The Myriad Heavens Begin with Transformation

The writing is okay, but it's a gender-bending story, so there's bound to be some arguments.

This book is excellent as an outline, but it's not very suitable as a published novel. There's too little character interaction, too few details, and the plot is extremely monotonous. It's readable, but doesn't the pacing feel too fast? Isn't it lacking in excitement? What will the author write next if they continue like this? I suggest the author use it as an outline and start writing from scratch.

When will the author release a new book? 🙂😁

If I were the protagonist, I wouldn't go back to Earth. At most, I would protect my family's good fortune. Would someone who has lived for twenty years or traveled through tens of millions of years still think about Earth?

Honestly, it's been written like a nanny story. Is the reason for her becoming stronger just to help the Nalan family?

Judging from the protagonist's development, author, you might as well just rename it "Wang Yuyan's Leveling Up Diary." All the protagonist does is fight monsters and level up; there's no main plot, no chance for other supporting characters to appear, and so little character interaction. He completes a world in just a few chapters. Is this some kind of mindless, machine-like protagonist?!

I still think it's unrealistic for the protagonist, a Taiyi Golden Immortal, to be so good to Yun Yun. It's like how it's unrealistic to be completely devoted to your pet in real life. Celestial Immortals and Taiyi Golden Immortals are on completely different levels; the difference is like the difference between the universe and Earth.

When will you release a new book? It's about transmigrating into a fantasy world, becoming a saintess, dominating the contemporary world, and eventually becoming an emperor or an immortal.

The protagonist is too saintly; the author can't write good characters. The best protagonist is one who won't bother you unless you offend them.

Guys, do you know any novels by the same author?