The Myriad Heavens Begin with Transformation

It's okay to write, but it's always noisy when it comes to transformation writing.

The author's book is very good as an outline, but it is not very qualified as a published novel. There are too few character interactions, few details, and the plot is very monotonous. You can watch it, but don't you think the pace is too fast? No passion? What else should I write after writing this? It is recommended that the author use it as an outline and then start writing from scratch.

When will the author release a new book? 🙂😁

If I were the protagonist, I would not return to Earth. I would at least ensure good luck for my family. After twenty years and tens of millions of years, would I still be thinking about Earth?

To be honest, it was written as a nanny. Is becoming strong just to help Nalan's family?

I see the protagonist's development along the way. Author, you might as well just change his name to Wang Yuyan and forget about upgrading. The protagonist only knows how to fight monsters and upgrade all the way. There is no main plot line, no chance for other supporting characters to appear. There is so little interaction between the characters and the whole world is completed in a few chapters. So is this a senseless machine protagonist? ? ! ! !

I still think it's unrealistic for the protagonist Taiyi Jinxian to be too nice to Yun Yun, just like it's unrealistic for you to show your heart and soul to your pet in real life. The comparison between Tianxian and Taiyi Jinxian is not the same latitude. The gap is bigger than the gap between the universe and the earth.

When will I open a new book, travel through fantasy and become a saint or something, then defeat the contemporary generation, and then become an emperor and an immortal?

The protagonist is too holy, and the author doesn't know how to write it. The best protagonist is that you don't offend me and I don't bother you.

Guys, do you have any novels like the author's?