be all fools, right? Rong Jun made rapid progress in Chaos City because he had a Venerable teacher, and the Venerable accepted his disciples because he was a member of the Giant Ax tribe. . The protagonist has no teacher, is not particularly rich in resources, and does not practice very fast. Why should he start creating his own secret method now? Only if you stand high enough and have enough knowledge can it make sense to concentrate on research. If you want to do academic research, you must at least learn the basic knowledge thoroughly, right? You have to quote scriptures when writing your graduation thesis. The protagonist is just a newbie who has just embarked on the path of spiritual practice. If you don't learn from the secret methods and experiences of your predecessors, doesn't it feel like a waste of time to immerse yourself in research? There will be many detours, and the gains outweigh the losses.

After reading so many Devouring fan novels, this one is the weakest of Pig's Knuckles. It has more than 70 chapters, and Pig's Knats is still at the beginning of the warrior level. Author, you must know that everyone below the planet level is apprentice level. If you have read more than 70 chapters of an apprentice level, you still don't know how many more chapters will be written next. It's really speechless! 😅😅😅😅😅

What does the pig's foot live for? So far, the pig's feet seem to live for the original owner Luo Feng. He kneels and licks Luo Feng everywhere for Luo Feng, and even calls it training Luo Feng. The plot of Nuo Lanshan is a failure. How can you be sure that it will be the same as the original work? In order to train Luo Feng and put pressure on the future of the entire earth? The biggest function of the star transformation is to create the universe, so it should be the biggest golden finger to understand the laws, rather than a single Qigong method. Finally, can the mentality of the pig's feet be improved at the same time, so as not to be such a loser all the time?

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What the hell is the author writing more than 300 chapters? Have you read the original work? There are at least 12 levels of law understanding in Tongtian Mountain. The difference is 10 times at the foot of the mountain, the mountainside, and the top of the mountain. How can the protagonist reach the top of Tongtian Mountain without even breaking through the eighth level? He also said that there is only one person in the history of the universe who has broken through the eighth level. I think the author really didn't read the original work and relied on his own impressions? The original books all write that the Kodi-level genius was born tens of millions of epochs ago, and is the strongest genius in human history, but he is not the only one, and the same is true for the likes of the Immortal Lord. And I remember that in the battle for the secret realm that followed, it was written that the old man was at least the seventh level, several eighth levels, and the werewolf even had the strength of the ninth level. If you don't remember, just don't write it down, okay?

The main reason is that the protagonist's mentality is not lovable. After reading dozens and hundreds of chapters, the protagonist always has the mentality of a little guy!

I don't know what to say. The realm is unknown. There are only eight natural beast gods. Where are the time and space beast gods? The author can add things of his own imagination and don't ruin the original number.

I jumped to read it. To be honest, the author definitely didn't pay attention to the original work! The rules of Tongtian Mountain are completely written in vain. The heavy treasures in the original book are basically only found above the limit of the king, and they are basically ordinary heavy treasures. However, the author, the immortal prince, has one, and he also has a heavy treasure on the top of the horse!

Can't the strengths of the two worlds be synchronized? This setting has been around since the beginning of Devouring, and the strength cannot be synchronized. It looks like two fanfics read together. There is only a weak connection with each other, and it cannot give much help to the other world. In this case, it is better to create a system to help the protagonist.

You don't want to steal the opportunity of the original protagonist, so you open a new map. How many times did Devour the World directly give up the victory to Luo Feng? Can't get up without those Luo Feng or can't live without Luo Feng as the main character? Moreover, in the original work, Luo Feng was a very selfless person and was written as someone who only wanted to take advantage. He even took the initiative to ask for things when he entered the universe. He was moved when he received the benefits, and then disappeared. .

Give everything to the protagonist, why are you still practicing? Isn't it good to wait for the protagonist to rise and help you? It's better to read the original work. I stopped watching halfway through

In fact, I don't understand what kind of diary those time travelers need to keep after crossing the world, and what else they need to write down about the timeline of that world. Is it because my brain is damaged or because I have taken too many medicines? That world has a retrospective timeline. I am very annoyed when I see these plots. Well, if your brain is so awesome and you can write down the plot, you still have to rely on a diary to record it. Anyway, I don't want to understand what the protagonists or the author mean by writing this.

