The Poisonous Fairy Under One Person

It's well written, but the plot is a bit rushed.

This protagonist is too weak, I don't understand why he has to use bubbles. If your own high-quality innate energy is not properly developed, the poisonous mist will be corrosive, changeable, and secretive. If you have to explode bubbles and then rush in to hit them, then this ordinary Qi will do. Why do you need poison? Poison has always been a killer, and the protagonist is bound to be injured every time he fights without strong poison. It's not satisfactory, I hope it will be better in the future

After reading the latest comics, the old Tang sect is really powerful. It has a master assassin per capita, especially the one-eyed old sect leader who said: I charge you ten pieces of gold, it's not too much. It was a blast!

I just finished reading dozens of chapters of the manga. Tangmen is so handsome. The great master is an unparalleled scholar in the country.

Since it is an assassin, it should look like an assassin. It is a standard operation to use the phantom barrier to stab the back of the head with a hand; if you cannot get close, use a long-distance concealed weapon; for ambush battles, set up traps in advance; after you learn how to bite the pill, just go up to the phantom barrier and add pill bite. What is the use of bubbles? Apart from the fact that it may be very effective in group fights when you are under siege, it is not as effective as Bamboo Leaf Green in one-on-one situations. Moreover, the bubbles that fill the screen are problematic at first glance. Enemies with normal IQs should not be affected by it.

Come on, by the way, is there a female protagonist? Is it a single female protagonist?

I just read the part about being expelled from the Tang Sect and leaving the Tang Sect. It was really confusing and the logic was illogical. If this book wasn't one of the rare masterpieces written by one person, I would have given up the book. Author, let me tell you my understanding of that paragraph, and see if there is any problem: The people who killed the Wang family were found near Tangmen, and they asked Tangmen for help in the investigation, and the Tangmen sent the protagonist to cooperate with the company's investigation. The protagonist sees the body of the deceased Wang family and sees Shen Chong's ability. He accidentally reveals Shen Chong's ability and Wang Zhenqiu hears it. Wang Zhenqiu reported to the company that it was the protagonist who discovered Shen Chong and Shen Chong's abilities. When the company knew about it, the Wang family also knew about it. The deceased Wang family member wanted power so he borrowed his ability from Shen Chong, which was a personal act of colluding with Quan Xing. However, in order to cover up that someone in his family was colluding with Quan Xing, the Wang family poured dirty water on the protagonist, because the protagonist may know the truth about the Wang family's collusion with Quan Xing. The Wang family sent people to arrest the protagonist, Zhang Wang took action to protect the protagonist. The Tang clan was weak and was afraid that the Wang family would make things difficult for him, so he gave the protagonist two choices, and the protagonist chose to leave. That's right? Now let's talk about the questions: 1. Does the company completely believe the protagonist when he says Shen Chong's ability is like this? Then if the protagonist casually talks about Shen Chong's abilities, will he also be targeted by the Wang family? 2. The protagonist discovers Shen Chong and reveals Shen Chong's ability to kill people, but does not reveal that Shen Chong's ability requires others to take the initiative to meet him. So why does the Wang family judge that the protagonist is dangerous to the Wang family? 3. As a hero who cooperated with the company to find the murderer, the protagonist was randomly captured by the Wang family, but the company did not respond? 4. Even if the Wang family has ill intentions towards the Tang Clan, they don't know how much the protagonist knows. Will they go to war with the Tang Clan over a protagonist and the so-called possible taint of collusion with the whole sex? Please, a big family also has to weigh the pros and cons, and it is not so easy to target a big force 4. Even if I made a wrong judgment earlier, the Wang family does not suspect that the protagonist knows the truth, but suspects that the protagonist is colluding with Quan Xing. So what is the reason? Just because the protagonist discovered Shen Chongbin and casually mentioned his abilities is it considered to be in collusion with Quan Xing? So if people from the company find out, then it means that the company is colluding with Quan Xing? 5. The protagonist's so-called back-up plan is nothing more than the subsequent episode where Tang Miaoshan died while learning elixir. What kind of back-up plan is that? I just know the plot These are the things that I think are wrong with the logic so far. I hope the author can take a closer look and preferably change that part. Thank you. Nothing specific. The book is a good book, but the logic is not very mature.

This book is really much better than other weird books. Just say that the author has read the comics at least, unlike other comics that he just wrote without reading.

Have you not signed a contract after writing for so long? What is the author doing?

Nurture it! It should be possible, but I am afraid that I will die if I keep it. The author should work hard!

The plot is too fast. If I hadn't read the original work, I wouldn't be able to understand it. I hope the author can write more details.

Sure enough, he is really a poisonous fairy, and he became poisonous in the second chapter.

It has to be a little slower! It looks okay but there are too few!

What a strong mouth! After traveling through time, he used a condescending attitude and casually revealed his true insights, and then he got into trouble. Be a bit poisonous!

I have an idea, if two people who know how to use elixir bite on each other will be immune to it. After all, the situation of getting rid of alchemy and cultivating alchemy are the same. It's just that one is self-generated in the body and the other is invaded from outside the body.

How is the author's writing style? Poisonous? Is it Xiaobaiwen? Not poisonous is not just a collection of new articles.

The latest news is out, the three brothers are dead, comfortable.

What kind of poison are you using? Find a few divine novels and throw them in your opponent's face. Anyone who dares to read them will die!

Are you talking nonsense? Is it possible that there are so many moles in the company?

? ? ? Completed suddenly?

It's too short, with 220,000 words and 119 chapters. On average, one chapter is 1,800 words. Is it too far away from the standard chapter of 3,000 words?

Let me show you what the real Qimen Dunjia is. Zhuge Qing, the xx descendant of the Zhuge family, would you like to invite Uncle Zhuge Liang to come up~

For love? The author really generates electricity for love!

Aren't Chen Duo and the others trained since they were babies?

I haven't read the comics, but I'm a bit confused about leaving the Tang Sect. What happened? Why was I forced to leave? And it was the protagonist who took the initiative to say the murder. Why did he say it? I don't understand.

I said you are a eunuch, but you are really a eunuch

I didn't expect that someone would actually write a fanfic about Under One Person