I would like to give the author a suggestion. You can write about the rhythm. You have written it up to now and still have some strength. How long will it take you to write about the genius battle, let alone later on?

In view of everyone's opinions, Xiao Luo will make all the rectifications regarding the emotional plot in the future. You can skip the first chapter tomorrow! Originally, adding a female protagonist was Xiao Luo's attempt, but everyone didn't like it, and Xiao Luo's writing style couldn't keep up, so forget it! Thank you all for your support! Tomorrow is also Chapter 5!

More than 600 chapters later, on the battlefield, an immortal who had not yet become a lord actually had a top-notch treasure. This treasure became nothing but cabbage

I think it's better to put the three Luo Feng brothers aside for a while, otherwise the protagonist will always be a younger brother with the attitude of the protagonist... Which will be annoying.

Be a dealer in two worlds? It's already 2020, why are there still such sb plots? Are you treating others as fools? It doesn't matter if the stars change, ordinary people won't notice it, but what about swallowing the starry sky? As long as the protagonist wants to develop, it won't be long before he emerges. The detailed information will be in the hands of the senior management, not to mention that everyone will have a copy, but it's almost enough. What do you think others will think about this situation? What will be done? Novel can be devoid of logic, but it can't be devoid of some basic logic, right?

Creativity is a good idea. When I wrote about the stars changing, I was very moved. I felt like I was young again. But there are too many small flaws in the book, especially the fact that there is no good chemical reaction between the two worlds. Tomato's novel itself is a genius flow that emphasizes rhythm... If you follow the original work step by step, it is too mediocre.

It's a bit exaggerated to think that the Immortal Emperor is equivalent to the Lord of the Universe! Almost invincible and immortal!

Second creation is okay, but you have to respect the basic rules. The Tribulation Armor is the top pinnacle treasure. You write it as the most powerful treasure. The Lord of Qingdong is written as the second-level lord of the universe. The original star produces the most pinnacle treasures (palace, soul, domain type), and you become the most powerful treasure. There are a lot of other basic situations, most of which are inconsistent with the original settings. If the original work doesn't describe it clearly, it's fine if you re-create it, but if the original work describes it, you can re-create it and it will make people laugh. The second creation cannot change the basic settings of the original work, such as some described strength levels and treasure levels.

You don't need to read the ones that come later. I'll give this book a maximum of six points out of ten. The subject matter is okay, but it's not refreshing enough. Anyway, when I listened to the novel, I had the feeling that the protagonist's IQ is very low, and he can't beat anyone, but he can fight. I don't understand. The combat power is not as strong as the protagonist of the original work, and there are various relationships with the protagonist of the original work. I don't know what he thinks. If the IQ of the protagonist is like this, it does have a lot to do with it. Alas, anyway, if you like to read cool articles, it is best not to read it. It makes your mind numb after reading it, and the more you read it, the more uncomfortable it becomes. There are many blocking points, I have skipped them, and I have skipped them for you. These are very uncomfortable. I have to tell you.

I recommend a book by the Devouring fan "Swallowing the Starry Sky: My Comprehension Has No Limits", it's really good and highly recommended

It also depends on the performance of combat power. In Devouring, Tianzun is at most the Lord of the Universe. The Master of Hongmeng corresponds to the God of the Universe. They both create the universe. The God of the Universe is divided into stages one, two and three. Doesn't it correspond to the level of the Master of Hongmeng? Swallowing the Starry Sky - Star Transformation Not Entering the Flow Apprentice 1-4 Innate Apprentice 6-Limit Jindan Planet Level Golden Immortal World Lord Level Xuanxian Immortal Level Divine Man-Celestial God Venerable Level God King Lord of the Universe Tianzun Universe God Controller of Hongmeng

There isn't even a chapter table at the end of this TM. I don't know where to jump if I don't want to watch Stars Change.

Why not updated

It's completely invisible, no highlights, and very licking.

Chapter 449 said that if the requirements were met, he would be accepted as a registered disciple, but later on, he would become a direct disciple if the requirements were met. The writing is messed up.

Alas'~` What a waste Such a good subject matter. What I write can only be said to be consistent with the main line, and other random writing I don't make an outline myself. The comparison of realms, comparison of weapons, and the names of the protagonist and supporting characters are also messed up. There are all problems. It's okay for readers to have a comparison outline, but if they don't have it, they won't be able to understand it